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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

he he u liked their decision.. which decision?? First one or last one??😆

Both decisions..😳

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: avika444

As innocent as ashu???? 😆

Payu innocent word is not exist in our dictionary..
😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
First time I am trying to write a os..
I know it is just a scrap... but do read it.. Plz I want honest comments.. good or bad I will take it.. I know boring os..

Payu this is for u.. thank u for being my best buddy.. love u dear...🤗
But I am sorry.. I made u as jalal sister.. Plz don't mind..
I am dedicating this to all beautiful women in if..
Love u all..🤗
Happy woman's day...

My wife:

Jodha & jalal are happily married couple
Salim is their 4 years kid.
Payal is jalal sister living with them.

Jodha & payal are best friends. They share everything.. both are in one team when they l fight with jalal..

But

On woman's day..march 8th.

Jalal didn't wished jodha for woman's day..

Jodha felt bad.. she became dull by noon.. but didn't asked jalal..

In the evening..

Payal: Jodhu. What happened to u suddenly. U look dull.. did anything happened between u & bhai..

Jodha: no payu.. nothing.. leave it.

Payal: don't u tell to ur payu.. ok bhabi. I am going to my room..bye..

Jodha: hey.. payu.. nothing.. ur brother only..I hate him.. he don't have time to wish me happy woman's day.. how much I mean to him.. I was very upset.. at least I expect he wish me.. my friends are telling to me that today their husbands helped them in all chores.. poor me.. my hubby didn't remember at least.. I am also a woman..

Payal: oh god.. U know about him na.. Jodhu.. still u are saying.. he loves u sooo much.. pp

Jodha: leave it..payu.. I will take some rest.. U fresh up.. have snacks .. I kept on the dining table..
Goes to her room..
P
Payal felt bad for jodha..
Thinks to ask about this to jalal..

Soon jalal came back home..

He sits on the sofa & relaxes. Calls for jodha... for tea..

Payal came with tea.. gives to him.

Jalal: payu.. U?? Where is jodha.??

Payal: she is sleeping bhai.. she is not feeling well.. she already made tea for u.. I am just warmed it.

Jalal: oh.. no.. suddenly.. let me go to her first..gets up..

Payal: wait bhai.. I want to talk with u. Shall I??

Jalal: but jodha?? can we talk later na??

Payal: no bhai.. it's regarding jodha only...

Jalal: yeah.. tell me.. anything serious??

Payal: she was upset with u.. U didn't even wish her happy woman's day.. all her friends husbands helped them in all chores today..& U didn't wished her.. she was upset..

Jalal chuckles hearing Payal..


Payal: I am telling this much serious.. U are laughing.. this is ridiculous..

Jalal: payu.. wait.. let me say something..
Come sit here..

Payal comes & sits beside him..

Jalal: payu.. my marriage with jodha is arranged marriage.. but I wished to have a love marriage.. when I told my wish to jodha.. she accepted me to become my love.. we spent as lovers for 1 year.. U know payu working as a software enginer is not easy job. Lot of stress is there. But jodha did.. she never complained about her work. In fact she did my work sometimes. She love her work.. but when salim born she left it.. she completely took care of salim.. she never depended on some one for salim..
She don't know cooking but she learned cooking only for us.. she never demanded her favorite food.. she changed her food habits for us. On holidays we make a complete mess in the home but she never complained it.. she works for us.. her happiness lies in us.. when we didn't feel good she feels more worry than us.. U are her sister in law but she treats u like her own sister.. she understood even without telling.. she is living for us.. she treats mom & dad as like her parents.. she never demanded anything from us..she never share her pain.. but give us support when we need.. she is a best mother ,daughter, sister, friend, wife most importantly the best woman.. my success is her..my weakness my strength is her. But just a small wish is enough for her payu?? Tell me?? One day helping in her chores is enough?? I am trying to do daily payu.. she do multi tasking.. which I can't do.. she thinks about work when she is cooking.. she makes a points for her project when she do ironing.. always thinks about us...not even a single minute for her.. she is taking care of me salim & u..mom & dad..

No payu small wish is not enough for my jodha..
Only one day in helping in her chores is not required payu..

She knows it what I will do for her.. that is not enough for her.. I am just doing small help only..
I want my jodha always happy.. not only this particular day..
I am trying payu to help her in all things..

She is a god gift for me.. I really don't know she is hurt because I didn't wished her..
If she wants my wish I Will tell daily payu. Because she deserve it.. she is angel for my life.

She came from unknown family left her parents & everything .. & came for me & my family.. living for me..

I can't able to fit in a small wish to describe how much she meant for me. She is my life.
Jalal don't have existence without jodha..

Payu : bhai.. U are true..
&

Jodha runs to jalal hugs him tightly.. her eyes is full of tears..
Jalal hugs her back.. soothe her back..

Payal: oh god... how u here Jodhu??

Jodha breaks the hug.. & says. I listened everything..
I am sorry jalal..

Jalal: plz.. jodha.. don't say..actually I am sorry..
I thought that u should be happy on all days not only this particular day. Plz forgive me.. holds his ears.

Jodha: don't do that.. & kisses him...

Payal: oh god... Plz go to room yaar..
Goes from there..

Jalal lifts her in his hands.

Door closed..

The end...


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Posted: 9 years ago
Payu.. updated..
I know I know.. Stupid.. but bear it..
🤗
Love u sooo much..

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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks alot for writing this lovely OS for me dearie🤗
It's such a beautiful os laksh😊
I loved every word of jalal.. seems u wrote this with ur heart. I could feel how married women are taking care of family and those lines that she made points while ironing clothes and thinking of the project while cooking..⭐️⭐️⭐️
It was so true and awesome dear..👏👏👏 I was quite scared imagining myself doing all these things😆😆

Really I loved this OS.❤️
and the end.. my my.. door closed.. We want next shot😆😆

Love you a ton Sweetheart🤗❤️
and this was not boring at all.It's a very cute os.. I'm sure every girl/women here will like it😃

I love this jalal ❤️

PS: I didn't think about jalal's sis while commenting but Plz next time aisa julm mat karna😭😆😆


Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
I read only first line and I was like🤢
I will never forgive u laksh.. u made me jalal's sis😭

PS: just Kidding😭😭😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awesome OS ⭐️
Just loved it..beautiful 😃
You have wonderfully said the role of women in everyone's life 👍🏼
Happy women's day to all the lovely women here 🤗

Payal..u r Jallu's sis 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
ohk😆
sharmacatty thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Payu innocent word is not exist in our dictionary..
😆😆

Yep😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
Payal must say ur lucky enough to be jalal's sister 😉
But lakshmi let me tell u im ur sister bangaram ok na ?? 😉

😆jokes apart ,now coming to os
Its very sweet bangaram
A women takes care of family office and handles so many tasks altogether but still they dont get what they deserve .
And this os showed how a women should be treated .
Loved ur thought bangaram
Intaki ...bavagaru wish chesara leda??😉
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