.......Their Moments.......* updated chapter -3(06.08.16)pg_17

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NONIE

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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

awesome chapter Shikha😃

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Monika

@moni_06

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Dad! lm not goin to marry this ' idiot ', I have a taste ", jodha cried out.

serially taste so lame

PAINFULLY! ,HORRIBLE !,DONKEY -EST, CROAKY VOICE '

Wow so well described

These are the lines i just loved and yes i love this song by JB

Coming to the chapter i m loving it

It was frantically amazing

Jo so uncothly spied him and so hilarious

I think in the upcoming chapters jo won't be a damsel anymore

Will me married to the shiznit jalal

Jo took not so ceremonious video of jalal

Amazing chapter

Loved the skirmish at the dinning table

So the chapter ended with jalal's fiasco

I let out a snicker and my mom asked me what was wrong with me

Update soon

A very nice update

Made a smile beam on my lips reading the first line

Edited by moni_06 - 9 years ago

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nikki

@natashathakur

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Superb chapter n thnxx for pm dr

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swriter

@swriter

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+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Wowww
great chapter
I loved it
Nice fight back of jodha 👏
Poor jalal USS ka to nude MMS ban gaya 🤣

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ketaki1

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

i definitely want a revenge section...
nicely written dear...

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Zhanna

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

It is a very lively and amusing scene, as Tom and Jerry. 😛
Thank for pm.

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Anjali Jha

@ANJIJHA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Awesome chappy dear...
I loved it..
Both parents are decided to get married ja n jo
Ja n ja reaction is funny..
Yup.. Bharmal is correct in future both are like to each other..
Ja stolen jo diary..
Jo is giving weird name to ja..
Very funny scene when ja dance n other thing..
Jo is enjoying n making video..
Ja is shocked to see jo..
Jo is taken very sweet revenge..

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Hemaxi

@Rajat_loverr

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+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#88

ooo so your name is shikha
Hi I am Hemaxi
Its a really very funny chappy
Love the way you write yr
Shikha i could stop myself from laughing like an idiot .
Jalal and his dance ...
BTW...i liked the song very much