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nikki

@natashathakur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#901

Amazing chapter di n thnxx for pm di n update nxt asap eagerly waiting for update

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swetiii

@swetiii

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Posted: 9 years ago

#902

awsum
jodha ne shorts pehna
dhinka chika
jalal was like 😲
haha
jo is killing him with her sexy looks
ja too wore shorts
hehe
so sweet

she said it
that they had gone to date many a times
🤣

ja asked jo not to get down
but jo kaha kisi ki baat sunti h
loved this possessive jalal
he held her tigjt by her waist
ahem ahem

he slept in the car
he must b tired
office.. then romance
🤣

what is jo thinking to do??
moonlight romance with jallu
😳
update asap dii

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#903

Originally posted by: ANJIJHA

Thank u so much for allowing me to call u Di.. Love u to Payal Di ... Muhhh 😛 😉
Loue to my lakshu Di.. MuhhMuhh 😉

I didn't allow u.. But as u are so keen to call me di then what do I say now😆

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#904

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

ha ha I can't handle this much innocence avi. Plz continue with ur lessons😆

Even I can't handle this Much innocence payu..

Avi u only have that much patience...plz continue ur classes...

Regarding butterflies in stomach plz contact AVIKA444

Feel free to ask her.. 😆

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#905

Originally posted by: melovesja

Oh Avika ye dinasor wali bat muje bhi batao.🤣

Avi mujhe bhi batao yaar...plz...

🤣

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#906

Originally posted by: lakshmi1403

Even I can't handle this Much innocence payu..
Avi u only have that much patience...plz continue ur classes...
Regarding butterflies in stomach plz contact AVIKA444
Feel free to ask her.. 😆

ha ha

Right.. 😆Ask her only.. That's why I don't write such things in my stories and what I write.. That's actually very difficult for me to explain to soru😆

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#907

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

I didn't allow u.. But as u are so keen to call me di then what do I say now😆

Payal didi...

🤣

Love u too my sister... muahhh...🤗

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#908

Thank u all for the lovely comments..

Love u all..

CHAPTER 41:

Jodha stops the car on the road..

Wakes up jalal..

Jodha: jalal jalal.. get up..

Jalal jerks from his sleep suddenly looks at jodha.. & says... oh god. How I slept.. I am so sorry jodha... I don't know how I slept..

Jodha: it's ok jalal.. get down..

Jalal: did we reached home.. looks outside.. where we are?? Anything happened?? Panics...

Jodha: don't panic.. nothing happened.. get down..

Jalal: but jodha.. y??

She didn't listen him & gets down..

Jalal don't have another option & gets down.. come near jodha.. & says jodha where we...

Jodha puts her palm on his mouth.. Will u stop questioning?? Hmmm.. I want to give something.. I know what u think just a while ago..& I want to give it.. removes her palm..

& places her lips on his lips..

First jalal was shocked.. he didn't kissed back.. he froze in his place.. he didn't expect jodha will give kiss..

Jodha don't know how to kiss.. she just placed her lips on his & waiting for him to take further step.. she slowly just smooch his lips & but still he was in a shock.. didn't reacted..

Jodha feel disappointed & left him.. moves to car again..

Jalal suddenly gets up from his shock & grab jodha hand & placed his on her lips..

Jalal holds her from her waist & jodha sneaked her hands around his neck.. in the starting the kiss was so gentle & slowly it became passionate.. jodha followed his instructions..

After 3 minutes jodha can't take more.. she wants to breath.. jalal understood her & left her..

Both took heavy breaths..

Jalal hugged her tightly.. jodha hugs him back.. he started caressing her hair with one hand. Where as with other hand he holds her tightly..

Jalal: I love u Sonu.. this was one of my best moment..

Jodha breaks the hug.

Jodha: love u to jalal.. but one of the best ??

Jalal cups her face & says...yep.. our marriage is the best moment in my life.. I never forget that day.. I know that day u cried a lot but I promised to myself one day I will make u smile.. see today I did that..

Hugs her again..

Jodha smiles & hugs him back..

Ok let's go.. Breaks the hug..

Jalal: holds her hands Sonu... thanks..

Jodha: for what??

Jalal: for everything..

Jodha: somebody told me that if I say thanks.. I feel I am saying to myself.. seems they forgot it.. & for the kiss if u say thanks I won't kiss u next time..

Jalal: just smiles.. never I won't say again.. chalo let's go.. give me car keys..I will drive.

Jodha: no jalal.. u slept.. imagine if u drive... we will be in hospital may be..

Jalal: Sonu.. don't say that..I accept I slept but now I can drive..

Jodha: jalal u may sleep again..

Jalal: no way.. After all this will I get sleep today?? But I must admit u started to know me in & out.. I thought about it but not only this..

Jodha: I know.. it's getting late..

Jalal drives the car.. soon they reached home..

Precap:

Some morning romance...

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#909

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

I am so surprised with jo... I didn't expect that she would be too fast😆

Loved the chapter.

& for the kiss if u say thanks I won't kiss u next time..

>>> It reminded me what I wrote in last part of OS.😊

Beautiful chapter with so lovely moments❤️

Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago

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Avika444

@avika444

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#910

Res 😡

Unressing 😉

as usual superb update bangaram

oh wow he got what he wished haan 😉

a kiss coming back from his dreamland he too kissd her back that too a passionate one 😉

precap mein morning romance ... how sweet

but banagram the night is still young 😉 usska kya ?? 🤣

hehehe sorry for teasing

update next part soon

thanks for pm

Edited by avika444 - 9 years ago

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