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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update...loved the bond jo and suja share...sharif held nature call is so hilarious..akdha on the horse together was unpredictable...loved their entire journey and conversation...
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Posted: 8 years ago
excellent update , Stuti...Jalal's maturity and understanding is really good to see..and Jo , just like she is always...

wished, when Jalal picks up Jo , he should have cut Cheapu's hands...
Edited by sweet_diksha - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti


Thank you so much Bindu Di for your comment! ๐Ÿ˜ƒ Love you so much!๐Ÿค—


Ami tomake onek bhalobashi!๐Ÿค—

(Hope Google mayya is right!)๐Ÿ˜†


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Posted: 8 years ago
The imaginative Stuti is back with another engrossing update.

So this update is focusing on And of course the quintessential Jalal๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


Behan aur Bhai ne yaad kiye bachpan ke vo din ( The song from JA๐Ÿ˜†)
Intro of Sujamal and Jalal wasnt dhamedar๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† it should have been with the musical twists and tensions๐Ÿ˜† Liked the below convo- Some parts were thoughtful and some were retorts- in all nicely written dear.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘


"Laut chaliye bhaisa!" [Come back, brother!] Jodha uttered in a very low voice.

"Tum hume behekane ayi ho?" [Have you come to manipulate me?] Sujamal was suddenly rude.

"Nehi bhaisa! Hum aapse milne aye hay!" [No brother, I have come to meet you!] Jodha told.


"Jara aankhe kholke dekhie Bhaisa... Aapke charyon oor kitni roshni hay! Aap kyu aapne hriday ko dard ke bojh se bharkar andhire me chupe byathe rahenge Bhaisa? Jivan pukar raha hay aapko! Bahar akar to dekhiye!!"

"Aapne jivan adha samapt kar chuke hay Jodha..." [I have spent the half of my life Jodha...] Sujamal smiled sarcastically. "Aab jakar tum hume jivan ka path padha rahi ho?" [Now you are giving me the lessons of life?]


"Hum Amer ki Maharaj ke samne sar nehi jhukayenge... Hum sar kata sakte hay, jhuka nehi sakte.Maharaj Bharmal aapne laav ke liye kisike bhi samne aapne satwa tyag kar jhuk sakte hay, parantu humare liye aapna samman, aapna ahankar aapne jivan se adhik mulyavan hay... Hum sar nehi jhuka sakte!"

Jalal ignored that completely. He smiled instead. "Aap Amer ki Maharaj ke samne aapna sar nehi jhuka sakte; par iss zid ko kayem rakhne ke liye Raipur ki shahzade ke samne aapna guroor daao par laga sakte hay?"


"Agar aapko yeh daan lagta hay to yeh daan hay Bhaisa; agar aap isse paschatap samjhe to yeh paschatapp hay! Yudh kabhi subh nehi hota hay bhaisa... khas kar jab yudh ki lalkaar me aapno ke prati abhiman ke sath sath satwake lalsaa ka vish misrit hota hay to o yudh sarvanash ko bulawa deta hay! Samajhte hay na aap? To fir kyu nehi mante? Samjhota karna matlab haar jana nehi hota hay Bhaisa!

"Samajhte hay hum Jodha! Parantu hum..." [I understand Jodha! But...] He sighed... "Biswas karo Jodha, hum abhi jis sthan pe hay uaha se sirf aage bara ja sakta hay; piche dekha nehi jaa sakta!"

"Hum jante hay Bhaisa! Issi khun ki laalsa ne humare santanyon ko humse chin liya hay! Humare santanyen aapne pita-pitamahayon ke satruta ki kimat chukane ke liye aapne maa ko chorkar chala gaya hay! Humse zyada koi nehi janta hay Bhaisa!"


"Hum iss samjhote me khud samil rakhkar khayal rakhenge ki aapke sath firse koi naa-insaafi na ho. Par agar iss jung ke aar me humare or humare watan ke khilaf sajish chalane ke bare me koi sochne ka himmat bhi kare to hum uske sath sath kisiko bhi nehi bakshenge...

Jalal stayed quite for a moment gazing at him, then a slight smile beamed in his lips. "Bohot muskil sawal puch liye aapne Sujamal Sahab! Par jawab hay humare paas. Hum aapna haq jeet lete... jung ke raste se ho, yeah siyasaati chal se, hum uss haq ko hasil kar lete; humara hi cheez hume hi bhikh me de, aisa koi insaan aajtak payda nehi hua hay Sujamal Sahib..."

Sharif was clever and tried to find the truth but for some time he did get puzzled and off track but later on he was back๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† acha uske haath katna baak hai๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† He had the audacity to hold Jodha's hand๐Ÿ˜ฒ that too in front of Jalal. Waise ek ques hai why didnt Jalal chop off Sharif hand right there?๐Ÿ˜› Why did he simply leave?


Oh acha romantic moonlight horse ride ( this is new๐Ÿ˜‰) naughtiness while riding๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† I dont know ki Jalal ka kya karne ka maan kar raha hai ( shayad bhajan sunne ka ya phir chausar khelne ka๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†)

Kahi Sujamal ke liye shanti samjhauta toh nahi discuss karna๐Ÿ˜†)

On precap > Jungle mei mangalโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

๐Ÿ˜Ž



WAISE WHERE IS FAKHR? DONT YOU KILL HER!๐Ÿ˜ก


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Posted: 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago


Perfect illustration!! Thanks Di!
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: RamSiyaRam

The imaginative Stuti is back with another engrossing update.
๐Ÿ˜ƒ
So this update is focusing on And of course the quintessential Jalal๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

Yeah! ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Behan aur Bhai ne yaad kiye bachpan ke vo din ( The song from JA๐Ÿ˜†)
I became nostalgic suddenly with the memory of that song which I never liked.๐Ÿ˜†
Intro of Sujamal and Jalal wasnt dhamedar๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† it should have been with the musical twists and tensions๐Ÿ˜† Liked the below convo- Some parts were thoughtful and some were retorts- in all nicely written dear.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

Okay, add some music then. ๐Ÿ˜‰ Dhigini-tom dhigini-tom dhigini-tom!!!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†


"Laut chaliye bhaisa!" [Come back, brother!] Jodha uttered in a very low voice.

"Tum hume behekane ayi ho?" [Have you come to manipulate me?] Sujamal was suddenly rude.

"Nehi bhaisa! Hum aapse milne aye hay!" [No brother, I have come to meet you!] Jodha told.


"Jara aankhe kholke dekhie Bhaisa... Aapke charyon oor kitni roshni hay! Aap kyu aapne hriday ko dard ke bojh se bharkar andhire me chupe byathe rahenge Bhaisa? Jivan pukar raha hay aapko! Bahar akar to dekhiye!!"

"Aapne jivan adha samapt kar chuke hay Jodha..." [I have spent the half of my life Jodha...] Sujamal smiled sarcastically. "Aab jakar tum hume jivan ka path padha rahi ho?" [Now you are giving me the lessons of life?]


"Hum Amer ki Maharaj ke samne sar nehi jhukayenge... Hum sar kata sakte hay, jhuka nehi sakte.Maharaj Bharmal aapne laav ke liye kisike bhi samne aapne satwa tyag kar jhuk sakte hay, parantu humare liye aapna samman, aapna ahankar aapne jivan se adhik mulyavan hay... Hum sar nehi jhuka sakte!"

Jalal ignored that completely. He smiled instead. "Aap Amer ki Maharaj ke samne aapna sar nehi jhuka sakte; par iss zid ko kayem rakhne ke liye Raipur ki shahzade ke samne aapna guroor daao par laga sakte hay?"


"Agar aapko yeh daan lagta hay to yeh daan hay Bhaisa; agar aap isse paschatap samjhe to yeh paschatapp hay! Yudh kabhi subh nehi hota hay bhaisa... khas kar jab yudh ki lalkaar me aapno ke prati abhiman ke sath sath satwake lalsaa ka vish misrit hota hay to o yudh sarvanash ko bulawa deta hay! Samajhte hay na aap? To fir kyu nehi mante? Samjhota karna matlab haar jana nehi hota hay Bhaisa!

"Samajhte hay hum Jodha! Parantu hum..." [I understand Jodha! But...] He sighed... "Biswas karo Jodha, hum abhi jis sthan pe hay uaha se sirf aage bara ja sakta hay; piche dekha nehi jaa sakta!"

"Hum jante hay Bhaisa! Issi khun ki laalsa ne humare santanyon ko humse chin liya hay! Humare santanyen aapne pita-pitamahayon ke satruta ki kimat chukane ke liye aapne maa ko chorkar chala gaya hay! Humse zyavda koi nehi janta hay Bhaisa!"


"Hum iss samjhote me khud samil rakhkar khayal rakhenge ki aapke sath firse koi naa-insaafi na ho. Par agar iss jung ke aar me humare or humare watan ke khilaf sajish chalane ke bare me koi sochne ka himmat bhi kare to hum uske sath sath kisiko bhi nehi bakshenge...

Jalal stayed quite for a moment gazing at him, then a slight smile beamed in his lips. "Bohot muskil sawal puch liye aapne Sujamal Sahab! Par jawab hay humare paas. Hum aapna haq jeet lete... jung ke raste se ho, yeah siyasaati chal se, hum uss haq ko hasil kar lete; humara hi cheez hume hi bhikh me de, aisa koi insaan aajtak payda nehi hua hay Sujamal Sahib..."

๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Sharif was clever and tried to find the truth but for some time he did get puzzled and off track but later on he was back๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† acha uske haath katna baak hai๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† He had the audacity to hold Jodha's hand๐Ÿ˜ฒ that too in front of Jalal. Waise ek ques hai why didnt Jalal chop off Sharif hand right there?๐Ÿ˜› Why did he simply leave?

He left because he did not want anyone to know that he has come to meet Sujamal in disguise.

Oh acha romantic moonlight horse ride ( this is new๐Ÿ˜‰) naughtiness while riding๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† I dont know ki Jalal ka kya karne ka maan kar raha hai ( shayad bhajan sunne ka ya phir chausar khelne ka๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†)

Kahi Sujamal ke liye shanti samjhauta toh nahi discuss karna๐Ÿ˜†)

๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ ๐Ÿคฃ

On precap > Jungle mei mangalโค๏ธ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†

๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†

๐Ÿ˜Ž



WAISE WHERE IS FAKHR? DONT YOU KILL HER!๐Ÿ˜ก


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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_diksha

excellent update , Stuti...Jalal's maturity and understanding is really good to see..and Jo , just like she is always...

wished, when Jalal picks up Jo , he should have cut Cheapu's hands...


Thank you so much!๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Cheapu will lose his hand don't worry. ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: amitaprasad

awesome update...loved the bond jo and suja share...sharif held nature call is so hilarious..akdha on the horse together was unpredictable...loved their entire journey and conversation...


Thank you so much for comment. ๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Bindu.


Ami tomake onek bhalobashi!๐Ÿค—

(Hope Google mayya is right!)๐Ÿ˜†



๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†

Amio tomay khuuub bhalobasi! ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค— ๐Ÿค—

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