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Cant tolerate hukka anymore
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Note-> My dear lovely folks it is my 29th Chapter of this ff. I hope you all will like and love it... So enjoying reading 😃
Chapter-29
{agra fort}
{ jalal's room}
{jalal was preparing himself for his journey to amer... sudden rukaiya entered in his chamber like storm... she recently got know about jalal's decision and now she came to jalal for showing her disappointment because before taking decision he did not even do single talk with her...}
Rukaiya(with little disappointment)-> " are you going somewhere jalal...?
{ jalal who was busying in checking out his outfit front of mirror not to so shocked on presence of rukaiya and hearing this question from her mouth... a carefree smile played on his lips... }
Jalal( without turning toward rukaiya)-> " hmmm... Come rukaiya... is anything you need rukaiya...?"
{ jalal asked in cold voice... in pure cold voice... Rukaiya was not so dumb to recognize this coldness in his voice... what thing was now cause of her hate... it was coldness in jalal's voice for her...}
Rukaiya(ignoring his coldness)-> " because hoshiyaar khan told me that you are going to amer for war..."
Jalal( in same manner)-> " when you know then why are you asking about it..."
{ now rukaiya felt like she was loosing control on her hid emotions... But she somehow manned to control herself... Her pregnancy hormones were also making situation more difficult for rukaiya...}
Rukaiya( controlling her wmotions)-> " but me and your unborn child are need you here jalal..."
{Hearing her, sudden jalal lost in past memories when he leaved jodha alone and came to agra... Till then he did not aware about this fact that he is not only leaving his beloved wife alone behind him but also he is going to leave alone his unborn child behind him and it was his last meeting with his lovely family... Remembering it one little tear drop appeared on his right eye but he did not allow it to fell down to show his weak side... he squeezed his eyes tightly to control his emotions... Seeing not response from jalal on her talk... Now she loosed her last string on her emotions... and she burst out in anger...}
Rukaiya( in anger full sad voice)-> " means you don't care about me and my child..."
{Saying it her throat chocked with tears... Seeing her condition jalal took a deep breath and turned toward her...}
Jalal( in cold voice)-> " its urgent rukaiya and I know what are my responsibilities...? So don't give more stress on your mind and health you are pregnant rukaiya and I don't take any risk with you and my child's health...(putting his hand on her right shoulder) don't worry I will come back soon... till then please take care yourself and my baby ok...shabbakhair..."
{ saying it, he placed soft kiss on rukaiya's forehead and without waiting her answer he swiftly walked out from there...leaved disappointed rukaiya behind him...}
Rukaiya ( with wicked smile)-> " I will not loose my hope jalal... You will have to come to (putting her hand on her belly) because I am mother of your unborn chind..."
{ saying it, her wicked smile darker... other side after meeting to his mother jalal moved out from agra palace with adgha abdul and his troop... Without knowing that now he was going like lifeless and aimless monster but when he will return to agra his life totally changed...}
{ after five days jalal reached near to amer and ordered his adgha sahab to arranged camps there... Adgha sahab followed his order and made all arrangement...}
Adgha sahab ( bow down his head)-> " Shahensha... Your camp is ready... if you want then you can take some rest..."
{Hearing it jalal nodded his head in yes... after took his leave... A smile appeared on his lips... a naughty smile.
{ Jalal's camp}
{At night time}
{ adgha and abdul entered in camp but what they saw... There was no one to welcome them. Abdul and adgha sahab looked all around but... But no one was there...whole camp was fully empty...}
Abdul( in worried tone)-> " where is shahensha...?"
{ Without telling anything Adgha sahab swiftly walked out from camp...}
Adgha sahab( firmly to security guard)-> " where is shahensha...?
Security guard (politely with bending down head)-> " in camp Adgha Sahb sorry Adgha sahab i don't know where is shahensha... I only saw his entry in his camp... but when he came out from camp... I do not know..."
{After thinking some time...}
Adgha sahab( full of curiosity)-> " you saw any unknown person who came out from camp after jalal's entry..."
Security guard (as remembering)-> " hmmm... yes I saw one rajvanshi man came out from camp... but..."
{ saying it security guard stopped like he could not decide that he should say or not...}
Adgha sahab( firmly)-> " but...but what...?"
Security guard( fumbling)-> " bu...but I did not see his entry in camp... I was shocked when I saw him exiting from shahensha's camp... because when shahensha entered in his camp then no one was not with him and before him no one entered in camp then that unknown man... I tried to stop him but he showed me shahi farmaan... So i..."
{ saying it security guard became silent... abdul shocked after hearing this revelation... but other side instead shocking expression a humorous smile was playing on adgha's face... seeing this type of smile on adgha's face abdul got totally confuse...}
Abdul ( with confuse face)-> " Adgha sahab... Jalal is missing and you seems like you have no problem and tension for it..."
Adgha sahab( in calm tone)-> " because I know where is shahensha..."
{ now this time abdul got hundred time more shock...}
Abdul( shockingly)-> " you know where is shahensha..."
{ Adgha sahab nodded his head in approval with smiley face...}
Abdul( with same expression)-> " so...where is he...?"
{ but this time he did not any answer to curious man... and instead his answer abdul was only seeing his broad naughty smile... and it was enough to understanding him that ... "Where was his devil friend...""
{ Amer fort}
{Whole amer and amer peoples were preparing for their bed without knowing about that a unknown guest had come to in for testing their hosting... jalal had entered in amer very skillfully. Any ameri guard could not recognize him... Now he was moving in amer market here and there... He came to amer first time in his life so he was totally unaware about ways of amer... all market was still alive but as compare to day time peoples were less at night time... all shop keepers were busying with their customers... Jalal was sat down on sweet shop...}
Shop keeper (with smiley face)-> " What does you want brother...?
{His question pushed jalal's mind out from his plan... he did not want to disclose his identity so he roamed his eyes on all sweets...}
Jalal( signally toward jalebi)-> " I want some jalebis..."
{ before shop keeper could complete his demand sudden whole market filled up lots off loud screams... Peoples were running here and there... Sudden silent and beautiful market had converted in big storm...jalal could not understand that what was happing on there... Before he could ask to someone about it ... He heard a big roar of a mad bull... he swiftly moved his head toward right direction from where big devil was coming as run... sudden jalal's eyes got stuck on a 10 years old little form who was trying to escape a old lady from crowed ... but bad luck of child he was standing in way of mad devil. Jalal could clearly see the upcoming death of both old lady and kind hearted child... All peoples were worrying only for themselves... Nobody was giving his attention toward child or old lady... bull had almost near to that boy and old lady... now jalal could not hold himself anymore and jumped up front of bull for escaping boy and old lady... He held bull by his both horn... Seeing this seen a 45years old lady screamed loudly...}
Lady (loudly)-> " kunvarsaa sumant... ( prince Sumant)"
{ her scream was enough to taking attention all peoples... when they heard that that boy was none other but their beloved and naughty prince Sumant... all peoples stared to gather there... lady swiftly rushed toward sumant and took him in her motherly ambress... Some other young men showed their courage and helped old woman to stand up... Other side the fight between jalal and bull was still running... jalal was jalal who could dare to defeat him... even in his life he did not know mean of defeat..." within next few minutes jalal broke head of mad bull and helped him to get his death... a painful death... all peoples had mesmerized after seeing his courage and bravery... sumant was jumping with happiness seeing dead body of bull... Other side jalal had drenched fully in blood of bull... he also got many bruises in this fight... This fight ran till one and half hour... so because of tiredness and bruises on his body he felt like unconsciousness and with next moment his body fell down on the ground... seeing his condition all peoples got shock and felt pity for his condition...}
{ Amer palace}
{guest room}
{ wounded person lazily opened his eyes and no it was not his self act but first ray of sun was disturbing his baby sleep... when he moved his body he felt pain in his body...}
"Please don't move your body because vaidya ji is still not allowing you to move your body..." warned a mid 50years old man
{ jalal swiftly focused his eyes at that direction where that old man was standing... Seeing him jalal tried to get up from bed but his wounded body was still not ready for this act so result of his action his whole body winced of pain... old man again resisted him for not moving his body...}
Raja bharmal( politely)-> " now how are you feeling young man... saving my grandchild you did great job..."
Jalal(confusedly )-> " grandchild..."
Raja bharmal( smiling)-> " ya you saved my grandchild prince sumant... I am Raja bharmal king of amer and you are in palace and now you are my one of favorite guest young brave man... By the way what is your name and where are you come from...?
{ hearing raja bharmal jalal smirked mentally on his good fate... where he was thinking and making plan and now without giving any extra effort... He was in amer palace... Seeing him lost somewhere...}
Raja bharmal( confusingly)-> " where are you losing..."
{ his voice pushed jalal out of his thought land...}
Jalal( nodding his head with little smile)-> " nothing...( took deep breath) my name is veer and I am from umerkote and I am a painter... I like to roaming in different - different place and making painting of these place and and peoples... it is my first time to coming amer... And rest of story you know...}
Raja bharmal ( in exciting tone)-> " wow you are painter not bad... You know my daughter princess jodha is also a brilliant painter... if she will meet you then she will feel more happy..."
{ hearing jodha's name from raja bharmal... jalal felt strange... his heart beat strongly... Jalal was confused on his heart's behavior...}
Jalal( controlling his emotions)-> " but I listened that princess jodha is no more but now you telling..."
Raja bharmal( with happy smile) oh vo... Before some months we were also same thing but it was wrong... Jodha is alive and safe... it is long story... next time I will surely tell you but now you please take some rest..."
{ telling it raja bharmal walked out from there... But jalal had no interested to listen his daughter's story... He wanted to finish his work... For which he came to amer...}
" arrre carefully otherwise you will spoil my hard work..." scolded angry princess to her naughty niece and nephew.
Moti( in dim voice)-> " jodha... it is not seems right to meet a known man... We will send thank you letter to him...is it not enough then you prepared kheer for him..."
Jodha( in disappointing tone)-> " moti... He saved sumant from mad bull... so we should say thank to him and it is my way to say thank... now come fast with me..."
{Nodding her head on her stubborn friend's argue... Moti silently followed her... Jodha and moti were swiftly forwarding toward guest room without knowing anything about that unknown guest... Other side sudden jalal cold air touched jalal's handsome face... In this touch he felt someone's presence... He felt like his love his life was near to him... With every step of jodha... jalal's heart was becoming more impatient and restless...
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