NEW LIFE: Thread 2 - Page 86

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

All are for me! Sacchi?😃

Everything is fair in politics.😉 Jalal will not ditch Fakhr, but also will confirm it that Fakhr will need him always for sake of power or respect or whatever so that she can't raise her head against him.

Now Jalal does not know that Fakhr has already cleared all the thorns of Kabul by her own without his help.😆

Originally posted by: RamSiyaRam

Yeap all for you and more

😆😆 Thats what I dont want, subjugation of Fakhr since she really worked hard to achieve her goal and even ditched all her close relations-everyone. At least her single minded focus and dedication should not go waste. Fakhr is a rare female character who wants to rule and that too on her own.

Jalal can be shehenshah of hindustan😛, fine but Kabul belongs to Fakhr😳😃

She earned it.

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Saans to lene do! 🤣

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Kya Siya Di...

I am trying to control diet and aap ho ki😆

Yeah she earned Kabul so she will obviously get it. Don't worry.😉 She never depended on Jalal rather she used him as a key to the throne, and she too didn't trust him and is going to play with him too just like he did. U may keep trust on me and my Fakhr.

And Jalal is not a raja Harishchandra at the end of the day, he will obviously first seek his benefit in every case😆

Originally posted by: RamSiyaRam

Diet control nahi karne ka, moderation mei khane ka aur active lifestyle maintain karo. Khush raho mast raho😳

Yippee cheers for Stuti😳🥳.. Fakhr Rocks!!😎

Yes Jalal will seek his expansion and control but he used someone for it and that someone deserves it more than. Ditching someone after promise is wrong esp for the lead character Jalal, it would be nice to compromise with it nah. Either he never promised it and it was just a hearsay deal. Just a thought.

I am not trying to change the way you visualized the story. Its just that you created such an awesome character who has no holds bar approach towards the goal. Nothing deters her from it, so she deserves the success. I would much more than Mirza or Jalal who are there by virtue of birth. .

Lets see how it shapes up.

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

OK I don't know if I have made any fault while conveying this, but my intention was not to show Jalal ditching Fakhr by going back of his words... It's just he wants to make it sure that she will never get chance to ditch him anyway. If she is using him for getting power, he will ensure that the power he will give to her will not hit him back... By saying that her need will never get fulfilled I meant that the height of her ambitions are very high, and Jalal will keep on being the resource of her ambitions, in such a way that she keeps on increasing her needs and she feels Jalal is a necessity to her... Not by ditching her, as it will make her more violent and her assistance is a need of Jalal too. For Jalal it was a long continuing process as Jalal did not know that Mah-chuchak will die so easily, he did not know that Kabul will lose its authority so fast and there will be none without Fakhr. He must had some methodical approach to give Fakhr what she wants very slowly step by step with getting full help from her. but here Fakhr is not dependent on the pity of the emperor, she has shown her colour and now is on the way to get Kabul...

I must have failed to write this part properly😭 which made you think this way. After a long detachment it's actually tough for me too to hold the grip of the flow of the plot properly. I am going to check it again... Though now it can't be changed, still...

Originally posted by: savindi.db

update...

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

Trying, but it will take time😭