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Posted: 9 years ago
Sorry lol for not replying to ur stories I am busy but story was superb dear thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update..
Ja smart move made Jo back to his life once again.
Thanks for pm.

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Posted: 9 years ago
update soon nxt part hala..
waiting..
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: divyaJA

update soon nxt part hala..
waiting..


tomorrow morning sweety 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lolo91



tomorrow morning sweety😊



Okk dear..
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Posted: 9 years ago
update soon dear
its already too late

for valentine day special
please give 2 updates

please pls pretty pls
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: detha

update soon dear

its already too late

for valentine day special
please give 2 updates

please pls pretty pls


i will give 2 updates if you want dear but i got sudden work so i maybe a little late ..wait 4 me
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Posted: 9 years ago
Can i pls get the update .
Pretty please.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: lolo91


i will give 2 updates if you want dear but i got sudden work so i maybe a little late ..wait 4 me


okay
its my pleasure
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Posted: 9 years ago

Part 8 (no proof reading )

jodha looked at her room and jalal room like if she is going to enter the heaven after tortured in hell for her sins and that what she literally felt ...what she suffered was a destiny worse than death ..she believed that she must been a bad person that her destiny was to be sentenced to death on the hand of those criminals watching her husband thinking that the love of his life is her criminal (rukaiya) ...but god showed mercy on the innocent girl ...she shivered as her hand reaching the knob and teared not able to turn it and jalal opened the door feeling her and pulled her in closing the door as she sobbed in his hug and he caressed her hair and teared for her ..she torturing herself as the others already torturing her enough ..

jalal: let it out sweety ..let it out

jodha collapse slowly on the floor as he decend with her and tearing for her pain...

jodha: I though i will never return to your hug again..i though I will die alone seeing you and cant reach you ..(then she smiled through her tears as her hands cupped his face) ..but I can touch you again ...all morning .i wont sleep .i wasted so much time in sleep ...I will look at you and touch you ..till I die ..thank you jalal..thank you for giving me this wish ..i will live the few days left a happy blessed person

Jalal as he tears: no ..jodha ..dont say that ..i don't know anything in my life but you ...I cant lose you ..i will save you ..they wont kill you I promise we will live long and together .

Jodha: I don't care jalal...I don't care about my life ..i am so tired and death will be mercy ...all you can do for me is promise me no matter what you will save yourself ..i don't have a chance but you can ..i did this to myself but you are innocent ..i am so scared jalal ..i cant see you hurt again ..i maybe cant die in your arms but at least I will have those days but I have to die knowing you will live

Jalal strictly as he tears: don't give up on me like that ...I am fighting only for you...you think I too don't rather to die and give up ...believe me nothing hurt me more than see you broken and shuttered ...tears is for them and pain is there destiny ...be strong ..help me in our fight ...I have no happy memory in my brain to hold on it jodha...I was born on seeing you suffers ...how can I be strong when the only person I loved in my whole life is wishing for death and leaving me in this ugly world..i though you are a trouble maker and a free journalist ...did I the one who lost his memory or you?

Jodha: I cant see her jalal ..seeing her kills me ..this my life ..you are my childhood friend not her ..you are my husband not hers ..i cant do this anymore

Jalal strictly: you will ..for me ..for us..this is our life ..we will fight ..come on strawberry checks...be strong like the girl who fighted for the truth infront of those criminals

Jodha: I will ..i am sorry I will

Jalal hugged her as she sobbed

JALAL: I know ..its more than can anyone can handle .i know you are scared but I am depending on you jodha ..i love you so much ..i want you to belief that we will get through this see already its getting better right?

Jodha smiled and wiped her tears and nodded ...

Jalal: now let me see how warm is your hug...

Jodha jumped on the bed happily and he smiled and took her in his hug as she leaned her head on his chest ...

Jalal: oh god ..how can your hug be so warm and familiar ..i feel every thing with you familiar ..the first time I asked you ..what is your name and you said (jodha) I felt that ofcourse if my name is jalal then my girl must be named jodha ..see I forgot everything but my heart always has you in it ...

Jodha:do you like to know something about you ?

Jalal: no ..i want to know about us

Jodha deepen her head in his chest and he tighten his grip on her ...

Jodha: we were friends since I was 6 and you were 9 ..we were in the same school and you saw me and started to grap my hair hard every time you see me ..i was screaming to you (stop it )..and you chuckle and do it again till I cried and you saw that and sit beside me and wiped my tears and caressed my hair

Jalal chuckled and caressed her hair: that was mean ..grapping this beautiful long hair

Jodha: it was worth it ..you bought me icecream and kissed my check and I blushed ..then you said(lets be friends strawberry checks )

Jalal: oh that what it came from

Jodha smiled widely and said : yes ..and since then I am strawberry checks

Jalal excited : ok tell me more

Jodha: since then you made a shield around me ...no one come near jodha because she is jalal friend ..even if I did trouble in school ..you took the blame instead of me and punished instead of me and I cry all day for that till you come and wipe my tears again (then her smile vanished )...I guess you still punish instead of me..

Jalal: jodha..please don't

Jodha smiled and nodded: when you become 13 you told me I am not your friend ..i am now your girlfriend and I am not allowed to even talk to any boys ever and I said ok ..with out thinking

Jalal: good you said that because I would have killed who talk to you

Jodha chuckled and said: yes ..you said that

Jalal: when I said I love you

Jodha:you were 16

Jalal:took me all that long ??

Jodha chuckled and kissed his lips and jalal felt happiness of this act ..she became much better remember there happy time and he too feels the happiness on the storys ...

Jodha: well ,you didn't need to say it ..i felt it before I know what love is..

Jalal kissed her passionately..and whispered: I love you

Jodha looked at his passionate eyes and said: we will live long with eachother ,right?

Jalal: yes..i promise you ..no one will hurt you..never

Rukaiya was sitting infront of her room ..looking at jalal room with anger ,bitting her lips bloody from jealousy and frustration ...

Rukaiya to herself: that all maham fault ..if she killed her that wont happen ..

Rukiya started to scream:MAHAM ANGA..YOU WILL PAY FOR THAT..

Jalal and jodha jumped on her screams and came to the room door as maham eyes widen and opened her room like storm...

Maham in strict tone: get into my room now

Rukaiya chuckled : why are you scared of me? Or scared jalal will know?

Maham looked at jalal closed room and said strictly: get in now

Rukiya : why you didn't kill her?

Maham in low tone: I told you I will but not yet

Jalal heared and looked at jodha who shivered and he hugged her and nodded no ..and he is not saying that to calm her down ..he believes that maham need her as much as she needs him ..jodha is maham last weapon...

Jalal came out of the room : is there something wrong?

Maham: no jalal there isn't

Rukiaya: you hate jodha ...you should divorce her

Jalal proudly: actually I wont rukaiya ..no ..it will be waste of beauty

Jodha chuckled ..but put her hand on her mouth to not make a sound...

Rukiya in low tone :what ? you mean ..she will stay here

Jalal proudly: yes ..and you should know ,I am not very happy with you ..infact I think we shouldn't get marry

Rukaiya: no ..no ..i am your childhood friend ...and strawberry check

Jalal was about to grap her from her hair and break her head but he hold himself ..and maham smiled seeing rukiay burn and jalal not caring about her start to be great ..

Maham: I will sleep now ..good night son

Rukiya looked at maham smirk and boiled ...

Rukiya :what can I do to make you happy jalal?

Jalal proudly: you don't have what interest me rukaiya , beside I don't think you will be a good wife..you dont seem obedient and loyal

Rukaiya took a moment and looked at maham room and then to jalal...

Rukaiya in low tone: if I showed my loyality for you ,only for you..you will love me?

Jalal smiled evily and jodha eye widen ..could rukaiya thinking to...the stupid girl is traping her self to punish maham and win jalal

Edited by lolo91 - 9 years ago

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