Akdha SS || Souls Entwined || Uptd chap 8(part A, part B) (pg 123)

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eshalli

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Posted: 9 years ago

#771

Superb chapter dear...
Loved it
Continue soon
Thxc 4r pm

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priyanka

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Posted: 9 years ago

#772

Hello avika didu ...

Wow wow ...u updated ...

I was waiting for update of this ss so eagerly ...

Hehe

Wow .. Jodha get card for shopping from her beloved bro .. Poor moti ... Suja jodha ne confuse kr dia ...

Jodha got chance to talk wid surya ...

Surya knew her name ... Bandi famous ho gyi h bhaiiee..

Jalal is getting mad wid jo's thoughts ...

Jodha got to know that surya dont like tatoos nd all so he is not the tatoo man ...

New revelation for jodha ... That natasha was not jalal's gf ...

Shock lga shock lga ... Hehehe

Part b

Party update ...

Jodha's dress was amazing ... Nd jo was luking beutiful like always...

Jodha met wid noor in her room .. Noor was luking like princess ...

Maham .. I think she is bad wid noor ..thats y noor get scared ... Hope jodha will get to know soon everything ..

Mask dance ...joja eyelock dance ... Jalal recignized bracelet girl...

Tatoo man nd bracelet girl ... Mast combo h .. Hehe

Jo went to jalal's room mistakenly ...

Jalal jodha k upar jodha jalal ke neeche ... Hehe ...

Wow how romantic ...

Nd the biggest shock ... Jo is jodha appi nd jalal is mamu ...

Again shock ...

Jalal is the tatoo man ... Jo cant believe it ...

Hamida jalal convo ... Jo noor heard their argument ...

Jo went behind jalal for noor .. Bcoz noor Loves her mamu very much ...

Jalal hug jodha ...

Wah dii ..

Yh update toh shock bhari thi for joja ...

Precap .. Ek or khulasa ...

Jodha is the bracelet girl ...

Hehe ..

Waiting for next .

Update soon

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priyanka

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Posted: 9 years ago

#773

Nd han yh mera b tk ka sbse bada comment h🤣

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dellaakdha

@dellaakdha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#774

super duper..awesome..no words to say..birthday party s super..i thought jo wl take time to recognse her tatoo man..but she found it befre jalal found his bracelet girl..i realy love tat cutiepie noor cute girl..such a lovly princess.wow their 1st formal meet s in jalal's bed tat too one over the otr..good revealatn of their identity..tat last hug in rain s awesome..atlast jodha got her man waiting for jalal's turn..u r xcelent..waiting fr nxt part..thanks fr pm..

Edited by dellaakdha - 9 years ago

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cutecc753

@cutecc753

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Posted: 9 years ago

#775

amazing update.at last jo came to know about tattoo man.plz don't give jo so much shock in 1 day, heart attack ho gayi to?????😉 continue soon.thanx 4 pm

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#776

Res...

Unres

Absolutely mind blowing update avika akka when i was read i was like oh nw jodha will get to know about jalal or nw jalal will get to know about jodha nw nd at d end jodha found about jalal jalal will take more time nw luck isn't on his side...

PART A

what a lovely sis haha akka every brother will pray to god to get sister like jo nt taking card her bro is giving for shopping akka which sis will say no for this 😆😆😆. so moti took full responsibility of a wife by taking d offer 😆😆😆 but must say she is a caring sis for her bro...😳

Mission to find tattoo man start...

Good first step to befriend with surya turned out good to build good impression of jalal good akka u cleared it so soon u knw i did know want jodha be in folse thought that surya is d person she is searching and think jalal wrong as all was she do...

jodha is getting so many hints that d person she is finding is jalal only but she don't want to addimet it...

good part is she got to knw about d whole incident she that how jalal was a player but he was totally opposite of what she thought...

nd hw cute of jalal to ask sorry and sort everything to natasha jo was impressed by this...

Jalal on other side to is fighting with his thoughts about jodha and trying to go away but ended up seeing her felt bad that jodha talking to surya when he badly want to be with her and talk to her nw more curious to find out y jodha was asking about him...

PART B

wow this was amazing part akka...

jodha was thinking what she look like is not like a kid bday party ... wow jodha welcome by hamida was good... nd d little princess noor was so cute and so eager to meet her appi nd mamu...

wow mask dance was good idea and jalal got lost in this thoughts about d girl poor jalal to his bad luck missed her again but left with her bracelet hope he finds d oner soon😉😉😉

lovely jalal room part was lovely and i hope jalal finds bracelet girl is jodha only by d mask she dropped in jalal room...poor jalal was completely lost jodha charm ...and visa-versa too...

haha cute na...

finally jodha eyes wide open when she saw 2 same kids now is good condition and to her surprise jalal with them...but yet again she is nt ready to believe it...

poor jalal for doing good also got soldering from his mom their conversation was in a different level it was cleanly showing jodha mismatched equation in d family nd d poor soul noor was missing her mamu which jodha couldn't see it and run behind jalal nd a point he didn't want to show himself in front of anyone not especially jodha but what he did was unexpected and nature was also on his side...

akka jodha edit pic was so good i loved her outfit at first i didn't it was a edit pic at all...

update soon akka i can't wait to read more...

and thanks for pm akka...

Edited by 1357raksha - 9 years ago

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Jasmine Grewal

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Posted: 9 years ago

#777

Thanks for the PM dear will definitely give your story a read and comment😊

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maheshi

@amitaprasad

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Posted: 9 years ago

#778

liked no dear, loved it.jo jalal accidental meeting is so romantic.noor is cute...oye maham presence is biggest surprise..thanks for pm and update soon because story is so interesting and tempting to wait.

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Rahi

@Rahiramesh

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#779

Super Awesome update. Loved it👏
Mystery man revealed😃
Jodha and Jalal coming close at the party for Noor
Noor is so cute, poor child seemed so scared on Maham
& also became sad after her Mamu's clash with dadijaan😭
Jalal is so soft hearted, it all gets explained by the way he was fighting his mom for two kids who are just not related to him but for humanity..
Last scene was awesome, two souls drenched in rain. Jo knew he was crying and he sought his comfort by hugging her. Liked it all buddy🤗

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binduprasad41

@binduprasad41

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Posted: 9 years ago

#780

awesome update dear
love the bonding between sujamal and jodha
jodha is so desperate to know who is tattoo man
so that's why she approach to surya to gain some information,
but surya clear her misunderstanding about jalal
so she confuse,
noor is so cute
love the dance between jalal and jodha
poor jodha and jalal fall on the bed
finally jodha come to know about tattoo man
but she so shock
both jodha and noor witness jalal and his Mother fight
poor jalal fighting for street kid's
noor is so scare to see jalal in angry mood
love the last scene
poor jalal he is so shatter so he hug jodha for comfort without his knowledge
waiting eagerly for next update
thanks for pm

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