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Sushma

@SUSHlovesJOJA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1021

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

ohk darling😉

very good girl...

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1022

Ha bolne me kya jata h??🤣

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Sushma

@SUSHlovesJOJA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1023

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Well said👏
Sadly this is so true

This is non digested truth... 😭

But this have to be eliminated from our society... how this will happen??? Who will do such reform in our society for woman kind????? These are very big questions which are haunting woman now... every single woman in this society is suffering from one or other reason... from a very newborn to very old woman there is no exception for this suffer...

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Sushma

@SUSHlovesJOJA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1024

Originally posted by: sharmacatty
Ha bolne me kya jata h??🤣

Didu aap bhi na mujhse bhi jyada natkhat he...😉

Aur kripa kaisi he?????

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1025

Originally posted by: SUSHlovesJOJA

Didu aap bhi na mujhse bhi jyada natkhat he...😉
Aur kripa kaisi he?????

😆

Kripa is very fine dear😊

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1026

Originally posted by: SUSHlovesJOJA

This is non digested truth... 😭
But this have to be eliminated from our society... how this will happen??? Who will do such reform in our society for woman kind????? These are very big questions which are haunting woman now... every single woman in this society is suffering from one or other reason... from a very newborn to very old woman there is no exception for this suffer...

😕😕

Ab to inse mar ke he chutkara milega

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

Rocker

Posted: 9 years ago

#1027

Superb nd very emotional update lakshmi akka. ..

Finally bhramal got to kne d truth...

His reaction was expected...

Wow jalal himself told everything to bhramal nd cleared everything that it was his mistake no no crime nd jodha is d one hw suffered everything all alone...

Nd slap was right for her father. ...

Abdi was good today he was nf mom's boy nd took right decision. ...

But chandrika was to much agree with her that jodha should nt hide from them dont she knw jodha from a kid hw she is nd hw she loved her parents nd she will nt do anything like that on her own but no she is so selfish that she cursed jodha nd break all d relation for her brother wh love her more then his wife nd daughter instead of supporting nd helped him she left him with more pain. ...

Nd jodha will suffer more... becoz she thinks she is d cause for this...

But was happy to see jalal stand for jodha...

Update soon akka...

Nd thanks for pm. ...

Edited by 1357raksha - 9 years ago

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lakshmi1403

@lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1028

I am so sorry dears... for not replying.. today I have little work so can't able to reply.. & plz who is asking me sr.. i can't give now. If u people wants to me to end the story..I will end it but I can't give now that.. in starting only I told its a sad girl story.. life always have ups &.downs. not only happy.. it's really tough to accept a man who ra**d her with heart.. so plz tell me.. should I stop writing???

plz give what ever u people feel.. I can take it whatever it is...plz be honest...

Thank u so much payu & avika... u people supported me a lot..

Thanks a lot my cute sweet sisters

Sushi, ashu, sorath, muski, divya, kavya, raksha, kajal, bindu, divya daya, Natasha, rahi, mamta, anu , lavanya, lovespari... & few members comments regularly... sorry if I missed anyone.. u people really became my family in just short span of time.. thank u so much each & everyone.. plz tell me should I write or stop.. thank u my sisters..

Love u all...

Sorry if I missed anyone...

Plz tell me honestly...

Thank u all..

CHAPTER 29:

Thud thud...

Jodha fell down.. ( she has a low bp problem yaar.. sudden outburst make her faint)

Jalal: takes her into her arms.. jodha jodha... what happened??

Maina gets water... jalal takes it sprinkle on jodha face..

Bhar didn't moved..he is just looking at jodha & jalal.. he don't know what to do..

Jodha gets up.. but still weak.. she was in stress from past 1 week.. after 5 minutes...she was ok.. jalal make her sit on the sofa..

Bhar gets up from sofa.. & says.. jodha because of u my sister cuts relation with me.. if u told me all this 3 years back.. situation will be different.. but u didn't.. from today onwards u are not my daughter.. my daughter was dead.. U can talk with ur mother but not with me.. do marriage with him.. at least don't be as like single mother... don't give chance to another man to touch u at least.. I accept u didn't do it deliberately..but u hides it with me.. but society will never say mistake is boys.. May be who know u may love him for time pass & left him... society says like this only jodha.. so better at least marry him..

Jodha: dad???

Bhar: yes.. jodha...

Maina: r u my husband?? Saying this to my daughter??

Bhar: yes maina... then what should I suppose to say?? Should I give arathi for this couple.. & u hides from me.. this big news.. what is it means ?? I am ur husband maina..

Jodha: dad.. I am sorry.. I should have tell to u at that time.. but i didn't..I know I did mistake..I will go away from u... but plz don't punish Amma for this.. bye dad.. takes blessings from her dad..

Bhar: take ur belongings..jodha. have a good life..

Maina runs inside.. jodha follow her..

Jodha takes her luggage..

Finally hugs maina & says.. Amma thanks for raising me.. dad was in angry.. he will cool down.. I know he loves me a lot.. he was just in a bad mood.. don't worry..I will come soon...

Maina: promise me that u won't go back to USA.. plz promise me..

Jodha: ok Amma promise..

Maina: thanks jodha..I know u are safe with jalal.. he will care for u.. I will come to meet u.. dad also comes soon..

Jodha: bye Amma.. Hugs & goes from there taking salim with him..

Jalal touches Bhar feet & says sir jodha is precious..nobody knows her value when she is with us.. U will soon know about her value like me.. don't worry ur daughter will be happy & safe in my hands.. good bye sir..

Jalal & jodha leaves from their with salim...

Maina cries very badly..

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

Sparkler

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Posted: 9 years ago

#1029

what is this??😲😭

I never felt this much bad for this jo but today😭😭😭

I am really feeling wretched.😭 Not only for this jo but for every girl who had faced such situations.

Can't believe bharmal behaved like that. Agreed he was angry but I didn't expect him to use such words for his daughter. Still he cared for his sister only.

what to say but that's another sad truth.

No one love and cared for us unconditionally except our mother.

At this point, bharmal left her. I have really nothing to say about this. I am shocked and sad.

Jalal's last dialogue was nice and soothing in this depressing situation.

Thanks for the pm dear and do update this story as I said before.

No need to consider unnecessary comments of insensitive people who want only "hot and romantic" stuff not only in this story but in every story.

Edited by sharmacatty - 9 years ago