AKDHA SS : JUST FOR YOU.........UPDATED on pg. 33

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Hemaxi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

Originally posted by: 1357raksha
cute story daer...
im a new reader to ur story...
poor jodha nd jalal r apart becoz of stupid ruks...
wow moti is good friend cleared everything to jalal...
my god jalal presents for jodha is just wonderful...
update soon...
nd pm me to...

Thanks dear for liking
I will

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Kavya

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: Rajat_loverr

Yup, of course sweet heart 😳

so we all will get awesome updates on 31st😉

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Hemaxi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: Kavya_P

so we all will get awesome updates on 31st😉

Yup dear
Definitely

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Tulishikha Biswas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Superb starting
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Tulishikha Biswas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#115

Part3
Awesome blossom update
Love it
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Edited by Dark-Beauty - 9 years ago

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Hemaxi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

Originally posted by: Dark-Beauty
Part3
Awesome blossom update
Love it
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Thanks for liking dear 😳

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Tulishikha Biswas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#117

Part4
Awesome blossom update
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Brilliant work
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Tulishikha Biswas

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Posted: 9 years ago

#118

Part2
Super duper update
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Hemaxi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#119

HEY GUYS I AM COME BACK WITH MY LAST SHOT ...HOPE YOU LIKE IT

AND THIS LAST PART IS DEDICAT TO MY BESTIE (Akdhalover6898)...

AND YA DEDICAT TO Kavya_p who are waited for it...so this is my last shot for both of you guys...

SHOT 5 ( last )

Jalal reach to the party Hall and check out the preparation...
Arrange the all the things like Jodha's choice from venue to vine all are Jodha's choice...

After all today his beloved bestie Cum secret love (silly girl) become his life partner...
He is so happy so excited...

RUK : (come from behind the piller and back hug to jalal) ohhh. Jaan where are you from morning... I miss you so Much..

JALAL : nothing baby I here only... But little busy in arrangement...

RUK : so finally you are going to propose me today..?

JALAL : (smirk... Proposed? To you?? Better than that I will jump on well) ya baby of course...

RUK : ohhh. You so cute dear...

JALAL : OK plz now go to you room and get ready... When all guests are coming I will call you... Ok

RUK : ( goes to her room)

JALAL : (secretly follow the RUK and as she entered in room he locked the room from out side... (badi aae propos wali...)

Jalal as he come out from the steps he see the lady... No... The Princes coming from the entry door looking not less than any fairy... He saw her hair reach to the waist... He saw the necklace beautifully hang on her neck... He saw her dress in which see look hot, sexy, cute, innocent all at same time... And her delicate hand where she wear ring and bracelet which he put in the gift box with full of love suits her a lot... He saw her innocent eye which say to him that how much she love him... He saw her lips which carved for being with his lips take the breath away from jalal's heart...

JODHU ... Ascap from jalal's mouth... But little bit loud... So Jodha heared it and turned towards him...

JODHA : moti what is that... Moti.. .. what jalal will do here??

MOTI : wo... Jodha... Wo... Jalal and... Wo...

As moti completed her sentence jalal Come near to Jodha and pull her towards him from waist...

Jodha hiss in pain so jalal leave her
And say

JALAL : happy birthday Jodhu... (hug her)...

JODHA : ( feel relief after so many time she felt like... She is in heaven... She only carved for this hug over a long ago... She close her eyes to feel his warmness... And hug him back...
But suddenly brake the hug and look Jalal in disbelief... How his gf talk to her and all that) why jalal... Why...
JALAL : (put his finger on her lips to stop her to further saying) shuuuiuu... My silly girl.. How much you talk... Kisi ko bolne ka moka hi nahi de ti...come with me...

(take her to near the mirror which place in hall's wall, where no one can see them) (he take her to there and stand her in front of mirror and back hug her... As song play...)

Itni mohabbat karo na
Main doob na jaun kahi
Vaapas kinare pe aana
Main bhool na jaun kahi

(And jalal see in her eyes very romantically from mirror )

Dekha jabse chehra tera
Main toh hafton se soya nahi

(as Jodha struggle to free her self from her mainly strong hug... And turn towards him... But he again hug her from front )

Bol do na zara
Dil mein jo hai chipa
Main kisi se kahunga nahi
Main kisi se kahunga nahi

(as he landed towards her rosy lips... Very close... But she stop him)

Mujhe neend aati nahi hai akele
Khwabon mein aaya karo

(and give a little push him so he lost his balance and almost near to fall down on a ground... But at right time Jodha hold his mainly shoulder to give support to him... After getting back his balance jalal look Jodha very intensely... They both share a intens eyelock)

Nahi chal sakunga tumhare bina main
Mera tum sahaara bano

( he cupped her face very gently with out breaking eye lock)

Ik tumhein chahne ke alaawa
Aur kuch humse hoga nahi

(he again proceed towards Jodha's rosy lips... But this time he was not stopped by Jodha... She stand numb in front of him... And the lips of both of them touch to each other...and they feel compete today... Which they miss for the long time ago... They had a very passionate kiss... Jalal pulled Jodha towards him by her waist to deepen the kiss... And it's quite surprising for jalal that Jodha give him same passionate kiss back..with full intense... . And stretch her hand around his shoulder to deepen the kiss... )

Bol do na zara
Dil mein jo hai chipa
Main kisi se kahunga nahi
Main kisi se kahunga nahi

(jalal break the kiss... And look in Jodha 's doe shaped eyes... And take her hand in his hand pull her with him in balcony of the hall) (where the rain is coming)

(He take to her in rain and back hug her)

Humari kami tumko mehsoos hogi
Bheega dengi jab baarishe
Main bhar karke laya hoon
Ankhon mein apni
Adhoori si kuch khwahishe

(Jodha turns towards him and quietly say to him, "jalal jane do Mujhe meri dress khabar ho jaye gi...and try to go... )

(but jalal being jalal again hold her hand... So immediately she stop her place.. Her back in front of jalal... So jalal see her bare back which completely wet by rain water... He softly put her fingers on her bare back... Ahhh... Little moan ascap from Jodha's mouth.. For the sudden touch... And turns towards jalal...)

Rooh se chaahne wale aashiq
Baatein jismo ki karte nahi

( jalal pulled her towards him by waist and hold her very possessively by her waist... And hold her one hand by his another hand... And Jodha put her hand on hus shoulder...)

(they dance like a real Prince and Princess... And completely lost in eachother... Not notice that the all peoples there in party enjoyed beautiful dance of them...)

Bol do na zara
Dil mein jo hai chipa
Main kisi se kahunga nahi

Bol do na zara
Dil mein jo hai chipa
Main kisi se kahunga nahi
Main kisi se kahunga nahi

(all clap... And they are come from their dream land... And composed them self)
(suddenly jalal hold Jodha 's hand and drag her to the room... To change their clothes...)

AFTER SOMETIME,
IN Room...

(jalal come from bathroom change in a new shirt and pant looking like a prince... And noticed Jodha who dry her hair in front of mirror...)

JALAL : so... Jodhu... You accept my proposal...? (with nervous Cum existing tone)

JODHA : hmmm. What you think...? What is my answer?? (in teasing tone

JALAL : hmm. I don't know... But I will syre that if you say no to me then... (stop in between and smirk...)

JODHA : then... Then what jalal... ( continue her teasing session...) what you will do...?

JALAL : (stand up from bed having a nouty smile on his lips... Goes near to Jodha... And back hug her... .) then I will not allow to go from my hold... For a whole life... ( and leaneded his chin on Jodha 's shoulder and see in her doe shaped eyre through the mirror...)

JODHA : (smile a little... Due to the nervousness and shyness... She look to the ground...) but how can you come here...? How can you know that me and moti come here...?

JALAL : ( take a deep breath) (turn Jodha towards him so she directly see him..) hey...i am the only one who organised this party... Only for you silly girl... (hug her) what you think... Ha... Ki... Tum Muje social media a par block kardo gi to mai tumhein dhunnd nahi paunga??? Ha... I am directly connected to your heart... Dammit how can we apart from each other...? How... Ha... Tell me...

JODHA : but your gf??

JALAL : (smirk... With sadness and happiness) (and told all truth to jodha)

JODHA : (put her hand on jalal's mouth.. To stop him to further saying... And hug him...) sorry jalal... I am so sorry... I am a such a fool... How can I believe this stupid girl... And how can I believe on her that easy... I so sorry... My... Lo...

JALAL : what lo...jodha plz complete your sentence... Plz jodhu tell me those magic word... Which I carved for whole 5 year... Plz my love... Plz...

JODHA : (shyly) hmmm. Wo...I...LOVE...YOU...JALAL...

JALAL : finally... My silly girl confess her feeling... I LOVE YOU TOO... Jodhu... (hug her)
BTW Jodha why you don't contact me after rukaiya 's call... Means why you don't call me to ask my this type of behaviour...? Why jodhu...?

JODHA : ONLY FOR YOU... Jalal... ONLY FOR YOU... I did it because I don't want to come between you and you gf... So I decided to cut all relation with you... I so... (jalal put his hand on her mouth to stop her)

JALAL : plz... Jodhu you don't have need to apologise... You don't do any wrong think... If someone do wrong is rukaiya... Stupid girl... Want to saprate... (Jodha put her hand on his moth and nodded.. No...)

JODHA : (cupped jalal's face very gently) no jalal don't say that words we never saprate from each other... Never...

JALAL : (totally lost in her doe shaped eyes) ( leanded towards her face... He place a soft kiss on her eyes... Then he proceed towards her lips and place a soft wet kiss on her rosy lips... She also kiss back to him... Then jalal bend a little and reach to her neck where he gave her a little hard kiss... Then he placed her head on Jodha 's head...) no... Jodhu... No one in the world can make us part... Never... (hug her)... (Jalal stretch his hand towards Jodha' s back to unzip her dress... And started to unzip it...)

(Their lovely moment break by the knock on door...)

MOTI : gyu' s honeymoon bhi yahi mnaloge kyaa?... (smirk)

JODHA, JALAL : just two minutes moti.. We are come...

MOTI : OK... We are waited for you cute couple... Come fast... (goes from there)

AFTER SOMETIME

(Both love birds are coming from room to the steps looking like a princess and Prince come from the palace...)

(all girls mouth dropped looking jalal in such a charming avtar... Looking not less than any Greek God...)

(and all the boy mouth dropped to seeing Jodha... Looking not Lees than Greek goddess... Her dress, hair style, doe shapd eye, sandals... .)

After cake cutting ceremony jalal declared angegment of them... ...

(pic of cake)

JODHU : thank you so much jalal (hug him)

JALAL : wait sweetie... There are more things are in waiting list... (he take out a birthday card from pocket)

(pic of card)

(he take out the box from his pocket in which the angegment ring is there...)

(pic of angegment ring)

(and mad to wear Jodha... All are clap...)

(Jodha and jalal shared a strong hug)...

DONE GUYS HOPE YOU ALL LIKE THIS...
ONCE AGAIN HAPPY BIRTHDAY AARTI...STAY BLESSED...
LOVE YOU ALL ❤️