FF: Pale Blue Dot Thread 11 (Chapter37 - 28/05) page1 updated - Page 117

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

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Originally posted by: shahbhavini

👏👏Awesome... exquisite... incredible ... Writing ... Jhanvi/Hema darling... UR writing is flawless... speechless👏👏👏

>>Bhavii... after a long long time.. 🤗 And you compensated in one line for all the missing comments 😆😆

First of all so sorry for not commenting for long... It took me really long to back on track... I read up to I think chapter 36 part1. There are about 100 lines in each chapter I felt like siti bajao.

>>🥳🥳🥳🥳

Many lines I reread three times... just to relish ur flawless writing... UR writing is so powerful that u can write not only what u imagine but beyond that...
>> You very well know how to make a writer happy. Don't you? 😆 Some takeaway for me 😳

While reading I feel so ease and smooth... Every single scene you describe in so detail that readers can visualize every scene. I don't know how you manage to bring so many characteristics trait in one character. While reading I laugh... I cry... felt nostalgic... I feel awe... and most important I feel unwind while reading. Just so lost and involved that I feel every scene is happening in front of me.
>> How beautifully u expressed it!! No wonder, your Jo-Ja are highly emotional characters 😳... Thanks for all the sweetness dear 🤗

Jodha's character is just out of this world... While reading almost every time I think about Aisha's story. Her Jodha was somewhat close to this one (Antic). Antics... lively... energetic... FULL OF LIFE... her understanding of life... I feel her character is bigger than life... she is a real hero even after so much happened in her life she is able to manage to keep the fun of the life. No doubt we felt her pain in many moments but she is a strong fighter... No doubt her pain tore our hearts but her character gives me strength to fight and keep on going no matter what obstacle comes in the life.
>> Right dear.. Jodha is full of life leading life with only one simple sutra.. No matter what, life has to move on!! You understood her right!!😳

Ohhh god... I love this Jalal... He is so so clever... shrewd... keen observant but caring and loving. The way u portrait his wit is incredible...Lately, I have read so many books... but U the best in this area.

>>>🥳🥳🥳 Blowing trumpets for Jalal and me😉

I think perfect word for him is TEDA JALAL... (He doesn't ask or say anything straight which I love... almost in every sentence he knows how to taunt without insulting in an easy way (How U do that?).
>>Teda hai par mera hai ☺️

The way you have portrait him any girl can fall in love with him... Also, his character is balanced perfectly in all aspect... either as a boss... or a lover... or a son... or a friend... In most of the story, we find hero has extraordinary skills but here I feel so real with his balanced skill... We have already seen his ups and downs in his life... his wrong decision to marry Aliya... financial crisis... In another word U have not shown him... superpower... but u proved him he is a hero of our dream... how he comes out of all his problems... U have just outdone his character by his extraordinary wittiness and sharpness. My words are not sufficient to appreciate your talent.

>> Mission accomplished.

(I began to taglines I enjoy but then I found every line so intriguing so I stopped ...

>>No problem. I take it as you liked every line 😉

Mesmerized by the cozy welcome, the resplendent lady blushed entwining her fingers into his. "Thank you!!" smiling angelic, she inched closer glimpsing down at their feet that stepped into the home in unison.

>>>>>What a grand entry... Stepped in Unison :)

"How do you find it Ms. Architect?" seeing her absorbed in studying the architecture Jalal jested. "Did it pass your evaluation?"

>>>>Jalal is too teda... I love how he don't ask anything straight

"With no female intervention either in design or during construction or in the interior, right?" she raised a thoughtful brow and Jalal stared surprised. "Right. How did you know?"

>>>Keen observation Jo

"Classy and contemporary..." she strew a soft smile and added, "... just like its Master!!"

.>>> Jodha don't miss any chance to praise Jalal but I also loved her teda way...

"A forthright compliment from Miss Tough nut

>>>>hehehe...

Giggling loud at her fake sullen eyes, Jalal fondly rebuked. "Idiot!! You're anything but fair. You're so TRICKY."

>>> Jalal knows how to trap her.

Will I be able to overcome it? Will I be able to cross the barrier of his past to share future with HIM?"

she whispered gauging his reflection in the mirror, "did you tell them a GIANT is joining for dinner?"

>>>> lol

he paused with a buoyant wink. "Of course, subjected to my terms and conditions."

>>> What terms??? Is he going to make her sign a contract: lol

but sorry if you're disappointed on not finding Mills and Boons or Pride & Prejudice", he teased.

>>>> Seriously Jalal... No pride and prejudice?

>>>> JODHA IS NOT A CHOICE BUT DESTINY... AWWW...

JALAL'S ROOM/ UPMA/ RASMALAI/SWING/ALIYA/ COLD/ DANCE/ AUTO/ SHOPPING/ ACP CHETAN AND ABDUL TEASING/ SARI/ FIRST KISS on neck and cheek lol/ (I have enjoyed every scene and want to write about it but short of time and I want to read rest of the chapters...)

The list is never ending... I will end up tagging every line... I will soon read rest of the two chapters.

LOVE U Jahnu/ hemu darling😃

>>Oh Bhavi!! You make a writer's day!! Thanks for taking time to read, reread and comment amidst the broiling routine. Love you too🤗🤗

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

>> Abbe tu.. kabhi sudharnewali nahi 🤣 Not to art-of-living classes, you should be sent to Bhagavad Gita classes 😆

>>> Bhagvad Gita Classes😳🤣 why??😆
>> To keep you grounded 😆

>>> You did send me pm..why this 🤔 emoji??😕😆
>> Thanking for PM.. did u do it before? 😛

Originally posted by: Phulchukki

no doubt it's my favourite story!! I just loved this chapter. Our fire ball at last changed to his own naughty avtaar! wohooo..ending was just...oh god. Apart from that jalal's rage was just..well that part was also very interesting...I can imagine that whole scene like it's happening in front if me. So much care. .nd that tension that built inside him..poor jalal. Well that part that you wrote when saradhi ji and jalal gave their reasons about girls safety nd she thought that it's with me only or all face the same..well that part was just so true. This same thing happens to most of the girls. All in all your updates are always phenomenal and this time nothing's different. Thanks for the pm..and do update soon. WAITING!

Originally posted by: anu012

Superb update
loved it

thnks for pm

Originally posted by: swetiii

finally contented for once of reading this chapter
but don't think am not gonna read it again
for sure it will become my saviour till u update next chapter
😉

so here's my comment
🤣

amazing chapter diii
love you sooo much
you are really fab

Jalal was damn angry
he reached ACP in matter of some hours
& was freaking out every second
will Jalal tell her about the truth behind this strictness

poor Jo
got an ear full for her adventure
Hehe

Jo cajoled Jalal in an unexpected yet amazing way
she rushed with the ice cubes
how caring
loved it

now how will Jalal react when he will know that Jo went for his birthday gift
that is... for getting the blouse stiched, most probably
😆

his devil thinking just crossed my mind now
"I would rather like unfolding it.. when it is on you"
🤣

hayeee
Jo will be red
or.. pink 🤣
ufff Dii
I mean red due to blushing
aap bhi na..
kuch b soch lete ho
🤣

finally Kisss... *dreaming*
that really happened
wow
Jalal kissed her
such an amazing punishment for being disobedient
🤣
beautifully penned
such an intoxicating affect it had on me
wonder what Jo must be feeling
😉

how will I even manage to survive this waiting period now
please update next chapter soonish diii
❤️