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Avika444

@avika444

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#111

Lovely update dear

Poor jalal he loves her so much but she isnt interested in him

He is smitten by his wife's beauty and simplicity and is lost in her thoughts but his mind chided him and warned "i liked the warning😆

oh wow thy r friends now ..

Nice start

Continue soon dear

Thanks for pm

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eshalli

@eshalli

Dazzler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#112

Superb chapter dear
Thxxxcc 4r pm

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divya joshi

@divyaJA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#113

This is awesome update yr..
loved it

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Shinchan_20

@Shinchan_20

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#114

Superb update dear...
Jodha decides to live with jalal in his house..
They'll pretend to be happy with each other in front of everyone...
Ohh jo offered him friendship and jalal readily accepted it...
Thanku for pm
continue soon

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Namita

@155pari

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#115

awesome chapter dii!

joja r friends..

jo said sorry for her behavior!

loved it!

update soon!

thanx for the pm...😊

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Senapatichandri

@Senapatichandri

Voyager

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Posted: 9 years ago

#116

guys please tell me one thing...

which kind of things do you want in this FF...

1. jala jodha's friendship moments

2. Jodha's lover's comeback

3. do want any kind of scene between jalal and Jodha's family war about having a lover...

4. jalal/ jodha drunk by chance

5.consummate their marriege not in sense

*** another thing i want to say i am planning a every day after dinner antakshari or musical gathering in Jalal's family (mean every day raat ko khane ke baad sab log gana gate hai mauj masti karte hai...as per CS Mirza is a great singer and jalal tooo...so why dont their love should grow in between songs? what say?

if you want you can suggect some of ur choice which typ of scene or sequal you want in this ff

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Kavya

@Kavya_P

Stunner

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Posted: 9 years ago

#117

Ya buddy ur idea of songs is nice

Drunk jo n jalal will be awesome and in that process consummation is wonderful

But take some time because their friendship need to be strong before consummation of their wedding

Don't bring that jerk (jo's bf) n no War

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Namita

@155pari

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#118

jodha ja friendship moment is nice idea and drunk jo/ja is also good..😊

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

Rocker

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Posted: 9 years ago

#119

Great update.😳Jodha and Jalal's conversation was very touchy and realistic. I reminded a great classic story while reading the conversation.😊

Now,I think Jodha herself does not know what she wants to do afterwards... She is utterly confused and is dragging Jalal in this complication. But glad to see Jalal has confidence in him.😃

Why didn't Jodha try to tell Jalal about her BF before marriage?😡He will be spared from this unwanted disaster of life and could live a happily married life with some other girl.

However, at least they are friends now!😃 Now waiting to see what happens next.

BTW, the shari is beautiful.😆😆

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#120

Originally posted by: Senapatichandri
guys please tell me one thing...
which kind of things do you want in this FF...

1. jala jodha's friendship moments
Highly wanted.
2. Jodha's lover's comeback
Two-three phone calls and 1 flashback is okay; not more! 😆
3. do want any kind of scene between jalal and Jodha's family war about having a lover...
Will it be okay to reveal the secret of lover in the family? You will know it better as it depends on the entire plot.
4. jalal/ jodha drunk by chance
It will be fun.😆
5.consummate their marriege not in sense
It will be good to read when you will write (after the previous chappy I am sure.😆), but I think they should fall in love first. Physical intimacy should come spontaneously from heart and not accidentally.

*** another thing i want to say i am planning a every day after dinner antakshari or musical gathering in Jalal's family (mean every day raat ko khane ke baad sab log gana gate hai mauj masti karte hai...as per CS Mirza is a great singer and jalal tooo...so why dont their love should grow in between songs? what say?
This is a great idea. Go ahead!😃😳

if you want you can suggect some of ur choice which typ of scene or sequal you want in this ff

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