Akdha os: A Time For Love Note on page 25 (2/4/2016)

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Bond_7

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

Forgot to mention,loved Jo's dialogues❤️ and her tension in the morning😆

Naughty Jallu is having fun at her expense😆

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: kajalparijat
Thanku god u updated..
>>>>😳😆
Amazing superb fantastic update payal 👏
it was worth to be waited..
>>> Really??😲 Thanks a lot Kajal😃

Drunken jodha!!!! 😲
>>>> Yup😆

it was totally a new concept..
The way u've expressed her inner turmoil in drunken state..gosh!!!! Mind blowing..
"Then why are you punishing me
when I said the same to you..
what's my mistake if I didn't allow
you to come near me when you
were intoxicated.
these words stole my heart..she made him taste his own bitter fruit..tab jaake akal thikaane aayi 😛
>>> M so glad u liked it dear😃

i loved it payal.
>>> Tysm😃

Thanku for pm
>>> You're welcome dear😊

😊

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: Bindu_nhbr
Beautiful OS,Payal⭐️
I don't think Jodha's problem was that he was drunk,she had not realised her feelings then.

I wish,he found out the truth of the letter,but I enjoyed reading reversal of roles😆 and confession😃

Thanks for the PM😊

Thanks bindu😃

Yup but that was in serial.. I brought some changes in this os😉😛

reversal of roles😆

Thankyou dearie for commenting😊

You're welcome!!

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: Bindu_nhbr
Forgot to mention,loved Jo's dialogues❤️ and her tension in the morning😆
Naughty Jallu is having fun at her expense😆

Thanks😆

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Bond_7

@Bond_7

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

Thanks bindu😃
Yup but that was in serial.. I brought some changes in this os😉😛
reversal of roles😆
Thankyou dearie for commenting😊
You're welcome!!

Superb change👍🏼

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Cattywrites

@sharmacatty

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: Bindu_nhbr

Superb change👍🏼

Thanks Bindu😆

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lovespari

@lovespari

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399

Yeah right🤓
M still gussa😡

😃
pr kyu abhi toh tumne kaha m right phir kyu gussa😕😒

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swriter

@swriter

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

Originally posted by: sharmacatty

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2" color="#ff0000">Thanks janki..😊 That was an os.. can't add more into this😆</font>

But i m super greedy na to
"TO YE DIL MAGE MORE"
🤣

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Sushma

@SUSHlovesJOJA

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#89

Wow didu it's such a beautiful os... thanks for pm payal Di...
Now am thinking tv ppl also should made like dis confession in show... its really very creative way to confess their feelings Di... you are the best didu 😊 👏
I love you sooo much didu 😳 😛

Edited by SUSHlovesJOJA - 9 years ago

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

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Posted: 9 years ago

#90

It's amazing

First of all I am mesmerized with your wonderful skill of writing. Your lucid language and juggling with words are really appreciating.😳👏

The story is a cute one, drunken Jodha opening her heart out in front of her lover just like he had done in the show is something we always had wanted to see😃... But the way she expressed her love is really a touchy one. 😳

Jalal is good like always in this OS- controlled, understanding, sometimes mad at her,sometime sad and jeulous of her old fiance suryaban, sometimes too caring...you have portrayed both his vulnerability and rigidity very beautifully. But Jodha outshines Jalal with her deewangi❤️...when she pleads to not give Benazir the place of Jodha in his heart, or when she utters 'don't hate me'...

The whole scenario after the conversation was divine!

Thank u for giving me the chance to read this wonderful os.⭐️

Edited by Shinning_Stuti - 9 years ago