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Posted: 9 years ago
#31
congo fr a new thread... and lovely update really felt bad for jalal...update soon... 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#32
its superb dear and pls unite Jo and ja pm me when u uodate
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Posted: 9 years ago
#33
superb dear unite Jo and jalal soon pm me when u update
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Posted: 9 years ago
#34
What is this yar .😲. M toh soch rhi thi jodha jalal ko sabak sikhayegi or ruku ki waat lgayegi but tumne toh usse gayab hi kr dia 😭😡. Or upar se jalal ko nhi pta ki jo is pregnant .. Now thats not fair ... Yh update toh ruks vali thi ... 🤢
Plzz yar jodha ko vapis leke aao .. Aise kha majja aa rha h
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Its really an awsm chappi
jodha died I don't think so let's see what u planned
thanks for pm
continue soon 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Note-> hi my dear lovely folks now I am giving you my 26th chapter of this ff I hope you will surely enjoy it... So happy reading friends 😃

Chapter-26

{ Adgha felt bad for jalal. He did want to hurt jalal. He was like his own son but now he will have to reality check... and will have to face his cruel fate... who already snatched his life... his love from him... Seeing his childhood friend's condition abdul got up from his place... other side jalal was sitting on cold floor like dead body... abdul came to near him and sat down with his shaking body with deep pain of losing his little sister... His heart had broken in many pieces... But he has to control his emotion for jalal...because he had already lost his dear little one... And now his heart could not afford one more loss as his childhood friend. He quietly wiped out his tears...}

Abdul (controlling his tears)-> " people found a ruined dead body of woman in "Yamuna River"... ( in chocking voice)It was completely destroyed so they completed her funeral ritual at the spot (forwarding a duppta(scarf) toward jalal) she was wore it..."

{ jalal looked toward that duppatta with lifeless eyes... it was not so difficult for him to recognize his love's thing... he took it from abdul with shaking hands... Abdul closed his eyes tightly for making him strong because with next moment what he would say to jalal... Which would be made his pain thousand times worst... But now he has to do it because it was jalal's right to know truth... biggest truth of his life... he opened his eyes with full of determination... }

Abdul (gulping his saliva)-> " and... Most important thing is that she was... She was... she was also pregnant..."

{ these few words enough to bringing earthquake in jalal's mind and heart... he looked toward Abdul shockingly... His mind could not digest what it got before few seconds... His eyes popped out because of shock... Abdul knew his state so he started to narrate whole story... the way he got know about jodha's pregnancy... jalal heard whole story lifelessly... Seeing no react from jalal's side abdul tried to call him with putting his hand on jalal's shoulder... but before his hand could touch his shoulder jalal's cold voice hit his chamber's wall...}

Jalal( with looking toward jodha's duppatta coldly)-> " Please leave me alone..."

{ abdul about to say something to against jalal's words but adgha sahab stopped him with nodded his head... they both moved toward gate sadly... before stepping out from jalal's room abdul turn to see his friend's condition...}

Adgha sahab (putting his hand in his shoulder) -> "shahensha need time to come out from this pain... so we have to leave him alone for some time... For recognize real condition and accepting truth..."

{ abdul nodded his head... he slowly wiped out his tears... they both took their leave silently from jalal's chamber... jalal was sitting in same position for few hours... His little world had completely destroyed... his unborn child, his symbol of love and his wife, his first and last love had leaved him alone in this cruel and greedy world... But he was still alive... he was still breathing... he stood up silently and went toward his bed... He laid down on his bed... And slept like a child with holding his Chanda's duppatta... Feeling his love's presence near him... This night was not only dark and painful for jalal but also would be cause of new changes of the world... One side this night broke little world of jalal's happiness and other side this night completed one family forever...}

{After two month}
{ Deewane khash}

"Cut his both hand and sit him front of " Majjit" for begging" yelled furious shahensh

{ poor soldier was shaking because of fear and could not begged forgiveness for his small fault... two mugal soldiers came and took culprit of their badashah to giving his punishment according to their master... adgha felt sorry for poor soldier... he made one mistake that he came to on his duty little late and maham anga complained it to jalal for showing jalal's cruelty and stone heart to whole world... But it was not first incident when jalal announced a cruel punishment for a simple and small crime... In past two months he had given hard and cruel punishment to other peoples for their small and forgivable crime... It's not mean that jalal was not cruel and heartless shahensha or soft hearted person toward his criminal in his past life but after loosing his love now he had fully converted in cruel and heartless monster... Before he used to hear abdul and adgha sahab or other's advice in his decision but now he took his own decision on his will and no one dare to say anything in it... because after it they will have to face worst future... A soldier's voice broke Adgha sahab's thought processes...}

Mugal Soldier ( bow down his head front of his shahensha)-> " Shahensha ka equval buland ho" shahensha " Amer had surrounded by mugal army from all sides..."

{ hearing it a cruel smile spread on jalal's lips}

Mugal soldier ( fearfully)-> " b...but..."

{ hearing his fumble words jalal frowned and looked curiously toward his soldier... other side poor soldier was not sure about his future that after this news it would be secure or not... Poor soldier his condition was same as like deer who is standing front of angry and hungry lion and praying for his life from god...}

Mugal soldier ( in fearfully voice)-> " vo shahensha... king of Amer " Rajaa Bharmal" refused to come to in under Mugal Flag... he...he want to fight with Mugal army..."

{Hearing it all presented members of diwane khash was shocked and became hell angry because a small state king had courage that he was calling "Shahensha-a-hind" for battle field... they all very well knew about jalal's anger ... now amer was fully finished... because after hearing it jalal would not forgive "Raja Bharmal"... but when all peoples looked toward jalal's face they all were hell shocked because instated anger a evil smile was playing on his lips...}

Adgha sahab -> "what is your order for shariffuddin shahensha...?"

Jalal (in soft but with dark eyes) -> "destroy them...?

{And saying it a evil smile spread on his whole face... other side maaham angaa was worrying for his son adham because if Shariffuddin would win this war then he would gain more power and respect in mugaliya court and in eyes of jalal... but what about his idiot son who always busy in alcohol and women... giving his order jalal swiftly walked out from court...}

Adgha sahab (looking toward sky)-> " please my god show some mercy on my shahensha and give him some mental and soul peace...please maire maula reham... Please..."

{ Najama begum's Chamber}

{najama begum was preparing for bed sudden she felt a strong grip on her belly... and next moment she found herself on her husband's shoulder... all maids already had gone no one could disturb to completing jalal's wild desire... With Next moment Najama begum and jalal were laying on bed as completely nude and jalal was riding on her without any mercy... It was his routine... Since two months he chose one woman to every night for showing his wildness on bed... when their wild se...x work had finished then jalal swiftly got up from bed and after putting his clothes on his body and took up wine glass with him... he swiftly walked out from there, living najam begum behind him for controlling her breath and caressing deep bite marks on her whole body... Jalal enter in his chamber in drunken state... His hand was still holding wine glass... Which in every two second was touching his lips... he moved toward a middle sized golden box with his trembling lags... which was placed near by his mirror when he reached to box... he looked toward it for few second without touching it... after gulping rest of wine from glass, he threw it on floor and tightly closed his eyes... With closing eyes he slowly - slowly opened the box... After opening it , he put his under it and started to caressing something which was peacefully laying under it... after caressing with closing eyes... now it was time to face it... it was time to face real jalal... Jalal slowly took out jodha's earring and duppatta from box and taking them near to his lips for feeling his love... And her smell... still his eyes was closed... after giving deep kiss on its... jalal slowly opened his eyes... He looked toward its with full of deep pain and logging and slowly moved toward window... his whole room was shining with moon light... jalal was standing at window with holding his love's last things...}

Jalal ( looking toward duppatta and earring)-> " see "Chanda" today again I took many merciless and cruel decision...an...an...and again I cheated your true love with making physical relationship with other woman... you saw na ... How your jalal is behaving... you feel pain in your heart... You feel pain na...yo...you...you hate me na... you want to punish or abuse me na for my crime... come on...co...co...come on abuse me... com...come on punish me...co...co...co..Come on punish me...

Come on punish me demit..." yelled jalal in anger

Jalal( taking breath in anger)-> " I know... I know that you are alive... I know... I know that my child is alive in you... and one day ... one day you surely come to me for punish me for my crimes... I am waiting for that day... When god will standing you front of me... and that day I will caging you forever...but ( with evil smile) till that day this cruel jalal will alive in me ... Because for changing me you will have to come to me... You will have to come to me ... and I know you will do it..."

{ saying it jalal gave lots of kisses on duppatta and earring after looking moon since two hours jalal moved toward his bed and laid down on it with holding jodha's duppatta and earring like small child... Who believes that if he will loose his grip then he will lose his precious thing forever... }

{amer Fort}

{ doe shaped eyes girl standing at window...Looking moon with tearing eyes...}

" I hate you jalal... I hate you..." said sad girl in tearing voice

{ Battle Field}

{ mugal army and rajvanshin army were standing face to face... after hearing Mugal badashah's order, shariffuddin had attacked on amer without wasting any more time... His eyes were glued on amer since very long time... and now no one could stop him without taking what he wanted...}

Sariffuddin ( in loud voice)-> " Attackkk"

{ other side Bhagvaan daas was leading Rajvanshi Army...}

Bhagvaan daas ( also in loud voice)-> "Attackkk"

{ with these words both armies attacked on each other... Both side soldiers were fighting with very bravery... Both sides wanted to win this war... But one thing made different both sides from each other... one side was fighting to ruling on opposite side... while other side was fighting to save honor of its mother land... Rajvanshi were fighting fearlessly... They were not worried for their life... and sariffuddin knew it that this way he could not win this war... So he used his evil mind... he attacked to Bhagvaan daas on his head from his back side... When his sword was busy with munim khan... Sariffuddin hit Bhagvaan daas very powerfully so swiftly felled down on ground in few second and unconsciousness took over on him... Seeing Bhagvaan daas's condition his all three brother ran toward him... but they did not know that fox minded enemy was waiting for them... as they reached to Bhagvaan daas... mugal army arrested them according to Sariffuddin's order... Now only one man who was smiling evilly... only one man Sariffuddin because now he would demand his desire thing from " amer" it's very precious and beautiful thing... but what he knew that fate had already written and no one could dare to change it...}


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Posted: 9 years ago
#37
hey janu...how r u? kahaan busy ho aajkal
btw awesome update janki👏
ye abdul-atgah koi kaam ke nahi...acche se investigation bhi nahi kar sakte😆
abdul tells about jodha, means chanda's pregnancy to jalal THANK GOD😛
jalal is shocked with the news and unable to react anything😲
now jalal turned into bada wala jallad, he becomes very cruel😡
so jodha come to amer...is everyone know what happened with her?😲
jalal somewhere believe that jodha is alive and waiting to get his punishment from her😃
war between amer and mughal...that cheapuddin day dreaming😆
waiting for akdha's meeting now
update soon
pm me too


Edited by mamtasingla - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#38
Awesome update dear..
jalal is so broken after hearing about jodha's death..
he become jallad..oh god..
he believe that his chanda is alive..
poor jo..
war btwn amer nd agra..oh wow..shariffuddin stupid..idiot..
cont soon dear..
soo curious to know how they met..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG ja changed & became cruel & heartless.. jo in amer... wat about herr child.?????????/shariff attacked amer & captured all brothers..continue soon & do pm
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very emotional part,jalal lost his small loving world and became jallad to get her back as his heart knows she is alive.very well pen down heart wrenching condition of jalal .

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