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Guys wait lil wait why iam taking time becoz i want put some pics too
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chapter 5 :

Instead of going to khan mansion jalal went to club
at the moment he is really disturb and angry , why he is angry even he dont know
may be because of his mix feeling and his attraction toward jodha making him frustrating and angry

In bar club all dancer was busy in dancing ,when jalal enter all girls start drooling to jalal
after all he was dam handsome and one of the riches guys in india
ignoring all girls , he sit his fav place in the bar and ask bartender for the strong drink
Jalal start drinking to forgot
jodha and his dad why his dad because humanyun forcing jalal to join his business
where he is not interested ,
he drink until he lost his mind then jalal fav dancer come to jalal and start seducing him
by sitting on his lap and touching his face with her index finger
first time jalal didnt like it
where the same girl use to be source of entertainment for jalal before now things is changing ,
jalal was not ready to accept that change then he push that dancer and yelled top of his voice
and he says

u cheap dancer stay way for me , dont dare to touch me

All were shocked with jalal sudden reaction then one friend of mirza was present in the
same club ,he call mirza , tell every thing to him then mirza comes there
to handle the situation

A fully drunk Jalal was assisted to his car by Mirza
then mirza put jalal in back seat and he drive the car to the khan mansion
when they reach khan mansion , mirza call servant to open back door
because mirza dont want humanyun to see jalal in this condition because he is already dam anger on him
then mirza take jalal to his room and go to the kitchen , to bring lemon juice for him
on the way humanyun see mirza is going toward jalal room , he stop mirza and he says

agaya tumere nalayak bhai 😡

then mirza try to control his anger and he says

dad please dont say any thing to my bro ,i know why ur angry
if bhai is not interesting in ur business
then why ur forcing him ?

then humanyun yelled top of his voice and he says

mirza first u better stay out from this matter , second ur still young so u better dont tell me
what is right and what is wrong


mirza put lemon juice on table he angrily replied

thats why bhai and me dont like you because for u business is every thing , ur first priority
is ur business not ur family
mirza start defending jalal , misbehaving with humanyun


And there a tight slap landed on mirza face
It was none other than hamida
how dare u mirza to talk like this to ur dad she roared

before mirza say some thing in his defense , hamida ask him to go to his room right now
then
mirza stamps her foot and goes from there angrily

then humanyun says

ye na sab tumere lad aur pyaar ne mere dono bacho ko bigad ke raka hai
iam warning u hamida inn dono ko abhi se sambhalo kahi baat haath se na nikal jaye
then humanyun walk out from their angrily

hamida slowly sit on the ground then look up and she says

ya Allah mere ghar mein ek aise ladki ko mere bahu bana ke bej do jo
mere family ko phir se ek kar de
after saying that she burst out in to tears😭😭

on other side

Jodha was just turning and tossing in the bed in a attempt to catch the sleep
But sleep was far away from her doe eyes at the moment
she just remembering the whole day which she spend with jalal
while she remembering that she was just smiling , lost in her dream world
she was pretty nervous also for the competition where she have to dance in front of all
that too with jalal
then she hit her forehead gently and she says to herself

jodha soo jaa pagal kal competition hai na tumei fresh dekhna hai na
then she close her eye and try to sleep within 5 min she gets sleep


on next morning
Jalal coming down from the stairs
first time he wake up early in the morning
he ignoring his dad and all other
without breakfast he is about to walk out from the mansion

then humanyun stern voice stop jalal and he says

jalal breakfast kar ke jao

without uttering a word jalal seat on table then hamida
serve him a breakfast

humanyun is strict and he is not expressive but he really love his sons

after breakfast jalal went to college bit early even he dont understand why he came early
then jalal saw rukiya also came early today then he says

omg the biggest latecomer today come early today how its possible may iam dreaming

he burst out in to the laugh
then ruks punched jalal hardly on the chest
and angry rukiya says

jalal not funny , actually i came early because of final rehearsal

rukiya ask jalal did he done with final rehearsal then jalal says

final rehearsal like seriously mujhe uss ke zarurat nahi


then rukiya come to jalal , she says oh really dekhte hai phir then
she put her hand on jalal shoulder and move her hand in air , ruks says


jalal just imagine
in the performance time , ur in royal sherwani and that behen ji jodha in shalwar kameez
is it
its look like prince charming dancing with full time maid
then she start laughing on jodha

jalal also laugh but honestly he didnt like it at all but in front of ruks he act like
that was funny
then

jalal says

ok rukiya have to go in dressing room , to check whether my sherwani came yet ya not
i want to see fitting also
then jalal walk out from there before rukiya insult jodha more


jalal is in the dressing room , he wear his sherwani
and stand in front of mirror to check how he was looking
no doubt he is looking dam handsome in that ,he is really curious to know what jodha gonna wear
only one hour to go for performance now

Jalal come out from dressing room he see everyone was excited for their own performance
all are with their partner and talking about their performance expect him


All girls who were busy with their partner first , now busy in drooling jalal, after all he
looking dam handsome
in that sherwani
ignoring all girls jalal walk out from their

now only 10 mins is left for the performance

then jalal see moti is coming from opposite side , he go toward her
stop her and he says

hi moti
where is mata i mean jodha
next is our performance but she is no where to see
kahi wo bhaag tho nahi gaye ? after saying that he try to control his laugh


then furious moti replied

wo bhaage nahi hai piche dekh ko

then when jalal turn back
Jalal was stunned seeing her beauty
he become freeze at his place
at the moment
he was just staring at jodha , she was looking damn gorgeous and beautiful in that
pink and white saree
Jodha wear saree first time in her life


Jalal start walking toward her
when Jodha saw jalal coming towards her
in nervousness
her
palms started gripping her saree pallu tightly
but he was looking dam dashing in that meroon sherwani

when jalal reach
he can clearly see nervousness in her face
first Jalal hesitated to praise her but
today she deserve to be praise then he gain guts and he says to her that
she is looking very beautiful
in that saree

A shy blush rushed to her face as she heard monster complimenting her first time

then jalal pout and he ask

tumei ne mere taraf nahi ke kya mein acha nahi dekh raha

then jodha think to tease him
then she folded her arms and she says in full attitude

waise lag rahe ho jaise roz lagte ho monster

jodha try to control her laugh

then jalal pinned her against the wall ,later
she felt his hand on her waist , she try to move his hand but he tighen his grab and she says

kya kar rahe ho , jaane do hamein

jalal smirk evilly and he says

now iam leaving u because next is our performance
i will give u punishment later
without uttering she just nodded shocking
then both headed to the back stage


then anchor is about to announce next performance and she says
our next performance is ??? any guess
all student start shouting jodha and jalal name😃
then anchor says

u guys are absolutely correct next performance is jodha and jalal performance
the two most famous student in our college ,lets round applause them


Jalal brought jodha in center of stage like



Music began
both forgot about world they start dancing like real couple
(the song is meherban huwa from movie bang bang)

Dil ki maange thodi thi kam
Har duaa bhi thodi maddham



Tune kaandhe pe sar jhukaaya jab
Jaise dargah pe baandhe dhaage tab
Bina maange hi mill gaya hai sab



Meherbaan.. hua
Meherbaan hua Rab
Meherbaan.. hua
Meherbaan hua Rab




some student start mumuring about JOJA during performance

first girl : aww they r looking so cute na

Second girl : i wish they become real couple

third girl : its look like they made for each other


Haathon ko tere apne
Haathon mein le leti hoon
Ke taqdeerein apni saari padh loon



Aankhon mein tere chhupte
Armaan main dhoondhta hoon
Bas tu soche, aur poore main kar doon




Abhi abhi toh hum adhoore thhe
Poore ho gaye tere roobaroo
Oo.. ye bhi deekhe na
Kahaan main khatam, kahaan tu shuru

Aankhein teri (aankhein teri)
Girti hain jab (girti hain jab)
Ab to neendein aati hain tab

Humko lagta hai kuch dino se ab
Tu ibaadat hai, tu hi hai mazhab
Bewajah kaise, kyu, kahaan aur kab

Meherban hua hua
Meherban hua hua
Meherban.. hua
Meherban hua Rab
Meherban.. hua
Meherban hua Rab


The kool group shocked with jalal performance, only Abdul is happy while watching their performance
ruks was burning from inside
and she says to mirza and Abdul

whats wrong with jalal , see wo behen ji se kitna chipak ke dance kar raha hai
is it its shocking ?

and
anger mirza says

i cant take this any more iam going
then he walk out from their , ruks is also about to walk out before she walk out and she ask to abdul

wheather he is coming or not?

then Abdul says

no iam not coming i will watch my best friends performance till end

then anger ruks replied

as ur wish then she walk out from their angrily


on other side
Jodha jalal were finished with their performance
Curtains was already Closed
behind the curtains jodha and jalal were in same position
their eyes were close both were enjoying that moment

after some time
that moment was disturb by none other than ruks
ruks cough and she says

performance khatam hoaya hai guys aur tum jodha , besharmo ke tere jalal ko hug karna band karo phele
then both shockingly open their eyes , become separate with each other fastly

then
jodha become really embarrass then jodha try to walk out but
ruks stop her
she start insulting jodha in front of jalal and she says

mouka mila nahi chale apne asli roop dekhne aur middle class ladkiya aur kar bhi kya
sakte hai rich ladko ko pasane ke ilawa

then jodha make some excuse and walk out from their with Watering eye
which jalal noticed then
jalal become hell angry how dare ruks insult her then jalal grab rukiya hand very harshly and he says😡

rukiya whats wrong with u hay how dare u insult her

rukiya jerk jalal hand and she says

what wrong with u jalal , ur dancing with that cheap girl so closing

then jalal yelled top of his voice and he says

ruks better mind ur language that was just a performance and iam done with this conversation
jab tumere dimag sai track pe ho tab ake mujhe baat karna warna stay way from me
and dont dare to insult that girl again in front of me its warning
then he angrily walk out from there😡

rukiya was shocked , jalal fight with her just because of that behen ji
she also walk out from there angrily


then jalal start searching for jodha
he
found jodha was sitting alone in the canteen,Tears were rolling down from her cheeks

Jalal go toward her
jalal touch her shoulder
jodha shiver with his sudden touch , she turn and see jalal is there
then she turn her face on other side and wipe her tears
and act normal

and jalal says

jodha i will say sorry behalf of rukiya please dont mind
she is little crazy

jodha says

its ok iam fine

then she try to control her tears and act like she is fine

then jalal says
if ur fine then lets go ,
they gonna announce winner names , every participant should present their on the hall

jodha replied

u go , i wll come after some time


then jalal nodded before he walk out ,he stood back of her seat then suddenly kissed her left cheek and he says

jaldi ana

then he fastly run away from their before she react on that kissed


instead of getting angry first time she is laughing on his antics
she says to herself

mein tumei kabhi samjhe nahi pate ho ,wo hud bolta hai
wo mujhe naftrat karta hai
par mujhe rote huwa dekh jaise uss se ache nahi lagta ye nafrat tho
nahi hai lagta tho phir kya hai ?



then all student is present in one roof , whole student is dam nervous because
all judges and teacher are on the stage with the result
then one of the judged come in the middle and she ask

student any guesses ?

some student shout kirya and kiran from golden era college
some student shout sunny from GMF college
some student shout rahul and priya from garden college
but mostly student shout for jodha jalal from blue line college

then judge continue and she says
and the winner is jodha and jalal from blue line college
then whole blue line college student start shouting and saying yipeee
and start clapping for the jodha jalal

other college principal and student walk out from there after result
in the excitement unintentionally jodha and jalal hugged each other😲 its first hugged

when jalal come back to his sense ,Jalal hugged her tighten and he start talking
to his self in slow voice
Jodha keep this in your mind that you only belong to me even i hate u
but still ur only my

they hugged each other passionately like there is no tomorrow
forgetting about the world only listening each other heartbeats , when jodha come back to her sense
she broke the hugged and she says

sorry woh mein

then jalal come closer to her and he says


its ok jodha we r winner , partner ko ek hug tho banta tha na

after hearing that jodha start blushing😳
Jalal smiled seeing her blushing

proceed further sound disturbs there romantic moment
both turn their faces and see principal saying some thing

principal says

today iam really proud on my college students they are so talent
they are number one in studies
number one in dance
singing
sport etc

our college always win just because of u all

soo i decide as gift i will take my students to picnic trip next week
whole student become really happy after hearing that
then all student start thanking to the principal for this
awesome trip plan


moti come to jodha and jalal and she says

congrats u both

then jalal smiled and he just nodded

on other side rukiya was really upset because of jalal , her mood is really off while she was going toward canteen
some one call her name from behind then she turn and find one stranger is calling her name

then rukiya stop and she ask

who ru ? and how u know my name

that stranger says

actually that miss kadke is calling u in computer lab



(kiss kadke is computer teacher in the college)


rukiya was puzzled why she is calling her ?
without thinking much she went to computer lab
when she reach there , she found computer lab door was open .
she entry into the lab and call miss kadke name

then she feel some thing is fishy because lab is smelling badly
she start feeling suffocated , she is about to walk out

but before she does
suddenly some one come from the behind
hit rukiya head with steel rod so hardly she lost her conscious
before she could see his face


then same stranger person go to jalal and he says

excuse me jalal ur friend rukiya get unconscious on computer lab

jalal eyes become widely open without thinking much with abdul he run toward the
lab


precap : kool group and mata group become one group😃



Edited by Susan.Dsouza - 9 years ago
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cute update susan...sorry fr being late... 😕 so joja r coming closer to each other and sply jalal where he was worried and tensed when jo was in d elevator was just bang on... 😳 der kiss ufff... 😳 and der cute banter was lovely to read... 😛 precap seems interesting...will wait for ur update... 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
amazing chappi
JJ helping each other
trading & taunting
hahaha
mast
update asap
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Originally posted by: harshu27

cute update susan...sorry fr being late... 😕 so joja r coming closer to each other and sply jalal where he was worried and tensed when jo was in d elevator was just bang on... 😳 der kiss ufff... 😳 and der cute banter was lovely to read... 😛 precap seems interesting...will wait for ur update... 😛


its ok harshu and thank u😃
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yes its done have look
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Originally posted by: swetiii

amazing chappi
JJ helping each other
trading & taunting
hahaha
mast
update asap


yes its done have look
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yess its done have look
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Res will read it in the morning
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
precap was superb
thanks for pm
waiting for next update
update soon

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