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maheshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#931

lovely update...almost entire chappy was Akdha centric..i loved their bonding as well as naughtiness..birbal is on mission kabul. in real history he was died in 1586 during a war.. as usual could not able to tap like button.

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#932

Originally posted by: amitaprasad
lovely update...almost entire chappy was Akdha centric..i loved their bonding as well as naughtiness..birbal is on mission kabul. in real history he was died in 1586 during a war.. as usual could not able to tap like button.

Thank you so much for liking and commenting. 😳 Yes though Birbal was mainly a minister, he used to play military role too in several battles... He fought against Mirza Hakim in his first military combat. I took that information here. 😆

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Senapatichandri

@Senapatichandri

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Posted: 9 years ago

#933

its lovely...khub sundor likhechis...
bt ebar lomba tanchis...matter ta solve kr...twist n turns an nahole golpo chewing gum hoe jbe...bt bhison bhalo likgechis...bt tui bechara jalal k romace korteo dis na...ektu romantic scene to rkhle partis...anyways...good going bt joldi come to action n solve it 😊

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Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#934

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri
its lovely...khub sundor likhechis...
bt ebar lomba tanchis...matter ta solve kr...twist n turns an nahole golpo chewing gum hoe jbe...bt bhison bhalo likgechis...bt tui bechara jalal k romace korteo dis na...ektu romantic scene to rkhle partis...anyways...good going bt joldi come to action n solve it 😊

The story will end once the matter is solved. 🤣 Do you want it to be finished so soon? 😉

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RamSiyaRam

@RamSiyaRam

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Posted: 9 years ago

#935

😳 Stuti⭐️ nice update. want to know how often do you think about story, once a week, twice a week, daily or every fortnight😆

Jalal ka plan😃 aam vyapari, going out with his wife😉😆😆. Jodha the

mind reader. 😲 Jodha suggests Birbal! and lists her justifications🥳 Sensible reasoning by Jodha in favour of Birbal😛

Jalal and Birbal😆😆😆 that was funny. Hum bohot duble patle manusya hay, or umar bhi ho raha hay.😆😆

Poor Birbal😆😆Agar ekbar mar gaye to firse jivit nehi ho payenge na? Adesh dene se purb uss bishay me bhi to sochiye!"😆😆😆

Smartie Samar Singh😎 kya plan hai, awesome, he is Fakhr ki takkar hai🥳 in dono ki kahani zabardast hogi😆😆 instead of Birbal isko bhejna chahiye tha😳😆😆 Kabul. Samar Singh rationale is right too. (another brilliant charac by Writer Sahiba⭐️👏)

Precap> Jalal Jodha ko kaha le ja raha hai? Kahi HH returns ke liye toh nahi😉🤣

characs in this update>Jalal, Jodha, Mirza Maan, Niyamat Khan, Giyas Beg, Abdul, Taimur, Azhar Khan😆, Birbal aka Mahesh, Sukanya, Bharmal, Samar Singh, Sujamal. 👏

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Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#936

Originally posted by: RamSiyaRam
😳 Stuti⭐️ nice update. want to know how often do you think about story, once a week, twice a week, daily or every fortnight😆
Almost every time. 😆 I keep on thinking these only. 😆

And thank you. 😃

Jalal ka plan😃 aam vyapari, going out with his wife😉😆😆. Jodha the
mind reader. 😲 Jodha suggests Birbal! and lists her justifications🥳 Sensible reasoning by Jodha in favour of Birbal

Now I hope I satisfied you with Jodha.🤣

Jalal and Birbal😆😆😆 that was funny. Hum bohot duble patle manusya hay, or umar bhi ho raha hay.😆😆

Poor Birbal😆😆Agar ekbar mar gaye to firse jivit nehi ho payenge na? Adesh dene se purb uss bishay me bhi to sochiye!"😆😆😆
😆😆😆
Smartie Samar Singh😎 kya plan hai, awesome, he is Fakhr ki takkar hai🥳 in dono ki kahani zabardast hogi😆😆 instead of Birbal isko bhejna chahiye tha😳😆😆 Kabul. Samar Singh rationale is right too. (another brilliant charac by Writer Sahiba⭐️👏)
Samar singh is not Jalal's man na, how can he go to Kabul. So no partnership of Fakhr and Samar for now. 😆 Waise he is a cameo role. 😉 I did not planned anything about this character, it grew while writing only. Thank you. 😳
Precap> Jalal Jodha ko kaha le ja raha hai? Kahi HH returns ke liye toh nahi😉🤣
Ekdum!! 🤣 🤣 🤣
characs in this update>Jalal, Jodha, Mirza Maan, Niyamat Khan, Giyas Beg, Abdul, Taimur, Azhar Khan😆, Birbal aka Mahesh, Sukanya, Bharmal, Samar Singh, Sujamal. 👏

Giyas, Taimur, Azar, Niyamat are too included in character list? 😆
There was a glimpse of Bhagwant Das too. 😉