Akdha SS || Souls Entwined || Uptd chap 8(part A, part B) (pg 123)

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#221

Good morning akku

Aaj itni subah subah

Update de rahi ho kya 😎

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#222

Originally posted by: Kavya_P
Awesome start
When they gonna meet avii
Update soon buddy

Thank u so much kavya

Oh girl they will meet in next chap pakka

But it will take some time for him to realise that she is the same bracelet girl 😉

Will update soon dear 😊

Thanks for commneting 😊

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#223

Originally posted by: piya58
Woow supurb chappy... y no precap
Thanku dr
Updatee soon...

Thank u so much dear

Hmm u want precaps ??

I never gave for EVAB too so i dint gave for this one also

But if u want i will give from next chap pakka .

Thanks for commenting 😊

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#224

Originally posted by: sho123
wow
chappi Di
thanks for pm
continue soon

Thank u so much sherry 😛

Will update soon dear 😊

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Akanksha Sinha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#225

Originally posted by: avika444
Good morning akku
Aaj itni subah subah
Update de rahi ho kya😎

Good morning di 😳
Update ke phele mere ko sabko reply krna h... uske baad hi update krenge 😆

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#226

Originally posted by: AkankshaENRIQUE

Good morning di 😳
Update ke phele mere ko sabko reply krna h... uske baad hi update krenge 😆

Hmm reply toh karna hi padega

Par update bhi toh dena padega na 😉

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: mickeymini
Wow awesome akka 👏
Thank u so much bangaram
U have introduced their characters very well
Tried my best dear and im glad u liked the intro .
Jalal a spoiled brat obviously we know the reason
Jalal is indeed a spoiled brat 😆
All he needs d love from his mom n soon jodha
Yup thats true 😉
Jo is perfect in herself
She is the best as always
So moti-sujamal r a couple yes tried a new couple this time 😉
Indeed u have made a new couple hahahaha
😆 hehehe yes and i hope u liked this pairing 😉
What a brave Jo 👏
Finally jalal is attracted to someone he dnt knw (but we all know ) 😆 hmm yes he is attracted to this teekhi mirchi ,lets see what happens next 😉😆
Make them meet soon
They will deffo meet in next chap ra 😉
I think their first meet would-be anything good
Hehehe their first meeying will be simple ,not in a regular filmy style
Thanx for PM
Looking forward to read more

Will update soon ra

Thanks for the lovely comment 😊

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: swetiii
awsum chappi dii
Thank u so much muskaan 😊
loved it
woah
ja jerked that girl
He has attitude problem dear and he really doesnt like girls who r ready to throw themselves on him for he know they r behind his money or lust
jalal was rude to his mom
😔
Hmm he is rude but he has his own reason for that , hamida never gave time to her kids ,it was always salima who took care of Jalal and hence he doesnt like his mother much
jo is so sweet
Jo is always sweet in my stories 😆
ja dying to see her
hehe hmm he loved te teekha side of that girl ,thats why this attraction 😆
update asap dii