NOVEL~*Hiding behind a Stranger*~ Thread 3- CHAPTERS 5 & 6 - Page 107

Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

@Lashy di, Loved the pic in the chappy...❤️

@Kal di, excellent work! 👏

Originally posted by: alffim

Dear Kalgi!
As it is amazing!!! You made very nice pic! The ring has such shine!
Incidentally 😊, the feature of topaz is that it not only "...has an incredible shine in the light, but the stones having yellow or brown color, have shine and under artificial lighting and not only on the sun..."

Originally posted by: lashy

Thanks darling😳

@ Harshu... I agree you're the JA wikipedia...😉and as for review, don't worry take your time

@ Catty di... yeah I'm glad you love HEERA... that's enough for me..😆

Originally posted by: Kalgi22

Whatever I care you don't care and don't reply... but whatever I don't care you care and reply🤔

Originally posted by: harshu27

thnk u... 😉 😆 I update do chk on pg 123... 😃

Originally posted by: cutecc753

sorry di 4 late comment. I had xm nd my if butn were not working. U gave me d biggest shock by making heera partially blind. Very excited to know how u build d connection between heera nd Akbar

Originally posted by: piya58

Oh sorry late rply
Chapter 5
heera saved by the stranger and she said to that she half blind
Akbar khan rrmains it
Chapter 6
Heera notiefs tht one more puzzles and finds hope
he thinking about heera her face and words
Thanku
Update nxt

Originally posted by: paridhiloveu

Wowww wow

I can't believe u r back omg !!!!!😲 yaay

That too with a beautiful novel .

Thank you thank you so much di u know love ur stories ur previous one were awesome . They were my one of the first akdha ff which I read when I was new .

Sorry for being late here but will start reading this novel today itself.

Chapter 4:

I've read it again and here are my comments:

Lashy di,fabulous chapter it is👏

'Oh! Are you sure?' kaka asked again, a question he regretted straightaway - because all he got in response, was a long glare.

Poor Ratan Kaka😆,I can imagine his plight of being sandwiched between his people like Bajarang & Bindiya and the impassive stranger who seemed to be only source of help.

Stranger sahib shocked me with his 4 dams' demand for water.Was wondering how can our HERO behave like this,for which,now I know the answer😳

'You are being very mean...'

Bindiya..Bindiya..she is really one impatient girl😆

'I hope you realise that even Amrit would have cost us less, Sahib!' the heiress stated, using sarcasm to express her disapproval.

'Of course, it would Sahiba! Because water is more precious than nectar...'

I loved her wit and his retort too😃

If he wasn't certain then, he was now - she might be sitting in a simple palanquin and donning plain glass bangles, but the grace with which she held her palm out was proof enough that this lady was no commoner.

From a vague sighting of his riding shoe - was its style. This traveller was a Mughal. And an avid rider too.

Our Heera and stranger,both are quite wise and quick-witted😉.Love them and you,their creator❤️

Heera,the healer is admirable and I love the way you show mutual concern and respect,Heera and her people have for each other.Like,how she tends them with utmost care as well as empathy and their refusal to accept water meant for Baisa,even in such a deteriorating condition. I don't feel it's just a sense of responsibility,its more than that.

'We should be up on our feet in 4 or 5 hours, baisa...'

Waiting until they were out of earshot, she divulged the truth to her chief-maid 'Inform Ratan kakasa that we are going to be here for at least 4 or 5 days...'

Again,it shows what I expressed above😊

' watching how the maid lifted the delicate ends of her skirt and began making her cautious way around the trunks and chests, Heera promptly added 'And please make haste... don't bother about the embroideries of my attire...'

How can you think of such little details!These things make the narration natural and beautiful.⭐️

The 16 year old heiress who'd always enjoyed an elegant lifestyle in a splendid haveli was now forcibly exiled into an unused guest house of a tiny town. That too, after having lost all her loved ones. And the fact that the gallant young lady would not complain about any of it, was what stung him most.

So true.I can understand Ratan Kaka's feeling

Liked Gauri and Bajrang too.Though both had different opinions on leaving their Baisa alone,concern for Heera is common👍🏼

You made me fall in love with not only leads but also the supporting characters❤️

What to say about the next part?Heera's emotional turmoil really moved me😭.It's difficult for me to pick up few lines as every line of her's had a great impact.You are an amazing writer,di👏👏

From her drowning into the water to the end of this chapter was gripping.Though it is expected that the stranger would come to her rescue,his indifferent attitude was definitely unexpected😲

Under the faint rays of the moonlight and behind the gleam of water droplets, there could be no other face that looked more refined. Set against skin that was fairer than fair, the bronzed locks that fell above his shoulders put even the richest shades of brown to shame. With features so sharp and eyes so piercing, she doubted if the man belonged to this country at all. Yes, he was a Mughal, but a Mughal from another land. Her mind went back to the various paintings and books on culture that she owned - trying to find a match 'Not a Mongol. Or a Turk...' she supposed 'Persia? Yes that's it...he's Persian!'

Wow!I'm speechlessWhat a description👏

'Are you blind, or are you plain bizarre?'

He'd finally questioned, dispelling the oddest spell of silence he knew. It was a question he was meant to ask a few moments ago, but for some strange reason 'Hazel' were the first words that came to his mind. Hazel - the colour of her eyes. Blacks, he'd seen. Blues and greens he'd seen. Even browns he'd seen. But such an exquisite tint of hazel, he had not.

Again

Did he actually suspect her to be the kind of lady, who went around groping strangers for no apparent reason otherwise?

Ha..ha..I thought the same while reading for the first time,what does he think of Heera?😆

Phew..I edited it many times and hope it makes some sense😆

Finally,a big hug🤗 and 👏👏 to you for this chapter.Comments on next two chapters,later😳