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Posted: 9 years ago
Woww didu wonderful updates 👏
thank god vaishu reached in her room on right time n saved jo n baby...
As expected she gave birth to baby boy n named him salim..
Vaishu n doctor..opps her second mother 😊 helped her a lot..
They supported her in every decision..
Jodha doesn't hate jalal...neither she loves him..he doesn't exist for he anymore..
Finally she came to india with salim..
OMG!!!! Maina already knows about jalal 😲
but how????? Did jalal come to convince her parents after her departure??
Continue soon
thanku for pm
love u :* take care 🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome chptr dear
loved it ... beautifully written
how maina know about jalal
jo take write decison regarding salim but she have once talk with jalal
cont soon

thnks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
😊
Natasha...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal

Woww didu wonderful updates 👏
thank god vaishu reached in her room on right time n saved jo n baby...
As expected she gave birth to baby boy n named him salim..
Vaishu n doctor..opps her second mother 😊 helped her a lot..
They supported her in every decision..
Jodha doesn't hate jalal...neither she loves him..he doesn't exist for he anymore..
Finally she came to india with salim..
OMG!!!! Maina already knows about jalal 😲
but how????? Did jalal come to convince her parents after her departure??
Continue soon
thanku for pm
love u :* take care 🤗

Thanks Kajal...
Jodha luck vaishu saved her.
Yes true she don't have any feelings on him..poor Jalal..
Twist I will update in a while..
Love u tooo my dear Kajal..
Take care..🤗
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: anu012

Awsome chptr dear
loved it ... beautifully written
how maina know about jalal
jo take write decison regarding salim but she have once talk with jalal
cont soon

thnks for pm

Thanks anu...
I will update soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Thanks for the lovely comments dears..
Love u all..
This chapter is little boring.. hope u all understand..
Thanks all..
CHAPTER16:

Jodha: how you know about jalal Amma???

Maina: I know everything jodha.. he met me...

Flash back:
After dropping jodha he waited near the hostel..he was worried.. he did a mistake..he wants to rectify it..
He called to jodha Mobile...
But due to his bad luck Vaishu lift the call...
Vaishu: don't u dare to call her again...she hates u..she never forgive u.. plz leave her at least now..
Vaishu didn't gave chance to jalal to say a word...
She switched off the jodha phone.. throw it away...

Jalal was really worried for her.. he went to his home..came back again in the morning...he saw jodha pale face.. he saw her going to her home.. he wants to talk with her but seeing her pale face he stopped himself doing that...

He came to airport to see her one last time...

Jalal pov:
Sonu I know I did wrong... I am sorry...but I love u.. even after this u don't want to talk with me then ok.. now I understood u don't love me..but I will wait for u..till my last Breath..I did a mistake...but I won't regret..I will live with that memory of u.. I will wait for u Sonu.. I love u Sonu... I am sorry..
I will meet ur parents & I will accept my mistake in front of them.. my future is in ur parents hand.. whatever punishment they will give me I will accept it happily...

End of pov.

Jalal went to meet jodha parents..

May be his good luck or bad luck only jodha mother is there in the home..

Maina: who are u?? What do u want???

Jalal: I am jodha friend..my name is jalal..

Maina: oh come in jalal.. she went to USA.. she is not here.. any work with her..

Jalal: I know aunty...I came here to talk with u only...

Maina: me??? What's the matter jalal???

Jalal: aunty I love jodha.. I am not her friend.. I love her madly deeply..

Maina: what... ??

Jalal: plz aunty let me finish.. tells her how they met & how he proposed her.. how she rejected...

Maina: I know about my jodha.. she loves her father endlessly... she Said no..then y u came back??

Jalal: aunty I took her to my home..& I ra**d her... with this jalal bends on his knee in front of maina...

Maina: u idiot moron.. gave a tight slap to him... u did that to my daughter..oh god.. & came to here telling all this... let me call the police..

Jalal: aunty do what ever u want to do.. but listen to me once...Plz..I came here to accept my mistake... I did wrong..I know that.. but never ever tell this to jodha aunty.. she hates me.. she didn't tell to u people that means she don't want to discuss with anyone..she wants to hide it..& don't blame her..she know about the society...& I am the sinner not she.. I will accept it..don't tell her to in-laws.. sure in few days she will forget me.. I will surrender to police don't worry aunty... Plz give me punishment aunty.. I will take it happily...

Maina: jalal do u love her that much??

Jalal: yes aunty...I love her truly madly...don't ask me the reason because I don't know myself.. I just love her..

Maina: first time after my husband I can see love for my daughter in ur eyes.. jalal will u do a favor for me..
Not for me for jodha..

Jalal: I will give my life for her...

Maina: don't tell to this anyone..plz.. if this matter comes out she will be blamed...society never understand a girl..we will give time to her to settle.. never come to her life again..leave her now.. no need to file a case..if I do that u will get punishment but everyone gets to know about jodha.. let it be with u & me only.. plz I beg u now.. hide it from all.. don't reveal to anyone.. plz leave her now.. her father never accept u.. plz leave now jalal.. plz.. don't reveal...save my daughter dignity..plz...I beg u jalal.. I have angry on u..but for me my daughter dignity is important... I don't want someone point out my jodha..so plz never come to her life...plz..

Jalal: aunty I promise u I will never tell to anyone.. I will never come I her life.. but aunty in future whenever she tells me about to u just tell her that I came to meet u ani.. if she asks about me, tell her that I will wait for her till my last breath...
Sorry for all the things aunty.. I will never show my face to u..if u want me to punish me in future I am ready to take the punishment aunty...keeps his card on the table..
Good bye..

Maina pov:
Now I understood y jodha behaved strangely.. I will not tell her that I know this thing.. let it be go like this only... jalal I can see the honest in ur eyes. I must say u are really dare to came here.. but I am sorry.. we can't accept u..
God save my kid..keep her happy always.. give strength to fight..plz god save her..
End of pov..

End of flashback..


Maina: but y u are asking about him again..
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice chapter but I don't know exactly what to say😕
I am shocked that maina didn't ask anything about this. She never said anything. Poor mother😭😭
She must had spent sleepless nights thinking about her daughter as she was so away from her reach. nor theycould share their pain with each other.
He deserves punishment but due to our "So Called Society", girls are forced to tolerate such behaviour of men😡😭

No doubt he did wrong but we can't ignore that he really had courage to come in front of her parents and accept his mistake. It's not a small thing. His whole life was at stake still he dared to go there👏👏

This jalal is not too bad but yes he was really foolish. I understood his point that why he did so. He thought that she will accept him after all this not forcefully but because she had feelings for him too.When she refused after that incident too then he understood that she didn't love him.

what to say about his stupidity now😕😕 which ruined her life
Thanks for the pm dear!!

Are u going to update at evening???
Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awww !! Diii , such an emotional one ...
Great Gadhe , i mean Jalal k non existing dimaag mein kuch too khyaal aaya ...!!
Arrgg ! How much i hate this society !
For every damn thing , the one who is blamed is The Girl !
Such a disgusted 'soch' they all have !
I really want to say smthing here ...
Actually this is one of Rajat's Tweet ...u would hv read it already ...

Sadly, we live in a society that teaches "Don't get raped", instead of "Don't rape".

I actually , really really loved this one !!
Soo True !!

Update nxt soon dii !
Thnks fr the pm !
Edited by Ashvneet2399 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Payal dii u r sooo fast 😡 😆 !
Update dene mein b fast ho jaoo 🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
wow.. ja dared to meet maina...interesting twist...continue soon & do pm

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