New os...SUDDEN GUEST... - Page 5

Originally posted by: RSlovesJA

awesome os laksh...tks for adding my name aswell..love u loads...take care of u & ur family...

Originally posted by: erning_w

OMG Laksh.. 👏👏

This is superb OS yaar

yes you're right.. all the authors who's mentioned by you is busy now. Except Harshu 😆 she always had time for this lovely forums 😉

Keep it up dear

And please update for The Last Mistake too 😃

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh

That was a very different concept but I liked it
Enjoyed thoroughly😃
All my fav writers were asked for updates by Jalal himself, so guys please update
Thanks Laksh for this different OS..

Originally posted by: swriter

Ohhh u have little princess great
Congrats di
And ditya nice name di.
👏

Originally posted by: Akdhalover6898

DI YOU MAKE ME SPEECHLESS

SUCH A IND BLOWING, FANTASTIC OS ⭐️⭐️⭐️

OMG...OMG...OMG...THIS IS MY REACTION WHEN I KNOW JALAL CAME TO YOUR HOME

AND HE READ DAILY UPDATES...HOW SWEET OF HIM😳

AND BY SEEING JALAL AS SUDDEN GUEST MY REACTION ALSO SAME AS YOURS...YOU ONLY GET WEEK BUT AT THE TIME I MUST GET FAINTED😆

AND HE IS RIGHT NOW A DAYS ALL ARE BUSY AND IRREGULAR IN FORUM EXCEPT OUR SWEETIE HARSU

HARSU'S PICS WERE REALLY AMAZING AND I CAN'T RESIST MY SELF BY OGLING JALA'S PIC POSTED BY HARSU...AS HE SAID HE LOOK MORE HANDSOME AND IRRESISTIBLE IN THOSE PICS😳😉

HALA DI, PAYAL DI, NDI DI, AVIKA DI , SHERRY SORU, ALL ARE JUST GREAT AND MIND BLOWING WRITERS AND MY INSPIRATION👏

I KNOW ITS NOT EASY TO CONTROL YOUR EMOTIONS IF YOUR CRUSH IS IN FRONT OF YOU BUT HATS OFF YOU YOU CONTROL YOUR SELF BY KISSING HIM...I KNOW ANY ONE CAN MELT IN HIS CHARM, IN HIS BROWN ORBS, HIS MASCULINE BODY, HIS SILKY HAIRS...

BUT YOU HAVE TO KISS HIM ON HIS HAND ETNA TO CHALTA HAI...😉😛

I WANT TO GIVE YOU A BIG AND TIGHT HUG 🤗🤗TO FEEL JALA'S HUG...OMG HOW ITS FEELS NA😳

WOW HE HAS TATTOO...AMAZING 😃

HE IS SO NICE HE KISS DITYA'S FOREHEAD AND ADMIRE HER😳...NOW I'M JEALOUS OF DITYA...I HOPE I AM TOO LITTLE AS DITYA SO I TOO GET KISS😉

I MUST SAY DITYA IS SO LOVELY AND DON'T TROUBLE YOU AND WOW SHE GIVES YOU SMILE WHEN YOU SCOLD HER HOW SWEET OF HER😃

THANK YOU SO MUCH DI FOR SUCH A LOVELY OS

AND THANK YOU FOR PM

LOVE YOU DI❤️

Originally posted by: Akdhalover6898

HERE IS ONE BEAUTIFUL SONG FOR JALAL TO SHOW ALL IF FANS LOVE TOWARDS HIM😃

follow karoon twitter pe

tag karoon facebook pe

tere quiz mein google ko beat kar diya

(I follow you on Twitter

I tag you on Facebook,

I have beaten Google on your quiz..)

mirror mein tu dikhta hai

neend mein tu Tikta hai

tere madness ne mujhe dheeTh kar diya

(I see you in the mirror,

You are there in my sleep,

your madness has made me insolent.)

tu hai sodde ke botal

main banTa tera

main to handle karoon

har TanTa tera

mere dil ke mobile ka tu unlimited plan ho gaya

(you are a soda bottle

and I am your cap,

I'll handle every problem

related to you..

you have become the unlimited plan of my heart's mobile..)

main tera haaye re jabra

hoye re jabra fan ho gaya

main tera haaye re jabra

hoye re jabra fan ho gaya

o tujhe dekhte hi dil mein Dhan Te nan ho gaya

(I've become

your big, crazy fan.

as soon as I saw you,

there was a music in my heart..)

maine tujhpe, kari Ph.D.

mera luck mera haq, tu hi only wajah

main to sachchi, ho jaaun touchy

koi tere jo baare mein bole bura

(I've done a Ph.D. on you

you are my luck, my right, my only reason (to live).

I really get touchy

if someone talks bad things about you.)

tera yaar haaye

mujhko bukhar haaye

jaane saari colony main

tere liye insane ho gaya

(I have your fever,

O dear..

The entire colony knows

that I have gone insane for you..)

main tera haaye re jabra

hoye re jabra fan ho gaya

O tujhe dekhte hi dil mein dhan te nan ho gaya

main tera haaye re jabra

hoye re jabra fan ho gaya

style tera phaTTe hai

tujhpe khele saTTe hain

tujhse hi wifi connection juDaa

(your style is superb,

I have betted on you,

I'm connected to you via wi-fi.)

tere tak jo aati hain

linein saari Taapi hain

koi kitna bhi roke, main to na ruka

tune jo jo kaha, maine ditto kiya

(all the lines that come to you

I have hacked into them,

however much someone tried to stop me, I didn't stop.

whatever you said, I did the same.)

kabhi jeb mein rakha

kabhi dil pe liya

teri aankhon ki garmi mein

sar se, per tak, Tan ho gaya

(kept you in the pocket sometimes

and kept you in my heart sometimes.

in the heat of your eyes,

I got tanned from head to toe.)

main tera

oh tera, oh tera

fan ho gaya..

main tera haaye re jabra

hoye re jabra fan ho gaya

o tujhe dekhte hi dil mein Dhan Te nan ho gaya

main tera haaye re jabra

hoye re jabra fan ho gaya

LOVE YOU JALAL (RAJAT)❤️

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Amazing os Akka

U even added my name that too first in ur little sisters list

Love you a lot Akka

Everything is awesome

Thanks for pm Akka

Perfect title

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

Sorry for the late reply Akka

Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal

Hiii dii 🤗 how's u and how's our cutie pie meenu?
Coming to update...
It's just AMAZING ...dare u call it bakwas..
Woww jalal came to meet u 😉 how dreamy
awww he asked about me too...hayyee Allah!! I m flat dead 😆
Thanku for such a wonderful update didu..
I wish all the writers read ur os and update their stories asap..

Originally posted by: sorathsheikh

Awesome os sis 😃
Awieee How's Meenu 😳 Give her a big hug from my side 🤗

Awesome update sis 😃
Awieee jallu bhai came into your house to meet you 😲

He's reads daily updates 😃 and now he's missing stories 😃

Awwwieee he took my name 😲 😃