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jasmine87

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1031

Awesome update...

Ja helped Jo in draping saree and enjoyed by staring her.

Update soon d next chapter.

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nikki

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1032

Beautiful chapter n thnxx for pm di

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Geetanjali

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1033

Awesome updates

ja holds jo's ears while sleeping😆

jo wore saree with ja's help was cute.

continue soon and thanks for pm.

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lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1034

Thank u for the lovely comments dears.

I hope I am fulfilling ur wish..

Thanks for the patience..

Sorry if it is not up to ur expectations...

Love u all..

I think it is a longgg update till now..

Waiting for ur response...

CHAPTER 47.3:

Meanwhile in the room jodha struggling to take her chain from her neck..

The chain mingled with the dori of her blouse & with her hair..

Jalal came to their room & looks at jodha struggling..

Jalal: May I help u??

Jodha: yeah.. very badly..

Jalal comes near her.. give her clip to tie her hair into bun..

Jodha did as jalal told..

Jalal helped to remove the knot between chain & dori & her hair.

his eyes widen with her bare back & his eyes got something to view..

Jalal saw small tiny back wart on her neck. Just below her hair.. which is lucky sign for jodha.. she believes it is lucky to her..

It was so cute.. & alone in her neck..

Jalal wants kiss it very badly.. &

Jalal kissed on that spot.. which is very sensitive for jodha..

She dropped pins from her hand with sudden kiss...

Jalal holds her from bare waist & starts kissing on her neck & smooching her back...

Leaving his love bites on her neck & back..

Jodha completely surrender to him.. Soon she entered into passion with his kissing..she lost control..

Jalal make her turn to him.. kisses her on her lips.. biting her lips & nibbling to lessen her pain..

His hands start working on her Saree..

With his hand he removed her pallu from her shoulder.. it fell down..

He traveled his hands on her neck..

Soon his lips placed on her neck..

Hands went back..

Soon he caught the Doris of the blouse & with one stroke he released them..

Her blouse became loose.. revealed her cleavage to him..

His lips traveled little down & touches her upper cleavage...

Her neck is completely with his saliva..

Jodha wants to hide somewhere.. she is feeling shy.. she is holding jalal shoulders tightly to prevent falling..

Jalal try to take her blouse with his lips.. But it didn't came..

Using his hands he removed her blouse throw it away...With one swift he remove her Saree.. she only in her b*a & skirt..

Jodha hides herself in his broad chest.. But jalal is no where to control himself he lift her in his hands..

Places her on the bed.. He takes out his shirt...

Came on top her With bare chest...

Jodha touches his upper naked body.. to feel him..

Jalal again kissed her.. with passion.. He is not giving chance to her to breath..

Jodha pushes more into him by holding his hair..

Jalal hand reached to her breast.. He touches her left breast with gentle..

Jodha feels goosebumps with his touch on her sensitive spot..

Jalal squeeze her breast a little.. jodha moans in his mouth..

He left her lips came near breast kisses it through b*a.. first he kisses gentle But later he bites her n****le through the b*a.. jodha moans again...

She can feel his erection.. even she feels wet in her va***a... to stop it she bites her lips..

Jalal continues his torcher for another breast also..

Jodha: jalalll...

Holds him through shoulder...

Jalal was no where to listen her..

He moved down to her belly..

Starts kissing...

Suddenly jodha got to remember her awful day With jalal.. her screaming her pleadings..

She stiffen her body.. But didn't said a word. She don't want to disappoint jalal by remembering her awful day..

Jalal also gets alerted with her suddenly stiffen body.. He looks into her eyes.. find her closed her eyes.. tears from her eyes..He understood everything..

Jalal stopped there & comes up.. kisses on her eyes..Sonu open ur eyes.. I think its enough today in our progress...silently whispers, I am sorry I lost again...he is getting tears but controlled himself...

Jodha didn't said any word.. hugs him tightly.. silently crying.. she shut her eyes tightly to control her sob..

Jalal pov:

Oh god.. what I did again.. y I am losing my control again & again.. Sonu I know what u are thinking.. how stupid I am.. I am disgusted myself.. I am the reason for ur crying..I hate myself.. But I will be like as same as before.. if I avoid u u will feel guilty.. its better I should control myself.. from today onward even I won't kiss u.. I don't have rights on u Sonu.. I lost them.. Sonu plz don't cry.. ur tears are burning on my chest Sonu.. plz.. I am so sorry... I am the waste one on the earth.. I made u cry again with my stupid actions.. plz I am so sorry.. hugs her more tightly

End of pov..

Jodha pov:

Jalal u understand me very well..

I am so sorry.. I am not giving ur rights.. i don't know y

suddenly I remembered all those things again.. But u are the best Chinnu.. u understand me well..u stopped without telling.. I love u more & more.. plz again don't avoid me like last time.. plz.. I can't take it.. I feel so happy we crossed one more step in our intimacy.. I hope one day I will give myself to u.. I know that day will be soon only..

I am sorry for stopping u suddenly.. plz forgive me jalal...I am sorry..

End of pov..

Jodha slept on his chest while thinking...

Jalal didn't disturbed her...hold her in his embrace tightly.. more tightly..

After an hour jodha slept...

Jalal slowly came from the bed.. wears his t-shirt & went to the swing..

CHAPTER 48:

Jalal sits on the swing & thinks about today happenings..

He feel so disgusted himself.. he wants to scream loudly, but he didn't do that..

He cried silently.. he got to remember that awful day.. still he can hear her screaming her painful eyes.. he hides his face in his face..

Jodha watching him..silently...

Few minutes back..

Jodha slept & but she turned her face to hug him but didn't find him. She was worried for him.. gets up & looks at herself.. jalal made her wear t-shirt.. But still in skirt..smiles at her husband caring. Gets up from her place &change into capris.. went to search for him.. finds him on the swing..

Jodha pov:

Jalal I know what u are feeling.. But actually today is my mistake only..I have to forget it.. But I remembered..I am so sorry...

But now when I remembered that day I am happy u did that.. or else I will miss ur love ur caring.. I will make it for u.. I want to be a good wife jalal.. I know u don't want but I want.. & it's my right. I will take my right... U know once jodha decided nobody can't change my decision.. I am decided today.. chalo now time to face ur naughty jodha.. don't mention adventurous too... we will go somewhere.. But not in the home..

I won't bring this topic again in front of u.. I will behave normally..

Goes near to him...

End of pov..

Jodha: jalal jalal.. where are u???

Jalal wipes his face.. & says.. jodha I am here..

Jodha goes sits on the swing & sleeps in lap...

Jodha: what are u doing here?? I am not getting sleep without u..

Jalal: keeps his hand on her hair.. & says.. nothing Sonu. I didn't get sleep.. so came here..

Jodha: hmmm.. ok.. shall we go out now??

Jalal: now?? If u want we will go..

Jodha: no.. salim sleep will disturb.. he is full tired.. let him sleep..

Jalal: we will go later.. ok..

Jodha: jalal shall we go out..like vacation.. I am fed up with this work.. plz..plz..Plz.

Jalal: no need to plz me this much.. we will go.. tell me where do u want to go..

Jodha:.hmmm.. I will tell u tomorrow the place.. ok..

Jalal: ok.. I will inform uncle & aunty also they will join us.. U will enjoy..

Jodha: what Amma & dad.. no.. plz.. only we..

Jalal: but if all will go we will Njoy more na.. beside salim is happy with all...

Jodha: ufff.. what about my uncle & aunty( jalal parents)

Jalal: if u want I will call them also..

Jodha: hmmm.. yeah call radha karthik Annayya & ur brothers & bhabi... if possible I will ask our neighbors also.. or else we will take all office.. what u say?? Oops.. call Vaishu from USA & don't forget about my Nancy mom..we all will go...

Jalal open his mouth.. & looks at her face like have u gone mad..

Jodha gets up from his lap.. holds his hand ) sleeps on his shoulders..

Buddu.. & stupid husband..

Jalal: y stupid/? Its u only.. not me..

Jodha: laughs.. oh my poor hubby.. we means only we both.. we will ask salim to stay in Amma place.. for 3 days.. only we.. hmmm.. honeymoon.. U didn't take me for that..

Jalal: honeymoon??? We??

Jodha: y?? Can't we go??

Jalal: not like that.. are u sure ?? I don't think its not good idea..

Jodha stand up from her place.. & place her hand on her hip & says.

What not good idea.. now I understood.. U don't like me.. chalo I am hurted.. I am going to honeymoon.. only me.. don't come.. who the hell are u decided it's not good idea. I hate u.. I hate u I hate u...goes to bedroom..shuts the door with big thud sound..

Sits on the bed..with angry face..

Jalal runs to catch her..opens the door. .

Jalal:.jodha jodha..

Goes sits beside her...holds her hands..& says..

Its not like that Sonu.. I love to go out with u.. I am sorry.. I thought u may feel uncomfortable that's it.. if u want to go then we will go.. ok.. I will take u.. ok.. wherever u want to go I will take.. plz. Now smile..U know I can't face silent jodha.. plz..

Jodha: I am the one asked for honeymoon.. y should I feel uncomfortable idiot..

Jalal: ok.. I am sorry.. I am stupid ok..tell me where u want to go..

Jodha: hmmm..that's better.. but my lovely stupid husband.. I will think & tell..

Jalal: ok madam.. sleep now..

Jodha: come & hug me.. give me my good night kiss...

Jalal first hesitate to give it...

But jodha asks again to break his guilty..

Jalal kissed her forehead & says good night..

Jodha: jalal will u give same like this every day??

Jalal understood her.. & says..yeah jodha.. I already gave that kiss...

Jodha:.ok.. come sleep..

Jalal sleep beside her..

Jodha bends on him & places her lips on his kiss him..

Jalal don't have another option so he kissed her back..but lightly..

Jodha can feel it.. but didn't said anything...she kissed happily...

Wished him good night & sleeps on his Chest, hugging him tightly...

Jalal caresses her hair & finally holds her ear with his hand & places another hand on her belly & sleeps.

Precap:

Honeymoon...

May be mostly awaited update gonna come...

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1035

CHAPTER 47.3:

Oolala.. what an enthralling Chapter with scorching moments.❤️❤️❤️❤️

Oh jalal couldn't resist to kiss her neck and lost his control.. U have written this beautifully dearie.⭐️

Jalal tried to take off her blouse with his lips but couldn't.. he needs some more practice. Haina??😆😆

While reading this part I was like

It was a fascinating read my love ☺️ but...

Jo remembered that awful day. I can understand.. Not her fault in this.😔😔😔

What I like is jalal understood her plight without her saying though she didn't want him to stop and feel guilty and disappointed.⭐️⭐️

I am loving this jalal.❤️

But he's again feeling guilty knowing well that she would be sad with this.😒😒

CHAPTER 48:

Ohk so both are feeling guilty.😒

I love this jo really. She was behaving normally so that he won't feel guilty.⭐️⭐️

The way she rested her head in his lap on a swing..❤️❤️

Ha ha jalal was really a budhu but sweet too.😆😆

So finally he understood that she wanted to go alone with him,though she had to say clearly that she wanted to go on "Honeymoon" 😉

Why would I feel uncomfortable IDIOT..

Ha ha.. he's really an IDIOT 🤣 A CUTE IDIOT.❤️

Ohk.. so he kissed on her forehead but she kissed on his lips.😛 ❤️

Poor jalal had to control his hormones.😆😆

Oh finally he held her ear and slept. I like this habit of jalal.😊

Waiting for Precap.

PS: I hope avi won't mind that I commented first this time. 😆 else I again won't comment on this story Avi darling.😉

Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1036

CHAPTER 42

Lovely chapter dear.⭐️⭐️⭐️

Oops Vaishu told jalal about jo's insecurity and jealousy for Radha. But when he was teasing her instead of getting angry she found him cute. Aww the girl is smitten.❤️

The best way to hide our shyness is to start behaving "extra normal" and win the argument.😆

Jalal too got some acting skills from his drama queen wife so he also start pretending now. But I am amazed that jalal knew that she knew that he daily kissed her still he kissed after an hour. That's really beautiful.❤️❤️

But now there was some progress na..😉👏

This time he gave kisses on her cheeks and... Lips too.😉😛

Loved their sweet and cute moments.❤️❤️❤️

CHAPTER 43:

He he she woke up early and jalal got her habits... "Bad habits"😛

I like jalal's pov dear.😊

He wanted to give news to salim also.. Did salim know about this??😆

Wow it was her dream to kiss at the highway.. But I really like it.❤️❤️

Haha he's having fun by making his wife jealous,addressing Radha as his girlfriend but dude,be careful else when she started addressing someone else as her BF then what will u do???😆😆

She too knew his weakness.. Good jo I like it u didn't agree with his conditions.👏

I really enjoyed this chapter dear.😊⭐️⭐️

Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1037

CHAPTER 44:

Maina and jo's covo was nice. Finally all were happy and everything was going fine but...🥱

This jalal is really cute na. He didn't cross his limits after confession too. How sweet he is.❤️

Ha ha in office too he was biased with jo. That's cheating..😆

And she never said I love you.. Poor jalal😆

But I love this jo.❤️😉

CHAPTER 45:

OMG!! The charming man,JUST IN TOWEL,was working in his laptop Obviously,how could she resist to kiss him,to hold him???😆

Very nice u didn't knock the door jo else you would have missed the mesmerizing scene and wouldn't come to know soon that her husband was so hot and handsome.❤️

You have beautifully written their intimacy and jo's attraction and different feelings for her husband. I loved their kiss. ❤️❤️

I was like while reading that part and suddenly..

Pressure cooker...😡

And what's this?? Jalal was embarrassed and guilty to cross his limits. Man just ask your wife once.. did she have any problem with this??😛😆

Her Stupid husband. ❤️❤️

This chapter was so so beautiful and romantic laksh. I so LOVED this chapter.❤️

Precap--- I was laughing while reading precap.. This chinnu is quite same which I wrote in that os. I am so amazed laksh.😆

Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1038

CHAPTER 46:

Ohh.. she was hurt by his behaviour. This jalal is really... SWEET.❤️

Ha ha she was angry at Pressure cooker.🤣 Give one more thump from my side too jo.😆

Oops he was damn angry at himself.

I know how much jo was feeling frustrated and angry with his behaviour but at the same time she couldn't just blurt that she wanted him too,that too badly.🤔🤔🤔

CHAPTER 47:

She cupped his face and he remove her hand from his face. He was really feeling Very uneasy with her proximity and his own guilt.😡

I loved jo's dialogue. She was ready to give a chance ateast.😊

And again our drama queen was back to her playful mode.😆 Yeah how could she say that "please come to bed jalal" when " U sleep on floor and I will sleep comfortably and happily on bed" is much easier to say.😆😆

Again their romantic moment when he pulled her back.

I loved when she hugged him tightly resting her head on his chest but she asked for it. I would be more happy if she herself took his arm and cuddled with him.❤️

Again their kiss was ❤️

I don't know why men wants their girl to keep open her eyes while kissing.😕

Wow jo became expert in kissing. That's great FOR JALAL.😆😉

And she felt his erection against her thigh but didn't know exactly why it got erected??? Naive jo.😆

Poor guy was fighting hard for controlling himself.🤣

I think we will get only romantic updates from now on 😉 and with each update this jo is becoming bold and I am so loving their intimacy,jo's boldness and jalal's sweetness.❤️ ❤️

Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago

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Cattywrites

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1039

CHAPTER 47.1:

Nice chapter dear.😃

Ha ha jalal had a habit of holding ear while sleeping. My niece has the same habit.😆

This jalal is really cute.⭐️⭐️⭐️

I like when he said that salim got his habit, MY Son.❤️❤️

Ohk.. so both are getting comfortable with each other. Jalal used to do romance when she was cooking in Kitchen.. ohh I loved this.

But it's great that they are moving step and step and coming closer to each other without hesitancy.😊👏

CHAPTER 47.2:

This was an awesome chapter laksh.👏👏👏

Oh my my!! Jalal offered his help to jo in wearing Saree.⭐️⭐️⭐️

I so loved this dearie. Really.❤️

All men are same. His gaze first fell in her cleavage and how could he resist that irresistible view??😆 Poor guy was embarrassed as he was caught up by his wife,red-handed.🤣

As I said earlier,best way to hide our shyness is to behave " Extra normal"😆😆😆

I was imagining how he was helping her

And when he was tucking safety pin with her blouse. Didn't she feel ticklish??😆

Ohh.. jalal wanted her to wear sindoor and mangalsutra..Our Sweet Possessive JALAL.❤️❤️❤️

I can imagine,jo was looking so beautiful and lovely in that saree.

Handsome father and cute son, in same dress. I liked that.😃

Indeed the best couple who complimented each other.❤️❤️❤️❤️

I really enjoyed this chapter.⭐️⭐️⭐️

Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago