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Posted: 9 years ago
excellent chappy
finally
jalal is out

poor jo

fb is beautiful and lovely as always
jalal was crazy in love then

thanks for pm
please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Good update dear. ..
No one can save adham from jalal nw. ..
Jodha was so scared. ..
Update soon. .. nd thanks for pm...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Superb update
That ba****d Adham is gone 😡
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow hala🤗
it was jst fantastic...simply amazing😃
mahm was trying hard to md adhm undrstnd n control his angr but poor she aftr soo effrt but thn also he didnt undrstnd anything😆
aww...romeo n juliet😳 ohh my three floors with woodn ladder preety much height...crazy😆
wooh aftr soo long Ja was going to out of the mansion n mahm let him bcz she cnt do anything bcz now Ja was the one who is leading one n also she thought it will help her...poor womn nt knwing digging her own grave with her bare hands😆😉
aww...love Ja Jo sweet simple happy peaceful talks..Ja was soo happy listening her lost memmory life craziness n depth of Love fr his Strawberry cheeks😳😃
finally he out he cm to knw he was powerful bussiness man thn it sure if he ones out frm this mansion he will handle thm easily... n thts wht he was planning fr ther prisioning😉😆
aagghh tjis adham how dare he to hurt Jo whn one Ja md him undrstnd to say away fr her😡😡 he plan to kill Jo n try to push frm balcony😡 u knw all the while i was jst waiting fr Ja😆 i knw he will cm on right tim n save him but whn i soo impatnc i strt reading fastly😆 n as i gussed jst whn adham was abut to push Jo she faint n tht the tim Ja cm🥳😃
with his army😆 his all securities kill adhm mahm men n bfr adhm think or understnd he was grabbd by Ja mens😉 n top of tht this stupid man already druggd mahm now one who will help hr n now Game is Over..
i told u bfr only it was adham who bcm Ja nxt prey n he himself gv this opputunity...😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting update..
Ja saved Jo frm dat adham at last moment.
Nw adham will be dead...
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update.
Thanks God jodha safe.
Jalal punish adham.
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
U dint pme dear :-( nyc update
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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 16 (no proof reading )

Maham wake up and got out of her room ..the mansion is empty and no single person is their ..her eye widen finding the door of jalal room on the floor and ran to adham room but he wasn't their ..she looked for her men but no one was their ..not a single person..

Maham:ADHAM ...ADHAM ..JALAL ..JODHA

She found on the dinning table piece of paper and was written on it ...

You want your son dead body

you know where you will find it

in the same place we first met

your son jalal

maham collapse on the floor ..and then she started to scream in pain and slap her checks ...her son died maham: no ..no it cant be ..their a mistake ,it's a mistake...the forest..its the forest

the minute maham came out of the mansion a black van came and took her in like what she did to jodha till she reached the forest and found men with guns and metal poles as they pinning blue and black adham to the ground and she ran to him and took him in there hug ...a very familiar scene only the sides are different ..

maham:who are you ..and what you have done to my son????adham are you ok??

Adham faintly: its jalal..he knows

Jalal came out of his car and took a metal pole from one..as maham eye widen ..

Maham:jalal..what are you doing ,what adham done??

Jalal: he tried to kill jodha ...didn't you know ???

Maham screamed in anger and pain...she is ruined and she knows

Maham:why adham ???why you did this???

Adham faintly: I am right ...I did right

Jalal: actually I wasn't going to do this ..i was going to give the papers to the police..but now we will have fun ,right?

Maham: NO ..NO PLEASE NO ..I BEG YOU NOOO

Jalal:why all this fear maham ..i cant believe its only fear of jail..it just don't make since

Maham looked at adham and teared ...

Maham: why adham???they wont let us live ...they wont..we hurted them bad

Jalal nodded understanding: I guess ..i am not the only you wanted to help you in your business ...a lot helped you with their powers by blackmailing them or what ever and they ended in prison and now you both will go and they will want justice like me

Maham: I am your badiammi jalal..i am sorry about jodha but don't forget who raised you..dont do this

Adham in frustration :ammi ..he knows!!

Maham:shut up..adham

Jalal: its true..i know,i always know

Adham: the girl told him

Jalal in mention of jodha kicked him in the chin that make him scream in pain and spit three tooth...

Jalal: it was the same scene ...men with metal poles ...two on the ground but the difference is no one with broken bones and a pool of blood..hmmm ..i wounder which one should I break his bones to death ...may be also a skull!!!
adham: maham ..she is the one who did this ..i wasn't their

Maham stunned:ADHAM ..HOW COULD YOU???

Jalal:why you are surprised ..you raised him on (love is stupid)...(love is weakness of the strong)..but I am sorry adham ..she broke my bones but you are the one who hurted my wife ...and I don't spear who harm my wife ...not rukaiya and defiantly not you ..but I am not a cowered to let my men out number you,like maham did to me ...I will take you my self ...with my hands

And jalal throw the metal pole on the ground and took adham from his collar and give him a punch in the nose ..that make him feel on his belly ...that when jalal with his leg crushed his spine and the man screamed in pain as maham screamed and sobbed ..breaking his spine is not a good sign ..paralyzed is definite

Jalal: I forget to tell you maham ..it wont be pretty

Jalal stepped on his arm and pulled it hard as the sound of the bones was heared from miles ..his arm ..legs ...and shoulders ..spine..the breaking bones sound with the mother screams and the husband angry roars give chills to the strongest men spines...

Jalal: I guess if god loves he would have fainted with so much pain ..but I guess he is not ..now tell me maham ..how it feels to see your loved ones in pain,fear and tears...HOW IT FEELS MAHAM..HOW IT FEELS ..YOU WISH YOU WERE DEAD ...YOU FEEL DEATH MERCY RIGHT ?RIGHT?

Maham sobbed as jalal holded adham neck ready to break it...

Maham holded his leg and screamed:NO..PLEASE NO

Jalal:love is weakness..i don't want you weak badiammi

Maham: I beg you jalal..i beg you .he suffered enough ...please

Jalal looked at him and said:why should I ? jodha died every day and you are the one who killed her and didn't show mercy before then why should I ?

Maham as she sobs: don't kill son infront of his mother ...please

Jalal left his neck as maham hugged adham or what left of him and sobbed...

Jalal: I published the papers in today newspapers ...the police will come in minutes ..your son is alive at least for now

Maham: I HATE YOU ,..I WISH YOU DIED,YOU PARALYZED MY SON

Jalal: he touched my wife ,he tried to kill her!!..i should have killed him but I guess I will have to wait,may be god has other plans for him and life in agony seems fair ...or maybe I will let the people you hurt kill him in prison or maybe I will send people myself to kill him ..i want you to keep think about it like you did with jodha ..waiting for death is more painful than death it self ,right? That is my punishment for you

Maham tearing:that shouldn't happened ..my plans always flawless,I cant believe jodha told you

Jalal:what you though maham ..you though you can take peoples life and play sick games for your business ..no ..its over maham...I wished jodha can tell you but I am the one who will say it ...check mate

Jalal entered the hotel room were jodha was siting on the bed and the moment he entered she standed and smiled in relief as he came to her and hugged her..kissing her passionatly

jodha happily: you are ok ..thank god

jalal: i told you strawberry check ..i have to live with you

jodha: god gave me another chance ..thank god

jalal: you deserve happiness strawberry check..you deserve it and i will make sure you will be always happy

jodha: what happened ?

Jalal: its over jodha..they are in jail like you wanted ,I did this only for you..i really wish to kill them

Jodha: I don't want blood anymore ..i am so tired jalal

Jalal: no more ..we are together ..free and save strawberry check

Jodha: I though this moment will never come ...but it came ..it finally came..i will live my life only for you

Jalal: that was a nightmare and you woke up ..that is how we will remember it ..it never happened ..it was our sick imagination..and every day you will tell me a past story of happiness with you ..and I will live it and feel it ..then with our new ones ..happiness is complete

Jodha:we have to redecorate the house ..i don't want to remember this prison and all the windows and doors should be always open..

Jalal: we will..its over..the game is over


finally this story is over😃 ...if you want epilogue tell me ..i doubt if anyone want to read further😆 ..i hope this chappy is not just a nice update becoz nice wont fit anyway😆and god how much i hate this word😡but ofcourse you are free to say it (whisper: dont say it)😆totally democratic 😳

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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for pm and update...dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome dear
Ofcourse i need epilogue soon
Update it soon

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