2OSes-The Perfect Girl/The Perfect Boy UPDATED (17/04/2016)

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Ashvneet

@Ashvneet2399

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Acha pehle comment nahi karegi??

Karungi pkka pr... Pehle continue it ... Pleasseee !

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Ashvneet

@Ashvneet2399

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Two shots hi bnaaa doo naa pleaseee

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ketaki1

@ketaki1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

You are an awesome writer...
But I thought there were many open links...
payal I am not disappointed but I would love to read more...
What will happen next...We got jalal POV, he likes her...BUT what about jo POV...
At least add an OS abt jodha's point of view...to get an connection ...
and thanx for PM...
I will be waiting to read more of your stories ...

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sorathsheikh

@sorathsheikh

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Awesome os sissy 😃

different concept 😆

Loved it do keep writing more os 😳

love you

Thanks for pm

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kartikaJA

@kartikaJA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

awesome update
update more os

Edited by kartikaJA - 9 years ago

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Ashvneet

@Ashvneet2399

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Lo ! M cmmnting but agar abb u don't continue it naa... To .. Katti vo b pakki waali 😡.

The OS was really a cute one ! N I loved it !

N mu j sachi mein smj ni aa ra h k mai kya bolu 😛 😆 !

U know what , when I read the first line ... Tht chking my glasses.. I thought it to b Jo's POV 😛 but when I read ... What she would b wearing... Tb pta chla tht it's Jalal's POV 😛.

N to b very honest i was a li'l disappointed but aage read krte krte i liked it ...

N u can write simple n sweet stories ... Though u r great i hot stuff but believe i really liked this one.

Orr mai avai continue krwaane k piche ni pdi hu 😆 !

The perfect girl ... Now i want The perfect boy OS from you

N please do continue this one pretty please 😃 !

N m just imagining Jalal in tht look ... I guess he would look really cute right !

Love you 🤗 !

Edited by Ashvneet2399 - 9 years ago

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

Karungi pkka pr... Pehle continue it ... Pleasseee !

Naah dear.. I don't want to write further,for,I can't guarantee that my grey cellls would be able to think straight and write in this way once they get into the car,Together.So sorry darling and let this os as it is,simple and easy-peasy😆

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Anjali Jha

@ANJIJHA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Lovely os Payal..
I loved it so much..
Ja is hesitate for telling his felling...
Traffic scenes is really a cut one..
Very nice when jo take the initiative..
Thank u so much for giving us a wonderful os..
Pls next time give us a hot romantic os..