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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guys!!
M back with an os
It is mainly based on jodha
So plzz don't kill me🤣
So here it is
Os-Be strong
In hospital
A girl was shouting
She was jodha
Jo- doctor uhh have to save him
He is my husband n she starts crying
Doctor-listen miss jodha
We have tried our best to save him
But due to intake of excessive alcohol his most of the body parts are damanged
We have warned him also but he did no listen
It's too late
Jo fall on her knees
N beg the doctor to save him
Doctor-he is dead miss jodha
Your husband Mr.jalal khan is dead
Jo-nooo
Jo came out of the hospital
She was walking on the road
Jo-why god ? Why?
Why you snatched all my happiness from me?
We were happily married
But 6 months before everything got disturbed
His own mother maham had betrayed jalal just because he is her step son
She got his signature on the papers of the property n the property is now in the name of adham n maham
He did not had any problem when his property had been snatched from him but BETRAYAL CAN DESTROY A MAN
N same happened with him
He started drinking alcohol to avoid the pain
I have told him n stopped him but he was walking on a path from which no one can bring him back
N today I lost everything
I am alone
Why god?why?
Then suddenly a car was going to hit her but some women came n saved her
She fainted
Woman-Let's take her to hospital
Then they take her
Jodha open her eyes n saw the doctor
Doctor- congratulation miss ...
Uhh are 1 month pregnant
Jodha was crying
The tears were of happiness or sadness?
She also don't know
One side the symbol of their love is coming n other side his love is not there to share this happiness with het
Suddenly her Mobile rang
Jo-yaa moti
What???
Moti-yaa jodha
There was bom in The flight in which Maham Khan n adham khan were traveling
They r no more
Jo cuts the call
The killer of my husband have been punished by god
8 yrs later
A girl was running in a big mansion
Girl- mumma mumma
A woman turned ..she was jodha
Jodha has now established her own company j&j
Jo-yes pari
Pa-mumma I want to give uhh something
Jo-what sweetheart?
Pari then forward her something
Jodha open it n it was a diary
Jo-awww
Pari-mumma this will be your personal diary ..you can write anything in it
Jo kissed her cheeks
Jo- thank uhh beta
Chlo let's sleep
Then Jo makes pari sleep
She opens the diary
She starts writing

Hey god!!
How r uhh? N my jalal?
Hope he is fine
My life was normal...I was an orphan n was living in an orphanage
One day jalal came to distribute sweets
He saw me n fall in love with me n same happened with me
We got married n were living happily
But maham n her son destroyed everything
But uhh have punished them
A woman life is not so easy
She has to face many difficulties in her life
She has to listen you r a sister,daughter, wife,mother
But no one say to her BE YOURSELF
I thought how I will take care of my daughter
But someone have rightly said
If A woman can be be laxmi then she can also be KAALI
If a woman wants then she can conquer the whole world
The one who think that woman are only made for kitchen r just wrong...
I have struggled for my daughter
Pari
Uhh know why her name is pari
Because she has came into my life just like an angel only
If she was not there god knows what would happened to me
Jalal
Pari is like uhh only
Her face,her behavior, her smile
They way you used to wipe my years she also do the same
I know that uhh r seeing us but don't worry
In Next life I will not leave you
I will see how uhh will leave me
Luv uhh
TO ALL THE WOMAN N GIRLS
JUST BE YOURSELF... N DON'T GIVE UP ON ANY SITUATION.. JUST REMAIN STRONG
Diary 's page end
Then she goes n hug pari n sleep
End
I know many people r finding me ...but m a little girl
Plzz don't be angry
Luv u all

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Posted: 9 years ago
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wonderful tannu yet emotional ...
Actually yesterday I was reading some story like this only in which husband died living behind his shattered pregnant wife... she want to die but she have to live for their love symbol so she did that only... and story ends up with very emotional turn where daughter gets married and left her mother's house after she grown up leaving her mother alone ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome os
women shouldn't be underestimated
maham n adham got what they deserved
poor jo
jalal should live
title is perfect
thanks for pm Tanya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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It's awesome update. .simple words with great meaning. ..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey dear it was quite nice
Jalal is dead but b4 her death she got two news which made her much more stronger
Yes a woman should never change for anyone
She should be strong always
Wonderful one
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mavaddat

wonderful tannu yet emotional ...
Actually yesterday I was reading some story like this only in which husband died living behind his shattered pregnant wife... she want to die but she have to live for their love symbol so she did that only... and story ends up with very emotional turn where daughter gets married and left her mother's house after she grown up leaving her mother alone ...

Thanks di
First I have thought that jalal will betray Jo
But then I dropped this idea as how I can make jalal so bad
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb nd emotional os dear...
Thxxxc 4r pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was a sort of will power n women empowerment...
I really liked it..
Her hubby died after facing a hard betrayal...she was devastated but she consoled and composed herself for the sake of her baby..
She established her own company and gave her daughter everything she deserves..
Thanku for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful os dear
Jo kept their love alive
poor Jalal
was not able to bear the betrayl
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Posted: 9 years ago
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That was really warm and heart-touching update... 😊
Loved the Women Power you tried to enlighten... ā¤ļø

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