Akdha OS:**BROKEN SOUL **PART 3 UPDATED ON PAGE 11 - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Kal pakka Bindu
I ll update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: swetiii



haww
i was waiting badly
yeh toh update kar doo


Kal pakka yar
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Posted: 9 years ago
#63

Actually sab predict kar Dr rahe hai story KO
Tha mai use kaise different Karo use ke bare mai soch rahi thi
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thats grt
but i want a happy wala end
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: swetiii



thats grt
but i want a happy wala end


Hmm. Sure sure
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Posted: 9 years ago
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hey dr
no issues even if anyone has predicted it
just write the thing which u had thought
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: swetiii

hey dr
no issues even if anyone has predicted it
just write the thing which u had thought


Hmm...actually Maine bas initial 2parts ke bare mai hi socha hai
Useke bad ka story mai aaj raat sochungi 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: mickeymini


Hmm...actually Maine bas initial 2parts ke bare mai hi socha hai
Useke bad ka story mai aaj raat sochungi 😉



ohk
update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
#69
congrs Monica on ur first os
and about story it's mind blowing
whyvja behaved like this
bcoz we jas harsh words jo become broken soul
eager for further story
continue soon
and do pm me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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PART-3

Jalal himself locked inside the room and just collapsed on the floor cursing himself for breaking the heart whom he was actually loving from the core of his heart.
Jalal-i m sorry jo maine tumahre dil dukhaya hai but yahi tumhare liye sahi hai . I want you to be always happy n safe .

Suddenly a knock on the door and here there was most hating person of his life entered the room by carrying a evil smile on her face .
Ruquiyya-wow jalal tumhara family aur haan woh jodha kitna dramatic hai but so sweet of you tumne unhe kuch nahi bataya
agar bataya hota tho uska anjam kya hoga tum ache se janthe ho

With this he suddenly stood up from his sitting position and went near ruquiyya .
Jalal-i know what i am doing is just for my family and jodha .
dare to hurt them and tum mera evil side dekhoge
i was bound to marry you
tum yahan mujse shaadi karne aayi ho tho shaadi karle aur yahan se jaldi se nikal jaye
i cannot see my love being tortured by my rejection
Ammi abbu se baat kartha hoon n i will fix a date for the marriage
Laughing so loudly the evil lady came little forward reducing the gap between them by throwing her arms around jalal n
Ruquiyya -ek sher billi mai badal jaye ye dekhthe hue mujhe bohot mazaa aa raha hai
do u think jalal u have any other option ???
tumhe muhjse shaadi karni hi hogi and haan the wedding shuld be grand haan
i m a billionares daughter n haan tumhari bechari aashiqui ko bhi bula dho shaadi pe
ab jao and talk to mother and father

With this he jerked her n just slammed the door and went out


Ammi-abbu i wanna talk to you both
jodha nai jo tamasha kia uske baad i wanna marry rukku as soon as possible .
Hamida-jalal beta ye tum kya keh rahe ho
Jalal-ammi i know what i m talking mai 4-5 days mai ruquiyya se shadi kar loonga .plz kal tak sare arrangements kar lijiye ga
agar aapse nahi hoga tha bata dijiye i ll contact any wedding planner
Humayun-jalal beta par
With this jalal asked him to stop n said
Jalal-yahi final hai and i dont wanna talk anything about this


2 days passed on and jo situation was worse
she has isolated herself from everyone

Just then jo's best friend has reached her home
Moti-aunty ji jo kahan hai
Maina-arey tum tho janthi ho ki kya hua hai.plz try to make her understand that jo kuch bhi hua use bhul jaye n just come out of that depression
Moti- aunty ji just leave me sometime with jo i seriously need to talk to her something important
Maina-ok beta go to her

With this moti entered jo's room and found her friend completely different
The glow which she had has completely disappeared
Moti-jo just get up i need to talk to you
Jodha-i dont want to talk to anyone just go away moti and leave me alone .Uss nai mujhe kya kuch nahi kaha moti
He just hurt my feelings and even my mom and dad
Agar mujhse shaadi nahi karni tha sheedha-sheedha bata dia hota ki woh uss chudail se pyaar kartha hai tha mai samaj leti .But no he was hell bent on insulting me n my family
All this while her freind was smiling by seeing her friend's foolishness
Jodha-mai yahan ro rahi hoon aur tum haas rahi ho
Moti-hasungi nahi tha kya karungi .JO i understand your situation but i need to talk to you first about something .
Jodha-what??
Moti- tumhe pata hai jo jalal yahan se abroad jathe waqt uncle-aunty se kya kaha
Jodha-kya??
Moti-jo abdul nai mujhe bataya ki woh yahan se jane se pehle hi tumhare saath shaadi ki baat aunty-uncle se kar liya tha .
Listening this she was hell shocked
Jodha-what r u saying moti ??
moti-yahi sach hai jodha but e baat mujhe samaj nahi aa rahi hai ki woh esi weird behave kyun kar raha hai tumhare saath ??
u know jo before 3 months i had called him n he was so excited to meet you after 3yrs n he even said me that he ll marry you .Dont u think jo something is wrong ??? woh tumse kuch chupa raha hai aur ye baat tume uske muuh se ugalwana hi hoga
jo do something n just make evrything clear between u bcoz i know ypu both love each other alot aur hum sab aap dono ko saath dekhna chahthe hai
With this d lady found a hope that something is there which she has to find ??
Moti mere saath aao aur haan abdul ko jara call laga mujhe usse baath karni hogi .
I think he can help me regarding jalal
Mai khud jake jalal se poochungi tha woh mujhe kabhi nahi bateyga
Moti-i ll call him right now jo
tring tring n many more rings finally the man has lifted the call
Moti-buddu call utne mai itna waqt kyun lagaya
Abdul-i m sorry meri maa meeting mai tha , ab batao kya hua ? kyun chila rahii ho ??
Moti-abdul mai nahi jo baat karna chahthi hai tumse lo baat karo
By this she passed the phone to jo
Jodha-abdul mujhe kuch madad chahiye jalal ke baare mai hai ye matter
ABdul-what??? jalal india mai hai aur mujhe pata nahi but jo ek aur baat hai pichle 3mnths se woh mere touch mai nahi tha
With this jodha has completely now confirmed that something is very wrongg because jalal till now has never kept any secret frm abdul
Abdul has each and every record of jo
Jodha-abdul bas tum mere ghar aa jao
Abdul-yes yes jo i ll be their within 10mins

Finally jo has decided that she will anyhow dig the truth which jalal is hiding from her
jodha-Be ready jalal to spill the beans 😃😃😃


ok guys done with chapter 3
hit likes and comments
i know i m delaying much but seriously i m very much lazy in typing long texts
hope u all ll like 😳


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