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Posted: 10 years ago
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Hey guys...😃
so,I'm back with another stupid creation of mine.
hope u all like it..😆

**Soul**


"I don't know anything doctor,just somehow save my brother life",pleaded the heartbroken,hopeless man to the doctor fr his brother life,who is on death bed & he just can't do anything.mirza looked at his elder brother who is just like father fr him.

"I'm sorry Mr.Mirza,but Mr. jalal again n again calling out jodha name,who's this lady, n i think she's the one can save him",stated the doctor about his point of view ,worried fr his patient health,getting down each passing sec.

"s..sh..e can't came doctor, you just treat my bro",replied lost man,felling chocked,he rested his head on glass window,going in the memories of that horrified night.

||Flash back||

"Leave her you basta**d",yelled jalal at surya ,his business rival,stooped so low to defeat him,kidnaping jodha.

"If i say no, then",and a evil smirk touched his lip,coming closer to jodha ,pulling by her hair,smelling her.

"hmm..what a beauty,isn't jalal..?,how many night who have spent with her..?,i know you'll soon leave her like piece of shit",

"Leave her she is my wife,dammit!!",he roared like wounded lion,dared to lay his hand on his jo,making atmosphere a field of battel with his infuriated voice.
surya passes him mean look,pointing gun towards him.
"ok , lets have deal,I"ll leave her , fr that you have to die,whats say.?",

jalal look at jodha with soft,care, lots of love.she voilently nodded his head in negative,of-course she can't see her love, her husband dieing infront of her eyes.her keeping karva chauth,praying fr his safety can't go in waste.she love him more than her life ,her kanah can't play sach cruel joke .

"ok,I'm ready ,sorry jodha",he bowed down his not able to look at her hurt eyes.betraying her ,breaking his promise to support her in every step of blissful n miserable days.

"Ahh...",a painful faminie voice attracted the thoughtful man,looked at her 'shocked',she had taken the attack on her, before she hit the ground ,he took her in his arms.

Meanwhile cops reached to the spot along with mirza n arrested surya.

He looked at her with tearful eyes laying in his arm partialy death, talking her last breathe.
"why did you do this,you know na i just cant live with out you,answer me jodha,no..no don't leave me plz..,your my world,my every thing",he cried like little boy.

"L..is..t.te..n. ja..alal ,i cant see you die infront of my eyes,i know you love me like i do",she placed herred blooded hand on his cheek,looking deep in his eyes,she took his hand and placed just above her heart.

"Remember this heart always beats fr u,i know i'm leaving you at the middle of the journey,but my soul will always wait for you",she said n give him a weak smile,closing her eyes,indicating her time fr leaving.

"No..no u can't do this open your eyes jodha ,and its my order ,you always follow my order na wake na..",he cried holding her lifeless body.

"Bhabhi is no more Bhai",mirza hold his brother,shedding tears along with him.

After that night he tried commiting suicide,can't bear this loneliness,and admitted to the hospital,still no improvement.

||Flash back end||

Doctor come out from operation theatre ,enable to convey the truth to this broken young man infront of him.


"Im sorry but we can't save your brother",

He looked at his brother lifeless body,stood there looking frm glass window.
******
well,he leave this world to go another world far away..
to meet his love.he still remember her word"I know i'm leaving you at the middle of the journey but my soul will always wait fr u",and now he can't make her wait fr soo long.

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so,finally its done..

plzz tell me howz it??..
i dont know yaar what rubbish i have written..its really make any sense...

and ya!sorry guys i cant post my any of ff now..becz fr tomorrow my school is opening and then test .so,i will be hell busy with upcomping week..
sooo..soory..but i'll surely come with a update .probably 1st chappy of moments.
Do it like n comment plzzz...😳

Edited by shikha26rockss - 9 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Dekh Shikhu...maine thoda sa padha hai...par main samajh gyi hun ki hua kya...😡🤢
Yaar tujhe kya problem kya hai haan...yaar kabhi toh mere AkDha ko chain se jeene de...😡🤢
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-

Dekh Shikhu...maine thoda sa padha hai...par main samajh gyi hun ki hua kya...😡🤢

Yaar tujhe kya problem kya hai haan...yaar kabhi toh mere AkDha ko chain se jeene de...😡🤢

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chain se to jee nahi payge to mene dono ko mar kar milla dia...😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow yr amazing os
Lekin tune dono KO kyo maar diya
But the way uhh conveyed there feelings superb
Loved it
Bcoz of that surya our Jo died huh😡
Then after few days jalal also died to meet his soulmate superb yr
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shikha26rockss

🤣

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chain se to jee nahi payge to mene dono ko mar kar milla dia...😉


Tu jeene degi toh jiyenge na...😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I was actaully imagining my JoJa in the flashback...hayye...kya kiya yr Shikhu.😡...rone ka mann ho rha tha..😭..but anyway...I don't cry..😆
But plz yr...thode happy os likha kr na...😡
Edited by -AkDha.Lover- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It's sad one but full of love too. Both can't leave without each other and ready to sacrifice their life. Finally jo wins and he responded to her words and leave .their soul at peace at together. Nice plot and well written.
Edited by melovesja - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: -AkDha.Lover-


Tu jeene degi toh jiyenge na...😡

kya yaar kyu gussa ho rahi h...story to h..😕
koi na next funny hi likhogi..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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it's awesome yaar
lekin sad ending
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: shikha26rockss


kya yaar kyu gussa ho rahi h...story to h..😕

koi na next funny hi likhogi..


Still yr...AkDha ko main aise imagine nhi kr skti...bass...🤢

Tab thik hai...😳😃😛.😃

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