Akdha SS || Souls Entwined || Uptd chap 8(part A, part B) (pg 123) - Page 36

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😛good start of this interesting story like your changed writing 😊apt song and nicely given idea about night club and it's atmosphere.. .moti is nice girl caring for family naughty and in dreamy stage blurt out everything and 😳suja. when she told jo its anywhere written that married women can't drool a handsome man I was laugh out hard 😆 you very well use it. she dreamet about jo's marriage .suja is caring ,loving and may be shy personality suja and moti😆 but lovely pair. well written coldness between hb and ja . wow ja's character is so different no hot cheeks, respect the girls dignity and kind . jalal is effected by past and in much pain which reflects in their relation. symbolic use of darkness to saw his life's pain and he distress himself with music. . jo is kind , high regard towards other women ,fiery ., wow at the movie she punch that guy hard . jo moti were best buddies. like their bonding. well describe about college ,match ground and college life. ja's tattoo and jo's bracelet encrypted in each other's mind. ja is attracted towards her and as a team captain and standing on ragging place his image ruin in jo's thought. hann that healthy flerting. poor jallu for flick of second she too admire him. first glance and one dreamy and other splitting fire. what a situation . let's see what you have stored for us. Enjoyed it.😛