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Posted: 9 years ago
#91
Aww Sissy 🤗
Congratulation for ur new ss 🥳
I love you ❤️
Part 1
Awesome update sissy Really love it scary story hehe 😆 ohoo jalal lost his memory What the hell 😡
How can u said that 😡 Mahamanga 😡
How can he hate his own wife 😡
Uff ? 😕 Really jalal used to hate her ? sissy 😕 But why am feeling sad sad
Part 2
Ruqaiya 😡 Umm you won't die 😕 ??
I think its jodha's voice haina 😳
Divorce 😲 Is jalal was going to divorce jodha ? 😕 How can he i hate him 😡 Phew He lost his memory 😆
That's great Thank Allah
now he won't give divorce to jodha 😳
Don't trust them 😕 Why umm seems like they are not good peoples 😕
Jodha is scared but why
Seriously I don't believe it is really jodha's father forced jalal to marry jodha ? 😕
Business 😕 Blackmailing 😕 ?
Crush on him 😆
Part 3
Am also asking why she's saying sorry 😆😕
But see jalal bhai no one is answering me Hehe 😆😆
Another fake story 😡
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#92

Part 4 (no proof reading )

He ran to his room and kept waiting as every one sleep and searched for the interior stairs (behind a door like emergency stairs)

Jalal to himself:which damn door is the stairs?

He looked from the key open in every door ..some was dark he couldn't see and some was rooms and light turned on(rukaiya or maham room) and at last he found one and stairs seen behind the door...

Jalal: thank you god ...thank you

He slowly opened the door and closed it behind him and went up stairs were there was three small rooms ...

He looked at them only to find one room of them has light behind the door so he slowly opened it and happily saw jodha sitting on the bed and looked to him the moment he come...jodha looked at him and flinched standing off the bed...

Jalal: I am sorry but I had to see you ...you didn't come all the day out of your room..i know you hate me..but

Jodha: I don't hate you

Jalal : but I scare you and apparently all of us in here

Jodha looked out the door and then closed the door...

Jodha: are you ok ? did they tell you about me?

Jalal: too many stories ..(then he saw a tray of food)..can I eat with you?i didn't eat for two days.

Jodha nodded as he sit and started eating fastly and jodha closed her eyes in pain on him ..

Jalal: this place is hell ..and you are the only one here who I feel save with... no matter what you say or tell me not to trust any one even you ..i cant not to trust you ..i just cant

Jodha in pain: why? Why you do this?

Jalal stop eating and came near her and said: I am not the man they talk about..i am sorry for the pain that man caused you but I swear I hate him more than you

Jodha: I told you never believe there stories ..

Jalal closed his eyes in pain and sit in the bed: I wish you left me to die...i don't want this live ..i don't want to be this man that is engaged to rukaiya and wanted to divorce you..

Jodha: you have to go

Jalal holded her hand and put it on his lips and started to breath heavily...and jodha started to breath heavily too...

Jalal: I can feel you ..i can feel your pain ..from the first time I saw you ..my heart beated for you ..i love you jodha ..and I feel you love me too...so why the distance ?why all this pain..why cant you forgive?

Jodha: you have to go

Jalal in pain: then why you didn't let me die...why if you hate me that much?

Jodha suddenly closed his mouth with her hands ..hearing foot steps she closed the light making the room black ...then a squeak of another room opened and then the foot steps came near the room as jodha started to breath heavily in fear and jalal eyes widen as she closing his mouth with her hand..then they saw the feet shadow standing infront of the door but then moved away ..then sound of keys looking another door ..then nothing...

Jodha opened the door and looked out ,..then entered the room again closing the door behind her ...

Jodha: don't trust anyone in here ...don't tell anyone anything ..keep every thing ,your feeling ,your thoughts to yourself ...listen to your heart and trust it ...be very carefull ..and don't worry about the food ..now go ..go

Jalal came out of the room as jodha closed it fastly after him..and now he wishes to know what they all did to her to be that scared ..then he remembered the portrait ..he looked around on the shape in the wall but found nothing ...he looked in the three rooms ..one of them is jodha room ,the other one was a bed room but empty ..the third one was locked and he knew it's the room that had some one in it ...he looked in it through the key opening but found dark ...he looked again at jodha room then left the third floor..

It was like a forest ..he standing far..looking at jodha screaming for help holding a bloody body ..his bloody body ...he came closer and closer ..he saw the bloody body eyes open as jodha face filled with blood..

Jodha: jalal..you wont die...stay with me...jalal ...I love you ..stay with me

The bloody body eye closed and she screamed...

Jodha: NO ...NO ..YOU WONT DIE...I AM SORRY ...I AM SO ..SORRY ..JALAL...JALAL...OPEN YOUR EYES..

Jalal who is looking at the scene came near jodha and holded her shoulder that when she looked at him..with her bloody face..and said: I do this for you ..only for you

He wake up gasping and sweating ..this dreams always gave him more ..(I love you )..it keep screaming in his brain ..but the last part is not a memory ..its more like his brain conclusion or feeling..

Jalal repeated it : I do this for you ...only for you ..why?and what ?...the room ,I must know what in this room but who in this house would be the owner of this room..i doubt it's the stupid rukaiya ..

Jalal wake up from the morning and saw jodha preparing the breakfast and tasting his plate and his juice ..and he looked at her stunned ..then he remembered her saying (don't worry about the food)

Jalal looked at her and she smiled to him and nodded as he was shocked..then she heared some one coming and ran ...

Maham: jalal ? you wake up so early ..and eating ,I though you wont eat today too

Jalal looked at the place where jodha was standing and smiled: you don't want me to die badiammi ,are you?

Maham widen her eyes to him but a chuckle from him make her smile .. ..

Maham: you always like to tease me like that..

Jalal: old happits don't die easily ..where is rukaiya?

Maham:still sleeping ..

Jalal: I cant eat with out her ..i will go wake her up..where is her room?

Maham: the room next to you..

Jalal smiled and nodded ...

He went to second floor where all the room..

Jalal though: ok the room next to me is the room of the stupid girl that mean any other living in room will be of badiammi...

Jalal opened two rooms till he found mahamanga room and looked at all her doors till he find a room key and he took it ...then he took a deep breath and knocked at rukaiya ..

Rukaiya opened the door happily seeing him..

Rukaiya:jalal ? you came for me?

Jalal faked smile to her hoping the night come fast...

Finally the night came ...and jalal entered the third floor then unlocked the mysterious room ...and his eye widen ..it wasn't a room ..it was more like a safe ...a secrets safe...as if there is a tiny house in this room ..or more like a (person life)...his eyes caught a frame with the shape under the portrait ..he took the sheet off the portrait and his eye widen in shock not believing what he seeing ...

it was the same portrait ..with the same cloth and same chair but jodha was standing behind him in a bride attire smiling at him with all the love in the world and he looking at her smiling with all the kindness ..and it was not painted it was photograph ...the egotistic painting is fake ...and he and jodha married in love!!!

Jalal: I know it ..i know it wasn't me ..i know I cant hate her

Jalal looked at the room looking for more ..he found a photo albums ..a lot of albums ..he opened them and started to look ..

It were pictures of him and jodha ..smiling and kissing ..since age of 15 or 16..then more of wedding pictures with friends ...but non for rukaiya or maham!!! As if in their happiness they did exsist...he was not this person they tell him he was as the picture says ..jalal took out from one of the albums a picture of him and jodha kissing and looked at it ..then he looked at the back of it only to find written ...

"me and my wife first kiss as husband and wife..love you jodha forever and ever ..this life and the next,and the next and the next"

keep blushing strawberry checks


Jalal to himself: I am not egotistic, I didn't hate jodha,and from the dreams i am sure we were in love for the last moment,...me and jodha were in love !!...and rukaiya wasn't in my life neither was maham ..what is this???is it a brain wash ?...and if it was then why maham didn't get rid of this? ..but most of all why jodha playing their game and telling me to play it too ?

then jalal remebered the dream: i do it for you ..only for you

very long update and important part of the truth revealed ..so what you think😃

Edited by lolo91 - 9 years ago
amitaprasad thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#93
very interesting chappy.update fast.waiting.thanks for pm.
SomeoneloveJA thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#94
Thanks for update and pm...Lolo.
swetiii thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#95
jalal found jo
she loves him so much

oh wow
so cute
i was getting a feel that the portrait must b of jj.. a loving one
first kiss as hubby & wife

u r confusing me
why is jo doing this
may b maham & ruku threatning her on jalal's life
poor jj

update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago
#96
O my god !
Such an interesting chapter arousing more n more curiosity!!.
Wow !! Jalal is really being a smart fellow !
Aww! How much i love their lil cozy moments !
Finally , finally he knows tht they both loved eacb othr endlessly !
Really curious to know wt is gonna do now !!
Ooo ! How m i gonna b patience fr nxt update !
Please update soon dii !
Thnks fr the pm !
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Posted: 9 years ago
#97
Superb & interesting chptr dear
loved it
update asap

thnks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#98
Oh WOW. That was an awesome chappy👏
Finally Jalal comes to know about the room and how much they loved each other
The pictures speak how much they love each other...
Just loved it😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#99
amazing
finally
jalal found jo and the secret
they both love eacj other

can't wait to read further

i think
they would have blackmiled jo
that they would kill jalal

are they mixing something in the food

hope the whole truth comes out soon

thanks for pm
please update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
One of my favorites...a tale of mystery and suspense...give me more hala

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