Originally posted by: sharmacatty
Hi...😊
This was the most awaiting chapter for me of this ff which was indeed worth waiting.👏👏
I already commented on your beautiful writing so I will write for this stupendous chapter now.⭐️⭐️
Ohk so king Surya became edgy as he couldn't meet jodha in private which was noticed by our Shehenshah. I love this keen-eyed man.❤️
Rukaiya's eyes were so enlarged, it looked like they were about to bug out of their sockets, as if she has seen a ghost. Her mouth was open and her face was so pale that she looked like a ghost.
>>> Ha ha you are awesome. I laughed so hard while reading this.🤣
You have written each single detail of jalal's reaction on seeing Radha in royal attire so utterly and beautifully which made this chapter so fascinating for me.👏👏👏
God, I need this woman beneath me now and I want to ride her until she is drained and shattered in my arms... and until I am thoroughly sated' he thought.
>>> My eyes suddenly wide opened when I read this. I was amazed.😲😲😆
His member suddenly stood to attention merely thinking about it, he felt mortified and got extremely shocked at himself for losing his control over his desires.
>>> Woah!! I loved it,though it greatly surprised me.👍🏼👍🏼😆
Even though he had so many seductive, beautiful women in his harem, his desire never flared up like this before. He instantly covered his member with the royal over coat to hide his embarrassing display before anyone could notice.
>>>> Ha ha I was laughing at this. Wondering how would jodha react if she got to see that.🤣
I liked that instead of feeling happy she felt sad as he was sad on knowing that surya came for her.😊
First time, he felt defeated and that too without a war.
>>> Love makes a person weak!! Though it gives strength too but the person always feels weak in front of his/her heart.
She shamefully looked down as if she had betrayed him.
>>>Liked this. So natural reaction.
"How dare you touch my woman? PUT HER DOWN IMMEDIATELY..."
>>> I took more than 10 seconds to fathom Did he really say that?? 😲And after that I was damn excited to read further. I didn't expect him to show his jealousy openly. Though I was expecting Radha to observe this from his expressions but not everyone.
"NO WAY... You are not excused King Surya Vadan... You are not allowed to meet any woman in private in Mughal palace, so if you want to discuss something with Radha, you can talk in front of us. I won't allow Radha to be with you in private."
>>> I was like Is he really gone mad or what?? Anyways I loved this jalal.😉
Radha and surya's convo was nice. I like radha's curt replies and enjoyed jalal's delight over that.😆
This isn't news... Everyone knows here that she is skilled in disobeying.' Jalal thought while looking at Radha amused.
Oh Yes... she is rejecting you... how silly she ran away' Jalal wanted to laugh out loud Only my Radha can do this...' he thought.
>>> jalal wanted to but I laughed hard on this. I could imagine his smiling face with which he always looks so cute.
Ohk during all this drama surya felt bad as he had a doubt that jodha too started loving him and I really don't care what he feels. I just want him to make jalal jealous in future too. Atleast for one or two chapters.
"You are not leaving this chamber until Hakim Sahiba treats your injured feet." The words were commended with authority, but the tone was pleading and he was struggling to hide the feeling of his grief and defeat against her stubborn attitude.
>>> Aww my poor jalal. Naive and egoistic lover.🥱
The way he treated Rukaiya... My my I felt utterly pleased. And This is the reason I love this jalal so much. Haughty, high-handed and conceited.!!❤️
I want you and your helpers to get trained from Radha properly on Ameri food." Jalal graciously instructed him in a royal manner while indirectly shooting arrow towards Surya to make him jealous.
>>> He's so devilish 😆and I am loving this devil more with each chapter of this story.
"Shahenshah, I love her and her happiness matters to me a lot. I will walk away for her happiness." He replied confidently.
>>> Good for surya as he started thinking like this from now on.😆
"That's too kind of you, but if I was in your place, then I would have never let her go, she can be either mine or no one else's." Jalal admitted indirectly to himself.
>>> See that's the difference between these two men. Jalal👍🏼, undaunted and resolute ⭐️⭐️⭐️ whereas Surya👎🏼, well leave him.😎
Overall I enjoyed this chapter very much and loved your writing too.😊
The only thing I wanna say now is to please update soon as I already started waiting for next chapter and imagining what will jalal do next.
The reason I like this story so much is jalal.You portrayed his character magnificently.👏👏👏
Hope u update soon this time and a long one.!!🤗
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