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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Rajat_loverr

NICE PROLONG DEAR
UPDATE SOON




THANKS FOR PM DEAR
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice prologue aish
Update soon buddy
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
interesting prologue..
tnxx for the pm aishu..
waiting for the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved the way u wrote Shakespeare's verse n the song too matching the context
..would love to see how this story proceeds.. Update soon..
Edited by Rahiramesh - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
NICE PROLOGUE DEAR
UPDATE CHAPPY SOON
THNKS FOR PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Very nycc prologue dear...
Continue soon
Plzzz pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
Update
Update Update
Update Update Update Update aish
Soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Note: Really sorry friends for the delay. I have been experiencing some issues in mobile and gadgets. So,could not update and also its difficult to respond to all PMs. I have been reading stories silently.Hoping to reply to "NOT JUST A PASSIONATE AFFAIR" "THE SAGA CONTINUES" and a few more that i have been reading.SORRY ONCE AGAIN!

Guys LIKE THIS TO GET NOTIFIED. IM NOT GOING TO PM ALL FROM NOW ONWARDS AND THIS IS FOR ALL THE STORIES!!!

THIS SS IS A LITTLE DARKER SPECIALLY THIS CHAPTER, SO IF U R ANNOYED, I WILL TAKE IT DOWN. AND I DO NOT SUPPORT ANY KIND OF VIOLENCE AND HARASSMENT!!! I TRULY SALUTE THOSE WHO ARE GOING THROUGH OR HAVE GONE THROUGH SUCH INSTANCES. AND I HOPE THEY GET THE BEST OF WHAT THEY DESERVE.


THANKS EVERYONE!
Edited by aishg1698 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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UPDATE
CHAPTER-1

"Yes, coming..." A preoccupied lonely housewife answered to the continuously ringing door bell.

The clock showed a quarter past seven, which means her husband is home. A smile crept upon her face as she opened the door to him.

Dev- A 30 year old business man. Dev and Pari were married for 3 years now. It was a seeing+arranged marriage if not love. Pari respected him. Had not he come in her life, she would have never been able to get a MBA degree and now a job in the bank. Everything was picture perfect. Dev was every other girl's dream husband.

...

A month after joining the bank

"For what on earth are you reacting this much?" Questioned the wife to her husband.

"You went for a coffee with that Ramesh???" Snapped back DEV. Yes, Dev the same person who used to trust Paridhi blindly.

It all started with the job. Her success, her enjoyment initially bought happiness home but slowly the whole scenario turned into a session of CBI investigations by Dev.

He would question her daily about where she went, what she did... Even she would enthusiastically explain him every bit of the day but lately she learned he did not like much of it. He assumed more than listening and doubted more than asking.

Pari refrained from telling him about the day in full detail. She would just answer the typical professional questions and doubt but never stirred the topics of jokes with workers and clients.

This irked Dev further more. He had now started to raise his voice. Pari tolerated all this for the sake of their relationship. Which she thought was the best in the world. Probably she was living a dupe world or he was fake!

..

Honeymoon 2:The second chance

"Everything will be fine" assured her friend Ankita.

"Hmm.Hope so that this Honeymoon 2 plan works" Pari smiled weakly at her.

...

A couple of weeks later, the duo landed in the lap of Himalayas to ease their breaking relationship.

And guess what! It worked magically. The more she was away from Job and people , more calm he was...and the merrier the living for her.

But alas had she known...one evening, one boat ride would change her life forever.

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PS: Sorry for delay!

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Posted: 9 years ago
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unres dear
nice start but littel sad
Feel bad for both 😕

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