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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: piya58

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Originally posted by: misty22

Awsmmm. Mind blowing... Gosh picnic ws awsm..nd ruku is shooo good.. I frst time lvd her in any story..joja trip is damm good... Nd dat challenge brought joja close.. Thnks to dat idiot sharif... Her heels.. Cnt stop laughing... I mean ja said ye lo ban gaya chappal.. Hehe... Dii plx pm me na.. Nd ya update asap.. Nd jo s accident.. Hp she ll be safe... Muah..


yes even i feeel that ruku is too good in my story😆i wish show mein b aise hi hote
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ya will update it soon sorry for late
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Originally posted by: anu012

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yes update is ready will update it soon and sorry for late
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chapter 8 :

Jodha and Jalal still walking on the jungle , jodha is very tired and hunger too
then she says

jalal i think we should nt go more deep in jungle because first its getting more dark and second we have no information about this jungle
what if in this jungle have wild animals like tiger

then jalal sit on the rock and he says

i guess ur right first we have to find out one place where we stay for tonight
then jodha saw one old cottage and she says

see there is one old cottage lets go there

before they went there some thing popped in jalal naughty mind
and he says

phele baar tumne itne intelligent wali baat kahi tumne
aao gale milo mujhe
he is about to hug her but jodha push him
and run away frm there

then jalal laugh on her 😆and he says


jodha wait for me

when they enter that cottage was not so big there is one old wooden bed one broken lamp
and some old utensils
when they reach middle of the cottage because of dust both start coughing then jalal says

i cant leave here , he is about to walk out but jodha hold his hand and she says

oh mr jalal muhammad we dont have other option
u have to stay here with me i mean we have to stay here

then jalal sit on the wooden bed and he says

upar tho mein souga niche tumei sona hai

then jodha put her hands on her waist and she says

seriously tumei sharam nahi ayege ek ladki ko niche sulate huwe

jalal nodded and he says

sharam kyu ayega if u want i can share the bed with u then he evilly smirk

then jodha says

koi zarurat nahi mere liye sirf itna kar do

ek fire jala doo
u know i feel scare of dark

then jalal stand up and he says

ok fine let me bring some stick from out side then jodha hold his hand
before he walk out and she says

dont leave me here alone please me also come along with u

then jalal cupped her face and he says

take my phone and open flashlight and sit here, i dont want to take u out side i know u have
so much pain in ur legs so sit here i will come just in one min promise

jodha nodded then jalal hand our his phone to her and walk out
when jodha open his phone she become shocked to see homescreen pic
here is jalal home screen pic


jodha and jalal dance competition pic , jodha was dam shocked at the same time she was so happy
why she is happy , she dont know
then jodha curiosity increase her heart says to check his gallery pic also then jodha go to gallery
she forgot she is sitting alone in the dark becoz of excitment
to see his gallery pics then

she saw jalal childhood pic in that gallery in that pic jalal was naked
jodha start laughing loudly😆

jodha to herself :

wow agar ye pic mere paas ajaye mein monster ko full year iss ke wajah se tease kar paoge

while jodha busy in laughing , she unnoticed jalal presence

then jalal come there with sticks , he was shocked why she is laughing like pyscho
first he thought kahi iss pe bhoot tho nahi agaya😲
then he come closer to her and he become shocked to see
jodha is laughing on his childhood pic then he yelled

jodha how dare u , u go through my personal pics then
jodha stand up and she says

jo bhi kaho agar ye pic college mein ruks , surya abdul ko dekhao itna maza ayega
then she start laughing loudly which pissed off jalal like a hell

She was about to run away from there
when Jalal caught her hand and pulled her towards him
She was shocked with the sudden move
as she landed on his chest with a jolt
She could not meet her eyes with jalal but at the moment
he was enjoying her shyness. He went near her ears and whispered

jodha give back my phone otherwise then he start kissing jodha cheeks and neck passionately
first jodha gets lost in that
when he come back to the reality
she push jalal and hand over his phone to him and she says

yee lo tumere phone khush , jalal start smiling

then jalal light a fire , he says

bed ek hai tho kisi ko niche sona padega tho mein niche soo jata hoo

then jodha give him light smile and she says

ache phele bada fight kar rahe thee bed ke liye ab ye meherbani kyu kahi mujhe se pyaar tho nahi hogaya
tumei

jalal become shocked with her confession , and he says

like seriously i love u haha what a joke
ab mein upar aur tum niche
good night mata rani

then jodha furiously gaze jalal and she says

ok fine i will sleep down what u think iam going to beg u and all
my foot mr jalal muhammad

jalal clutch his fist to control his anger then he lay down and turn his face on other side to ignore her angry gaze

then jodha see floor is not so clean so she decide she going to sleep in sitting position
on other side jalal is only pretending that he is sleeping but he is nt sleeping how can he sleep
where he know jodha is still wake up

after some time he turn his face to see whether jodha is sleeping or not
he found jodha is sleeping in sitting position
he feel bad for her
then jalal tip toe
go near to her , lift her in his arm without disturbing her sleep
then lay her on that wooden bed which before he is laying and take out his jacket
put it on her like blanket
and whole night he is just starring jodha , he didnt realize when he doze off

In the morning
Rays of sunlight hit on Jodha eyes waking her up , she found herself in that wooden bed
she was confuse how she come here then she scan whole room jalal was nt there

jodha to herself
so sweet of him hamesha aise jata tha hai wo nafrat karta hai par mujhe pain mein bilkul dekh nahi sakta yahi mouka hai
iss se sorry bolne ke liye hamesha mare help karta hai aaj ek sorry tho bol hi sakte ho , mein hamesha rude baat karte ho uss se , sorry bol ke
ache lagega uss ko


then she decide its better before jalal come she should change her close and wear some thing comfortable


after some time jalal comes there and he saw jodha is struggling to close her dress zip
jodha was so busy she unnoticed the presence of jalal
that scene was soo tempting to jalal eyes
jalal covered the distance and stood behind jodha
when jalal touch her bare back
jodha shiver with his sudden touch and she close her eyes at the moment

its like jalal is loosing his control
Jalal smilingly hugged her waist from behind.
Feeling his chest so close on her back
and his arms on her belly
jodha eyes was closed and she start breathing heavily
"Mmm." She slightly moaned to the pleasure she had being in his arms this way first time

Jalal slowly moves his mouth to her ears, And sensually whispers
jodha tum iss dress mein bohut beautiful lag rahe hoo like angel

At the same time, he gave her a little kiss behind her ear.
"Hmmm." She moaned again then with closed eyes she says

jalal ye kya kar rahe ho tum chodo mujhe

She was feeling very shy
she moved his arms from her belly
and ran away from there
Jalal cutely laughed at her response and jalal says to himself

jalal muhammad control bhai control kahi wo galat na samjhe le


on out side jodha was blushing so much , she could not belive what just happened between her and jalal
a moment ago

jodha to herself

hamein ho kya jata hai jab wo hamare kareeb ata hai , mujhe control karna hoga apne feeling pe
kahi wo hamein dusre ladkiyo ke tere na samjhe le

both fall in love with each other but nt ready to accept that

then after some time , he found her sitting on one rock as always she looking mesmerizing
jalal comes there and he says

where u lost then jodha smile and she says

nothing mujhe kuch kehna hai tumse

jalal look at her and he says

kaho na

then jodha says

thank u jalal

jalal was puzzled thank u for what then he says

thank you ? wo kis liye

then jodha stand up
she inhaled a deep breath and hold his hands

jalal felt heat rush through his body by his one touch , he feel so divine and she says

thank u iss liye u always help me aur mei hamesha tumei galat samjhe thi
ho i know jaise tum dekha ne ke koshish karte ho waise tum ho nahi
ur very nice person and u have golden heart😊


Hearing this jalal feels like ground got skip under his feet
he just stood on his spot like a statue without uttering

then jodha forwarded her hand for friendship
its another shock for him , he didnt responded her at the moment
she feel bad , jodha thought may be he dont want to be her friend
she is about to walk out but jalal immediately hugged her and he says

hum friendship pe haath nahi , gale lagte hai
first time jodha hugged her back , jalal feel so good
both hugged each other like there no tomorrow after some time jodha says
ab mujhe chodoge tum then jalal replied nahi

then jodha feel bit irritated and she says

ab hum friend hai ab tho mujhe tak mat karo please

then naughty jalal says

now we r friend i got official permission to irritaed u my jaan mere matlab jodha

jodha push jalal and she says

tum na impossible ho jalal

then jalal cutely hold his ears and he says

ok iam sorry

then jodha says

ok fine lets go we have to get out from this forest as soon as possible



after losing camp direction , jalal jodha was walking on the empty road
since 1 hour
in the hope they will
get lift from some one
while both walking
jodha was bit pissed off with jalal becoz he is not ready to take rest even for one sec

jodha was anger because also he stuck here becoz of him and she start murmuring

mein abhi kaha fas gaye

which is noticed by jalal and he says

kya tum apne pair thoda tez chaloge warna tum yahi raho mein tho jaa raha ho tum yaha chod ke
he is also frustrated become of no food and less sleep

then jodha turn her face to him and she says

aur kitna teez chalo ye sab tumere stupid challenge ke wajah se ho raha hai
challenege tumere aur uss idiot ke
bich mein tha fas mein gaye wow😡



Jalal pull her closer to him and he says
what is ur problem hay dont pissed me off where iam already hell irritated

he release her , put his microphone on his both ears and play the music very
loudly to ignore jodha voice

then he start walking fastly at the moment jalal leave jodha bit behind
jodha feeling difficulties to match his steps because she is dam tired and weak
becoz of no food and less sleep
but he try to match up his steps

then jodha yelled at jalal and she says
jalal mere liye thoda ruko u know i have pain in my legs but jalal
was nt listening

then suddenly one truck come on the another side of the road which jodha saw but jalal didnt
because he is too lost in his music
jodha call jalal name twice but he didnt listened her
she see that truck driver looks drunk then she start running toward jalal before that
truck hit jalal

jodha keep running fastly toward jalal and keep calling his name but its seems no use

then the truck is about to hit jalal , jodha comes to know this truck driver want to hit jalal
its looks trap for jalal
but before the driver hit jalal , jodha push jalal aside and that big truck
hit jodha instead of jalal very badly
after that jalal heart beat start beating fastly because he have no guts to see on the road he know
what just happened but we have to look at that side because again his jodha save his life by putting her life
in danger

jalal see jodha was laying lifelessly on the road ,jalal scream jodha
he run fastly toward her


jalal put jodha on his lap ,jalal see jodha try to say some thing
he put his hand on her mouth and he says

please dont waste ur energy here i will take u in the hospital aur tumei kuch
nahi hoga jodha I can't live without you after becoming my life u cant leave my life like
this

at the moment jodha was bleeding very badly , jalal try to stop the bleeding its seems no use
jodha start struggling for breathing which jalal can see , he hold jodha face and he says

Jodha please hang on there dont close ur eyes please if you go far
i will die please hang on for me

jalal see one car is coming from the lil far then he put jodha on the aside of the road then
he stand in the middle of the road
jalal decide this car have to stop if that car dont want to stop then this car have to pass from
his dead body
that car have to stop because jalal was nt ready to move from the road then
that car stop and
driver yelled to jalal

pagal ho kya maare car mile thi maarne ke liye
then jalal come to diver side window
he folded her hand first time in his life just for jodha

and he says

please hamein left de do mere friend ke halat bohut kharab hai please i request u please
first time in the life jalal muhammad the cool dude plead to some one

when that old man see jodha condition he says

oh my god chalo beta jaldi karo iss ke halat bohut kharab lag rahe hai mujhe

then old man help jalal to put jodha in the back seat and he drive the car very fast as possible as
fast after that


when they reach hospital , old man bring hospital stretcher
jalal make jodha lay on that with shaking hand then he yelled loudly
please call doctor

then one nurse comes there , she become shocked to see jodha condition
and she says

first we have to inform police station its seems car incident

jalal become dam anger and he says

what the hell wrong with u for u
patient life is more important ya inform police is important

then that nurse lower her head and she says with shaking voice

sir its hospital rule

then jalal grab nurse neck very tightly and he says

go hell with ur rule
agar iss ladki ko kuch bhi huwa na mei tum logo ke buree hospital ko jala duga

then main doctor comes there to handle the situation and he says

sir please calm down lets take her to emergency ward first
she already lost much blood

while they walking toward the emergency ward , jalal keep holding jodha hand

he says to himself

mein tumei jana nahi duga tum aise nahi jaa sakte

then jalal says to jodha

jodha u cant leave me like this
now iam so addicted to you,don't betray me
i love u madly
what is my mistake here

jodha is not that stand of mind to understand any thing , but head doctor can
feel that pain in his heart doctor promise to his self he will going to safe this
girl for this mad lover


when they reach
main doctor and some nurses take jodha to emergency room
leaving jalal out side

jalal was standing in front of emergency room
his heart was in pain
and he just praying to God to save her life because he couldnt live without her

old man go to jalal , put his hand on his shoulder and he says

beta uss ko kuch nahi hoga pyaar karne walo ko aaj tak kon alag kar paya hai

then jalal hugged that old man and burst out in to tears and he says

this happened just becoz of me I am breathing for her,
I am living everyday for her i cant live without her now

jalal never like to express his feeling to any one becoz he dont want to make
some one to show pity on him but today he broke his this rule also

old make jalal sit on hospital seat and he says

i give u guarantee god will save that girl for you
and you please dont loose ur hope ,
u sit here i will bring water for u

now jalal is waiting for doctor to come out with good news

Finally after four hours waiting doctor come out from emergency room,jalal and old man
go to doctor

doctor can see concern and fear on his face and he think how lucky jodha is
this man madly love jodha


jalal ask

how was jodha now ? at the moment his heart beating soo fast

doctor smile to jalal , he put his hand on jalal shoulder and he says

we successfully did our surgery , bleeding is also stop after hearing that
jalal jump in excitement and he hugged and kissed doctor cheek and he says

thank you so much for saving my life

doctor smile and he says

this is our duty and i must say she is really lucky

jalal ask

can i meet her ?

doctor says

after we shift her to the normal ward then u can meet her
now she need some rest , jalal nodded


when doctor left , jalal went near to the emergency room
Looks through the glass window and he see
jodha is sleeping peacefully
jalal try to holding back his tears while watching the condition of his love

here i want to write one song from bollywood to make this scene more emotional
this song is frm movie ( doo lafzo ki kahaani)


Aahatein kaisi yeh aahatein
Sunta hoon aaj kal aye dil bata
Dastakein dete hain dastakein
Kyun ajnabi se pal aye dil bata

Kuch toh hai jo neend aaye kam
Kuch toh hai jo aankhe hai nam
Kuch toh hai jo tu keh de toh
Haste haste marr jaaye hum


after half hour jodha shift to normal ward but jalal couldnt able to go there
because he cant see jodha in that condition but he want to be with her in this condition so
jalal try to gain a lot of guts and courage and go inside

when he enter , he saw jodha is still sleeping according to doctor she gain her conscious
back tomorrow because doctor give her heavy dose at the moment

then jalal go near to her , sit on the chair beside jodha bed and hold her hand tightly , kissed her forehead
and he says to unconscious jodha

jodha tumei aise risk nahi lena chahiye agar tumei kuch ho jata tho hum bhi maar hi jaate
hai tumei kone ke dar ne mujhe ehsas dila diya hai hum appse bohut mohobat karte hai
tumere liye hum pure duniya se fight kar sakte hai
tum sirf mere hoo sirf mere please jo galatiya mein ne past mein kiye tha mujhe maaf kar do

finally jalal confess he madly love jodha

Jalal stay on jodha side whole night not for even a minutes he leave her side , he didnt even drink water since they came to hospital
because of tiredness he dozeoff with a head on jodha hospital bed


In the morning
jodha really feel really pain whole over her body then she try to open her eyes then she gently open her eyes
then she try to sit where one nurse help her to sit on the bed properly then
jodha see jalal is sleeping his head is down on her hospital bed then jodha gently caress his hair

nurse smile when jodha did that and nurse says

ur really lucky mam appke boyfriend appse bohut love karta hai jab se app ko inno ne
hospital laya hai tab se ek min bhi iss ne aram nahi kiya hai na kuch kaya hai

jodha was amazed when nurse said that things about him some where
she like that , she was like to hugged him

then jodha put his hand on jalal head , try to wake him up whole
night he is sleeping in sitting position he must have pain in his back now
when jalal feel some one hand on his hair , he slowly open his eyes
when he found jodha is conscious without thinking for a sec he hugged jodha very tightly

jodha was shocked with the sudden hugged but first time she feel to hugged him back
then jodha hugged him back because he deserve that hugged whole night he take care of her

Both of them then grabbed each other in a tight hugged . Jalal wrapped his hands around her
It was a very happy and emotional moment for jalal because he thought he going to lost jodha forever

Jodha thinking at the moment

Jalal don't love me this much
Some time i feel scare for this much love
But

I promise you now I will not give this heart to anyone ,
I wish i could able to show you what is in my heart the person who took
my heart
I will give you my life but our love story is impossible u knw this really well becoz of our different culture
Please dont come more closer to me where i fall for u more after thinking this
She try to control her tears but her tears betray her and come out from corner of her
beautiful eyes but before jalal notice that she wipe her tears immediately

on other side jalal thinking

without any limits
My heart has loved u jodha
I have wished for you only
in my every prayer l
thank God every day
for meeting you

this heart has become mad for you now
now you have to control it
I see my world in you,
now you only become my world



jodha feel jalal is crying while hugging him

at the moment jodha was shocked
She couldn't able to believe that the person who leave no stone unturned to trouble her and irritated her but
that person is crying for her today

then jodha start caring his back to calm her down and she ask

jalal are you crying ?

jalal become alert as i said jalal never like
to express his feeling so easily
then try to control his emotion before he broke the hug , he fastly wipe his tears , broke the hug and he says

no iam not crying why should i cry

but jodha can clearly see his eyes become redden , he was crying but refuse to accept that
then jodha decide not to make him more embarrass about asking this again
she try to change the topic

then jodha ask worriedly and she says

jalal did you inform our teacher about all this ?

jalal nodded and he says

no because i dont want to spoil other student picnic because of us
all were was super happy because of this
i will make some excuse that u didnt feel good so
we come back to home let other student atleast enjoy their picnic
this camp is for three days i guess within three days u also recover then i drive u to ur home

at the moment jodha feel so touched , she always thought jalal is heartless and egoist person
but today he proof her wrong
he is not heartless but really selfless person

then jalal come to jodha , kissed the top of her head and he says

mein fresh up ho ke aata hoon before he walk out
jodha hold his hand and she says

wait jalal then jalal stop , turn his face to her
jodha ask him
to sit in the bed then without asking jalal sit
then jodha cupped his face ,bring his face more close to her face at the moment
jalal was shocked ,becoz jodha always try to run away from him
but today 😳before jalal utter any thing
she kissed his cheek and he says

thank you so much jalal for every thing u did for me

jalal was shocked with the sudden kissed but at the moment he was in seven sky first time
jodha kissed him
jalal was blushing like girl without uttering he walk out from there

jodha was shocked and confuse r jalal was blushing ? then she says to herself

kya monster blush kar raha tha hahaha pagal kahika😆



precap : misunderstanding and jodha engagement



Edited by Susan.Dsouza - 9 years ago
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unres di
amazing chappy di
loved it
pic is awesome
childhood pic is funny 🤣
love confession is nice
accident is unexpected
poor jalal
got scared like hell
she's fine finally
expressed his feelings
loved their feelings separately
poor jo
loves him but want to be away
jo kissed him
n he's in 😲
precap is interesting n shocking 😲
why misunderstandings
stupid misunderstandings
update soon di
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Kavya_P



unres di
amazing chappy di
loved it
pic is awesome
childhood pic is funny 🤣
love confession is nice
accident is unexpected
poor jalal
got scared like hell
she's fine finally
expressed his feelings
loved their feelings separately
poor jo
loves him but want to be away
jo kissed him
n he's in 😲
precap is interesting n shocking 😲
why misunderstandings
stupid misunderstandings
update soon di



Thanks for pm too di

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