Season1:Game Of Desire Chapter3 Updated on pg1 (10/8/2016)

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#881

Originally posted by: Hm1608

Superb story dear...
I read whole story today

Just amazing story

Superb description that dance is such lovely and romantic

Up soon

Sorry for late rply

CONGRATULATIONS FOR UR RESULTS

Thanks a lot for reading dear.. glad u liked the storyline..😃

Thankyou soo much🤗

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madhurima

@Hm1608

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Posted: 9 years ago

#882

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Thanks a lot for reading dear.. glad u liked the storyline..😃

Thankyou soo much🤗

update next part soon

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#883

Originally posted by: Hm1608

update next part soon
waiting

will try dear..

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Shraddha

@lashy

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Posted: 9 years ago

#884

🤗

>>> Yes.. I enjoyed alot😃
So glad!!!!

>>> Oh my God!! Thankyou so soo much my dearest author.. this means a lot.. really😊

🤗

I did expect the events to take this route... from the teaser, especially... but things have gotten clearer now... from both sides!

>>>> Both sides.. means jalal/jodha or jalal/ruks..??😆

Ja-Jo

>>> 😆😆 why shocked when you were expecting this only,dear??😆

Arre the teaser is not about Jalal's feelings na... in fact the other chapters also there is no hint of Jalal's feelings either, right?

My original guess was that Jodha is the temptress and Ja is caught in her trap... but, here Ja is also playing the game..

>>> why dangerous.. he has a meek wife.. she won't hit him I feel😆

the prologue looks dangerous to me 😉😉

>>>> You will get to know everything in next chapter.😛

Good 😛 whooopee

>>> Woah!! You felt bad for rukaiya.. I am so happy to know that😆

Who wouldn't 😕 she's like an angelic soul here..

>>> Easy to visualise...😕 you can't visualise other scenes while reading Sorry for my bad writing.. I think I confused the readers with this chapter..

Ab is comment ke liye, I wanted to give you a (loving) one with a belan yesterday..

Itni pyaar se I had written that I could visualise that scene... that it was so beautiful...

it just meant it turned out the most beautiful of the lot.. and you're apologising for your bad writing...

It's like

'I lurrrve your badam barfi'

'Oh... you don't like the rest of my cooking? I'm so sorry...'

So, don't say that ever again!

🤗

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@old_charm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#885

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Hanji...😆

woohooo

Party Time...

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#886

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

woohooo

Party Time...

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@old_charm

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Posted: 9 years ago

#887

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

having good time...😉

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#888

Originally posted by: lashy

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#889

Originally posted by: cute.manasi

having good time...😉

yep😉

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Shraddha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#890

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

>>> 😆😆 why shocked when you were expecting this only,dear??😆
Arre the teaser is not about Jalal's feelings na... in fact the other chapters also there is no hint of Jalal's feelings either, right?
My original guess was that Jodha is the temptress and Ja is caught in her trap... but, here Ja is also playing the game..
>>> Game.. naah dear.. he's a nice guy.. 😛 he didn't do anything wrong yet, did he??

Playing the game means.. playing along... not putting a stop to it...

>>> why dangerous.. he has a meek wife.. she won't hit him I feel😆
the prologue looks dangerous to me 😉😉

>>>😆 Then I would say you won't like ruks much in the later chapters.. I feel so.. not sure though..

Oh no.. so Ruqs is not an angel?

>>> Easy to visualise...😕 you can't visualise other scenes while reading Sorry for my bad writing.. I think I confused the readers with this chapter..
Ab is comment ke liye, I wanted to give you a (loving) one with a belan yesterday..
Itni pyaar se I had written that I could visualise that scene... that it was so beautiful...
it just meant it turned out the most beautiful of the lot.. and you're apologising for your bad writing...
>>> belan😲😆 actually many thought that jo is regretting her decision and jalal should wait for her.. so I think it's my writing which confused the readers..
I don't think they're wrong in assuming that... or that you've portrayed it wrongly.. the same scene can be understood in 3 different ways by 3 different people.. the story only reveals itself at the very end..

'I lurrrve your badam barfi'
'Oh... you don't like the rest of my cooking? I'm so sorry...'

So, don't say that ever again!
🤗
>>>> ok dear 🤗 btw neither I can cook badam barfi nor gulab jamun, lashy😆

Mummy ki baat sahi nikli... ab tumhe cooking classes bhejne padenge!