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Guys here is the 15B CHAPTER on your demand its a biiig chapter...so please comment and like 😃



Chapter 15(B)

FLASH BACK

It's a fine morning in Darjeeling. Jodha come out wearing her saree and saw jalal was packing their small bag. And searching something...

"what are you searching jalal, go and get freash."

"tum kya samjhogi meri majburi Jodha...huh!!"

"kya hua!! Bhadak kyu rahe ho."

"chodo tum jaao ready ho jaao."

"arry batao to kya hua hai. Kya dhund rahe ho."

A frustrated jalal saw Jodha with anger in his eyes. Then again started to work. Jodha got clue lessby his behaviour.

"arry batao na kya dhund rahe ho. Main help karu??"

"haa jao dhundo. Tum hi dhundo khud pack kiya hai ab khud hi dhundogi"

"Kya pack kiya hai maine?"

"urrggghhh mera underwear!!!!!!! Pata nahi kis kone me ghusa diya un sabko!!!!"

"haa haa haa haa haa..." Jodha laughed out loudly looking atjalal and watching his too cute frown on his face.

"tumko hasi aa rahi hai?? Use bina pehne to main bahar bhi nahi jaa sakta..." Irritated jalal said to her.

"ab tumhara underwear hai tum hi dhundo." Jodha said controlling her laugh.

"accha kal raat kisne utarke feka tha??? Tum hi na!!!" jalal said with a mischiviouss grin on his lips.

Mentioning yesterday night jodha's cheek gone red in blush. The passion they had all night long she can never imagine how much pleasure jalal has given. His kiss his long figers playing on her neck bosom belly and...

She cant think anymore. Suddnely she saw jalal pull out something beside the bed.

"now what is this??" jalal said pick up the thing.

Jodha's eyes gone wide. She cant say anything but got embarrassed. And there her mischivious husband picking her bra on his hand while heading towards her.

"ab yeh kiska hai?? Jo mujhe bed ke paas se mila!!"

Jodhas voice gone slow like whisper," mera hai."

Jalal come to her ears and speak just like Jodha in whisper, "our kal kisne ise tumhare sarir se nikal feka tha??"

Jodha cant stand more she ran to jalal and grab his arms and hug him tightly. Jalal hugged her tightly.

"Aap bhi na...chiii" Jodha snuggle more to his chest.

"Kya aap bhi!! Kal raat to sab kuch dikh gaya mujhe ab tum kapde pehno ya naa pehno. Kya fark padhta hai." Jalal kiss her check softly

Jodha come out of the hug and said "come now lets go and go to the wash room and get ready. Driver ata hi hoga.."

Jalal went to washroom and suddenly called, "Jodha zara idhar aao..."

"ji" Jodha went to jalal and said "kya hua"

Without any warning jalal grabbed jodha's hand and pull her towards bathroom and shut the door. After some time thre was only moans groan and shill screem of pleasure of Jodha and jalal come from the bathroom.

On The Way

"Jalal yeh lo pehen lo" Jodha give a jacket to jalal as its getting cold because they are climbing high.

"lagega nahi Jodha, mirik lake ka height Darjeeling se kam h... garmi hogi." Jalal ignored.

"but ek kaam kar sakta hu."

"kya?"

Jalal pull one corner of jodha's shawl and put it over him also. Now they are both in one shawl. Jalalslide his hand on jodha's waist tickling it a bit. Jodha can't resist to giggle. Jalal got happy watching her smiling like that. He always want her to stay happy and in peae. He can do anything for that.

Now jalal's mind got on the naughtiness track. He jurked Jodha to him and she banged on his chest.

"yeh kya kar rahe ho aap?? Driver hai!!"

"to kya hua? Apni hi biwi ko bahonme me le raha hu. Is driver ki biwi ko nahi. Main nahi chodunga."

"Please chodiye na..."

"Ok chod dunga but ek shart hai mera."

"Kya"

"Nahi bolunga, per karke dikhaunga."

"Accha kya karoge aap?"

"Dekhna chahogi?'

"Haa"

"Badme mat bolna ke maine mana nahi kiya tha."

"Kyu?? Kya kar..."

Jodha's word didnt finish jalal tok her lips in his. And started sucking it madly. Jodha's eyes gone wide. Again his fingers strated their game.

Jalal lifted Jodha and place her on the sit lying on it. Now Jodha started to reply with wild. Jalal now pull her blouse a bit lower and bit her shoulder with his mark.

"Aahhh jalalll" Jodha shrill with leasure. But jalal ignore her and sucking and biting her after some time he put his hand on he blouse hook and open her one hook and kiss her cleavage.

"Ahhh ohhh jalal don't...' Jodha again try to stop him as driver is there just in frot of them.

"saab!!!" and he turn to them "Hayyy raaammm!!!" driver's shocked screem. He closed his eyes. both of them out of their dream land. Jalal got straight and sit like thre in nothing happened. Jodha also sit like nohing happened.

"kya hua driver ji?? Ap chikhe kyu.'

Driver look back and see them as it is. He thought I think I am dreaming erotic"

Driver started driving again. Jalal and Jodha just smile inheart and hugged tightly each other.

FLASHBACK END

Last lone tears started beaming on his corner of the eyes. Those moment with her is worth to cherish. Don't know what will happen after this operation. He just want her back as his as she is.

He looked towards his family members. They are tensed. He looked at them. They are very much tensed... But they can never know that what is going on him. He is breaking inside, seeing his life is struggiling for life inside.

After 5 hours

a clliiinnggg sound of door. Jalal's ear straight by that. He ran towards doctor.

"you see mr. Mohammad. Its successful. But till she gain her conscious I cant say what happen to her. Just keep patience and have faith." Then he look to jalal "jalal maine job hi kaha use yaad rakkho n kisi bhi situation ke liye taiyaar rehna. Kuch bhi ho sakta hai."

Jalal's heart started to beat on its highest beat. What is going to happen. Is this end of his love? Or just start of his exam. The exam which life takes.

Next day


Jalal didn't move a bit from that chair in front of the ICU. Whole night he spent looking to his love from that round glass of that door. A pale, bandaged Jodha lying on the hospital bed. Yet he can't do anything. Doctor said him that it can be minimum 15 hours to gain her conscious. It past 10 hours already.

Suddenly his eyes fell on a couple. A man carrying his baby and his wife caressing the baby's foot with her note. Both are laughing. A beautiful pleasant smile form on his face. another dream which he want to live. He remember during his honeymoon they went to Mirik lake when they first thought to have a beby.

FLASHBACK



"Saabji hum aa gaye"

Jodha took a nap on his shoulder. Due to drivers voice she woke up. Driver park the car to the nearest parking area. Both came out while jalal bend his waist and yawn a little. His whole body atched due to sitting for long time. Jodha yawn a little then help jalal to pick the food pack from the back side of the sit.


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A beautiful lake a big ground beside it came in front of their eyesite. There are few stalls on the left site. Jodha and jalal went towards there. Small shopes of imitations, food bevarages, stationary items. They went to a stationary shop and bought buscuits, chips, ana big frooti bottle as Jodha loves to drink Frooti be it hot weather or cold.

Driver said he will be at near parking, he will be there in a call. So both of them went around for exploring. A big field. A small mela happening there. Some stalls of shawls, fancy items ladies imitations and a small stage where loudspeakes are playing hindi film songs. They both came to the bridge on Mirik lake.its a beautiful scenary from the lake. They just touch each others hand suddnely a song came from the loud speaker.

Chhup Gaye Saare Taare

Baadalo Mein Chhup Gae

Chhup Gaye Wo Nazaare

Baadalo Mein Chhup Gaye

Aa Aa

Jodha look towards jalal. She now feel in his arms. In his embrance she can spend her whole life. He is her life her husband, her love. But todays early morning dream shook her from inside. An unwanted fear creaped inside her.

Chhup Gaya Badali Mein Jaa Ke

Chand Bhi Sharama Gaya


Suddenly jalal started to humming and lipsing the song. He took her towards him and put his hands on her waist.


Aapako Dekha To

Phulo Ko Pasina Aa Gaya

The moment jalal said those lines Jodha shyed.

Are Maahi Re O O O O O O O


Jalal said her to sing that sone. "kitna romatic mausam hai. Ab itna romantic gana agar tum nahi gaohi to kaise chalega."

Jodha look at him with mischivious eyes. Then started lypsing


Aapane Yu Chhed Ke To

Dil Mera Dhadaka Diya

Aapane Yu Chhed Ke To

Dil Mera Dhadaka Diya

She grabbed her shoulder and encircle it now her lips are neer his cheek. She started touching him on his cheek with her lips while lypsing the song

Ham Mile To Pyaar Karane Ka

Mahina Aa Gaya

Are Maahi Re O O OOO

Jalal look aoud but to him fortunate there are no one. He turn Jodha on. And pull her towards him. She banges on his chest.his hans now touching her hand from behind. While caressing her wedding choodas he lypsing,

Aapaki Ye Chudiya

Hamako Jagaae Raat Bhar


Jodha look at his eyes. And touch her cheek.

Aapaki Ye Boliya

Hamako Sataae Raat Bhar

Aapaki Ye Chudiya

Hamako Jagaae Raat Bhar

Aapaki Ye Boliya

Hamako Sataae Raat Bhar

He loosen his grip on her and catches her pallu and sings

Aapaka Aanchal Udaa

Ambar Pe Baadal Chha Gaya

She pull her pallu

Ham Mile To Pyaar Karane Ka

Mahina Aa Gaya

Are Maahi Haay Ho Ho Aa

Its off season so there are not much visiters out there. Jalal pull Jodha and cross the bridge. There is a bushy area with thik and big trees around there. Jalal push Jodha to a bank of tree and grab her between his both hands both side.

Jodha look at him then rub her nose with his then sings with the loud speakers.

Aankho Se Nide Churana

Koi Sikhe Aapase

Now jalal put his palm on her cheek. And kissed her cheek lightly.

Pyaar Me Paagal Banana

Koi Sikhe Aapase

Jodha encircle her hands on his waist and hug him tightly.

Aapaki Chaahat Ka Ye Adaaz

Hamako Bha Gaya

Aapako Dekhaa To

Phulo Ko Pasina Aa Gaya

Are Maahi Re O O


[here is the link of this song from youtube...please watch

http:// https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nPXSxYhqmoY ]



Jalal make Jodha sit on the bank of ther tree. Both are in each others arm. Suddenly jalal see a small swan came towards the bank of the lake and follows by her 3 little babys. Then she put her her down in the water and pic the food for the babies and give them to her one by one and this continues.

Jalal look at Jodha. And remembers thei first night yesterday. They reached the height of their passion yesterday. Those magical moments they could never forget.

"Jodha..." jalal whispers.

"hmmm"

look at those." He pointed towards those swans.

"they are beautiful." She smiles looking at them.

"I want to to be that swan and feed our baby jaan. You know from yesterday from our first night a wsh to be a father blossoming in my heart. I wish..." He look towards her and saw her smiling shyly. "I wish you soon have that big football belly. And I can feel our baby soon. will you give me that happiness jaan??" jalal look towards her with hope.

A drop of tear flowed from her eyes. She look towards him for sometime and caress his cheek. Them pull it towards her and kissed his lips smoothly.

FLASHBACK END

Jalal's thought broke by mirza. "bhaijaan, bhabijaan ko hosh aa gaya hai." He didn't wait him to complete his words and ran towards ICU

Its been 6 hours. Jalal still sitting on the stair step. Anyone could say he is paralyzed. His eyes dried many hours ago. Its stops blinking. He was sitting like a stone.

Many of his family members try to come to him after he left the room like a machine, not hearing anyone's voice. Now mirxza came and sit beside him. He put his hand on his beloved bhaijaan's shoulder.

"lets go bhaijaans. Its time to go home."

"I have no home anymore mirza. He..." he look towards up " he snatched my shelter. He snatched my warmth. He snatched my home." He said those words without having any emotion on his face.

Mirza's eyes started to flow lookinga t his brother like this. "she will get well soon bhai. She will. Belive me."

"I don't belive in myself mirza. She has forgot me. She has forgotten the love we share. She has forgotten the marriage we had. She has forgotten my identity. That I am her husband. I have lost my home mirza. I have lost my home." Jalal said looking to the front. Mirza grabbed his brother tight cant controlling his tears anymore and cried on his shoulder.

Precap: jalal and his heart...

Flashback: what happen when jodha open her eyes. Jalal's convo with Jodha and...The aftermath of tat meeting




Song: "Chup gaya Badli" song is from the Movie HUM AAPKE DIL MEIN REHTE HAI sang by Udit Narayan alka Yagnik and picturised on Anil Kapoor And Kajol

Edited by Senapatichandri - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago

can't believe my self that iam first yuuuhuuu
yaaay
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Naazrt


can't believe my self that iam first yuuuhuuu
yaaay


RES Everyone..
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Posted: 8 years ago

OK diii now iam going to read your update can't wait yippeee ..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Naazrt


OK diii now iam going to read your update can't wait yippeee ..


diii ek min WO mujhe na late hoga are abhi Maine just ek paragraph hi padha and iam spell bounded with your update mai ise jabtak 2-3 baar nahi padhungi mujhe chain nahi aayega isliye mai to chali aapka update padhne OK mujhe wapas aane me late hoga aake comment karti hu haaye diii kya update kiya hai aaj aapne dil khush kar diya kasam se aise updates beech beech me dete raho plzzz OK iam going you wait for me..
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: Naazrt


diii ek min WO mujhe na late hoga are abhi Maine just ek paragraph hi padha and iam spell bounded with your update mai ise jabtak 2-3 baar nahi padhungi mujhe chain nahi aayega isliye mai to chali aapka update padhne OK mujhe wapas aane me late hoga aake comment karti hu haaye diii kya update kiya hai aaj aapne dil khush kar diya kasam se aise updates beech beech me dete raho plzzz OK iam going you wait for me..



you go and read and i am sure you will kill me after reading...but i awnt your full comment and annalysing and your feeling after reading the chappy
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Posted: 8 years ago
yippeee me second 😃
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Posted: 8 years ago
So this is the unexpected twist in the tale that you were referring to!

Now the story of the lovers would be in the back foot and how Jalal struggles to win back his wife, is what remains to be seen. Update soon , would be eagerly awaiting the progress of this twist in the tale 😉... the flashbacks in this chapter, though raunchy and erotic, were still quite an effort from your end...


Thanks for letting me revisit Darjeeling and mirik all over again, the pictures only amplify the beauty!


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Posted: 8 years ago
Fantabulous update dii 👏👏
There were many ups and downs in this update...
The flashback was too romantic where joja were spending the best moments of their life 😳😳
But at present😭😭
As expected, jo had refused to identify jalal 😭😭
What will jalal do now?
Please continue soon
Thanku for pm
Edited by chaudhary_kajal - 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: --Vrinda--

yippeee me second 😃

Like the flashbacks a lot dear 👏
also like the pics 😃
but feel bad for jalal as Jodha has forgotten him 😭 but I know jalal will make jo remember everything

no comment on memory loss as I also have to show a memory loss In my story 😆
Edited by --Vrinda-- - 8 years ago

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