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neha1998

@neha1998

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#421

Wow stuti mindblowing chappi

Finally they smile , they laugh and they melt in each other

Best start of new life

Such a passionate kiss plz continue it

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Senapatichandri

@Senapatichandri

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#422

God man!!!! Bechare jodha jalal Dadi k chalte amer me baith k apne biwi ki Santo or passion se kiss nhi nahi kar sakta...poor day ur writing style is improving.keep it up...

And their passion bounce back Bt jalal kissed Bt god disposes. "hey ambe maa, ye kya dikha dia" loved this dialogue. She was too much!!! And jalal was soo shy just went under the blanket 😆
Aise situation bhagwaan na kare kisike ltd me aye!!! Kiss karte waqt pakde Jana is soo embarresing.
Next update jaldi Dena darling!!! 😛 😛

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#423

amazing update stuti

fakhr has played wonderful game other r blaming each other but everything is done by fakhr ...

nd joja part was awesome their kiss after so long their fight nd dadima entry haha was fun...

update soon nd thanks for pm...

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Anjali Jha

@ANJIJHA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#424

Awesome chappy buddy...
Woww after a long time ja n ja kissing...
Kiss is so passionate...
Dadi saa id comr in the middle...
Thank for pm dear..
Update aaSAP ..

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swetiii

@swetiii

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 9 years ago

#425

sorry for late comment dear
was busy in admission in college
read 2 chappis

amazing
finally JJ are together
they suffered so much
finally the pain came out in form of tears

aww
such a sexy chappi
so romantic
Hehe

hahaha
dadisa came in
Hehe
update asap

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#426

Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal
Flawless update stuti..
Something dangerous is cooking in kabul!
Love is in the air for akdha ❤️
Ooppss dadisa caught them romancing 😉 😳
thanku for pm
continue soon

Glad ypu loved it dear.😳

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mickeymini

@mickeymini

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#427

Sorry stuti I ll comment afterwards re
I still need to read it

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RamSiyaRam

@RamSiyaRam

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#428

An Update so soon, a resounding applause👏👏👏

Faisal deducing the master mind👏 Abul Mali via Haidar!!😛. Haidar has his own army?😲 But he does not know he facing the very clever and intelligent FAKHR⭐️😎. SO Azan dies!! Arresting Haider, so he will implicate Abul!😆😆

Faisal is Maha Chuchak loyal, hmm, does he have feelings for her?😉😆😆

🥳🥳🥳🥳GRAND WELCOME TO FAKHR🥳🥳🥳

Chinar the smart girl 👏 did a great job for Fakhr😳 and she gave a letter too?😲 Why does Fakhr hate her husband so much?

War between Haidar and Faisal and Abul. Triangular!😆😆

Fakhr now attending to her husband is so fake😉😆 and trying to be supportive. She only dug the pit for him😆😆 Aree Jalal toh sab karega hi, uske saath writer sahiba jo hai😉😆😆 Fakhr trying to put it on Sharif👍🏼😎 and she is provoking him about the attack on Jalal😆😆 Poor Abul, he does not have any idea that the master mind of leaking his plan and failing it is Fakhr herself😆 RUN AWAY😲😲. Fakhr saying that, aab iske peeche kya chal hai🤔😃 Honeymoon manaye🤣🤣 What on earth was this?😆 Why is Fakhr happy that MC may die?

Nice description of the mood😳.

So now Jodha and Jalal in bedroom🤣🤣 Jalal is still lusting over, usko theek kardo writer sahiba😆😆 Sweet flirting between the two😳

Awww, you have described the romance❤️❤️ so gracefully⭐️ and dreamily and their passion☺️☺️

🤣🤣🤣 What an anti climax to your romance!! Dadisa!! That was a wonderful twist👏👏

Very enjoyable update and of course grand entry of Fakhr😳

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#429

Originally posted by: Rahiramesh
So glad to see your PM
As usual awesome update👏
Love your detailing in each and every aspect.
That's your speciality and I like you for that
Conspiracies creeping in..
Finally JoJa coming close
It was so funny when Jalal started blabbering all silly things when Dadisa bumped in their room peeping in their light romance. Jo will not spare him now😆

Continue soon

Thank you so much dude for such a beautiful comment. 😃

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Zhanna

@alffim

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#430

Dear Stuti!
This wonderful chapter! I was thinking, what a boring and nasty life such as Abu Mali, Faisal, Sharif. They do not know how to appreciate life. They think that if they steal more gold, enslave more people, they will become happy? But this will never happen.
Great Russian Tsarina Catherine II wrote in her memoirs: "Happiness and unhappiness in the heart and in the soul of each person, if you feel oneself unhappy, stand above it, and do it so that your happiness does not depend upon any event." She had a very bad marriage, a relationship that was humiliated. But she was became a great statesman, the same as Peter I.
Scene between Jodha and Jalal wonderful and psychologically correct! After these terrible events, it is not only the death of the children, it the imputation by Jalal. To return to these relationships, even after sincere repentance Jalal, for Jodha is possible only under the threat of his eventual death.
I wait update soon. 😃