Akdha SS:Bcoz We R Meant Together Chapter-8 - Page 41

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People r asking for next update and im commenting here
late as usual haina
Sorry dear ,donno how i missed them all
Anyways coming to story its beautiful like always
Freshrs party is full on its swing ,jalal and abdul decked in their bests ,girls r asking him for dance and our handsome hunk is busy staring his angel who looked heavenly gorgeous.
Aww jealous surya ,hmm im sure he will create problems in future .
Dance part was good dear
Now pls update next part soon
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Recap-May I have pleasure to dance with u
But before Jodha could refuse him "No U cant'said the man with dominating tone
Chapter-6
Jalal after cutting his call
Jalal:Finally I will ask Jodha for dance;with this thought and most charming smile Jalal entered in the party hall
But seeing surya forwarding his hand towards jodha for dance jalals blood boils
Without wasting a second
Jalal:No u cant;said with a loud and dominating tone
Hearing the voice both surya and Jodha turn their faces where's suryas face expression from dirty smirk turned into annoying there jodhas vanished glow again appeared on her face
Surya:And why I can't jalal;said as he don't want to loose the golden opportunity of dancing Jodha
Jalal:Bcoz I already asked Jodha for dance and she said yes to me;said while standing in front of surya
Surya:Really jodha;asked looking towards Jodha
Surya: I haven't seen Jalal asking Jodha for dancing Poor Jalal in process of becoming hero he speaked much
Now Jodha will refuse this thing and will surely shout on him
Jalal too has same feeling
Jalal:Oh no what i have done what she will think of me a flirt or a liar
I should not have said that;he thought
Boths chain of thought got broken
With an unexpected answer of Jodha
Jodha:Ya surya, Jalal asked me and I said yes to him;said while winking towards Jalal
Seeing this Jalal just want to kiss Jodha at that very moment but has to control himself
Jalal:I hope now u have got ur answer now if u excuse us dancing floor is waiting for us
Saying this Jalal offer his hand to Jodha
Without thinking for a sec Jodha places her hand on his and both headed towards dancing floor leaving the ever fuming surya behind
Surya:I won't give up on u jodha that easily;said while gretting his teeth
Jodha:Now when will u ask for dance Jalal;said while stopping I'm front of dancing floor
On this jalal gave her a confused look
Jodha:What did u think if I took ur side so I will dance with u
Not that soon Mr Jalal
firstly u have to ask then I will decide I will say yes or no;said with a teasing look
Understanding where she is taking this
Jalal:K if that what u want fine with me but I am sure u won't say no
Jodha:How can u be that sure
Jalal:If u want to reject me u have done this thing in front of surya
Jodha:I didnt do that only bcoz I don't want to dance with that surya simple
Jalal:Oh if that is the case u can done that by Making some other excuse,not by saving me from humiliation and accepting my indirect proposal
Jodha:it means that was ur proposal
Jalal:Ya but not a proper one
Jodha:So when will u ask in a proper way
On this Jalal start bending towards Jodha and stops his lips near her ear
Jalal:Now
Saying this he bow before her while forwarding his hand
Jalal:The most beautiful girl of the occasion sorry correction of the world would give pleasure of dancing to the most handsome man ;said with a proud and high tone
On this
Jodha:Yes I will;said while placing her hand on his
With this both stepped in dance floor
bheegi bheegi saDkon pe main
tera intezaar karoon
dheere dheere dil ki zameen ko
tere hi naam karoon

on wet roads,
I wait for you..
slowly, I give the land of my heart,
to you..
[i.e. slowly, you are becoming the owner of my heart.]
song started playing and JALAL took her to the middle of the floor seeking everybody's attention


Standing with only a few inches between them,Jalal put his hands on her waist as Jodha put her hands on his shoulders. One hand brushed the soft skin at the nape of his neck. They both trembled, searching each other's eyes, to see if the other one felt it


khud ko main yoon kho doon
ke phir na kabhi paaun
haule haule zindagi ko
ab tere hawaale karun

I lose myself in such a way
that I don't ever find myself again.
gradually, I give my life,
to you only..
sanam re, sanam re
tu mera sanam hua re
karam re, karam re
tera mujhpe karam hua re

O my beloved, my idol,
you have become my love..
there is mercy,
your mercy on me..
With the above lines both
They started slowly dancing looking at each other's eyes.

tere kareeb jo hone laga hoon
to TooTe saare bharam re

now that I am coming close to you,
my delusions are breaking..

sanam re, sanam re
tu mera sanam hua re
sanam re, sanam re
tu mera sanam hua re
Jalal:Jo U still didn't tell me why u choose me instead of surya;asked
Jodha:I have told na that I don't want to dance with him
Jalal:But u hadn't told the reason why u rejected him and accepted mine;asked while spinning her and then embracing from jodha back so now jodhas back is touching jalals front
Jodha:Bcoz I not comfortable in his company and his touch is also really creepy;said without any hesitation
Hearing this jalals understands what she is trying to say and his blood boils but jalall just don't want to spoil the precious moment with Jodha so to divert her attention
JALAL- "So it means u r comfortable with me and likes my touch;teased while again spinning her and returning to same posture
Hearing this jodhas checks turns into red and she lowers her eyes
Jodha:When did I said this;complained with lowering eyes
JALAL pushed her near him end up banging her on his chest and
Jalal:"U didn't but ur eyes speaks a lot they said to me that u like my company a lot;said while raising her face from chin
With this both share an eye lock
baadalon ki tarah hi to
tune mujhpe saaya kiya hai
baarishon ki tarah hi to
tune khushiyon se bhigaaya hai
aandhiyon ki tarah hi to
tune hosh ko uDaaya hai

like clouds,
you have created a shade over me..
like rains,
you have drenched me in joys..
like storms,
you have blown away my senses..

Jalal:See they still saying the same
Jodha said placing her hand around his neck - In ur dreams
Jalal:How do u know that u come in my dreams;asked with a naughty smirk
Jodha smiled shyly and looked down again

Jalal:U hadnt answer my question
I am waiting
Jodha:So u have to keep waiting
Jalal:Why
Jodha:Bcoz U have so many questions
I got bore answering ur questions;said the same teasing look
Jalal:So its too ur fault
Jodha:How;asked with confused look
Jalal:I want to know everything about u,ur every single thought too so for that I have to keep asking u na;said while looking deep into her eyes

Jodha:Oh why that so may I know
Jalal:U really want to hear it from my mouth in front of all;said while taking his lips near her ear
On this Jodha blushes looks into his eyes which r full of love for her
mera muqaddar sanwaara hai yoon
naya savera jo laaya hai tu
tere sang hi bitaane hain mujhko
mere saare janam re
sanam re, sanam re..

you have bettered my fate in such a way
that you have brought a new morning for me..
I have to pass with you only
all my lives..
Jodha:U know what today I got to one more thing about u
Jalal:Really what
Jodha:That u r a big flirt;said while she hit his chest with her fist playfully while JALAL laughed
Jalal:Only with u
Jodha:Really;asked with suspicious look
Jalal:Really;said with full honesty look
mere sanam re mera hua re
tera karam re mujhpe hua ye

O my beloved, you have become mine,
this mercy you have done to me..
With this last lines of song
Then he spins her around again letting her rest in his arms in the end and both share an intense eye lock which gets broken by loud round of applause and screamings by all
With this both came out of their lala land and stands properly
Jalal:I think we should move from here
Jodha:Ya u r right
With this both steps out of dance floor to join their bestiz
Abdul:I didn't know that u can enjoy so much dancing with a girl ;said with grinning look
Jalal:The same applies for u too dude
Me too never thought u can ask a girl for dancing; teased with same look
Moti:wow Jo I thought u both will burn the floor
Ur spark was terrific baby;said while winking towards Jodha
Hearing this Jodhas already red checks turns into fully tomoto
Before Moti could continue her teasing the host saves jodha
The host:So boys and girls after noticing everyone we have choose our Mr and Miss fresher
Before announcing it let me tell u all on what basis we have chosen Mr and Miss fresher firstly seeing the looks(make up,hair style etc)
then style(their attire)
and ya of course their moves on the dance floor
This time we judged it without informing u about it
So in all the categories only one pair is fitting that is Any guesses
All girls screams jalals name
Host:Any guess for girl
Since many don't know jodhas name so all boys cheered while pointing towards her
Host:Seems like everyone knows the winners but still I have to announce the names to complete the formality as its my duty
So the winners R Miss Jodha Singh Rajput and Mr Jalal Mahommad
Give them a give round of applause guys
Hearing her bestz name as Miss fresher Moti who was standing beside Jodha gives her a tight hug
Moti:congrs baby
Jodha:Thanks Moti
Abdul:Congrs dude;said while hugging Jalal
Jalal:Thanks dude
Breaking their respective hugs Jodha Jalal starts looking towards each other and Jalal forward his towards Jodha
Seeing all eyes on them Jodha shyly places her soft hand on his hand which he holds protectively plus possessively and with this Jodha and Jalal hand in hand start moving towards stage to receive the titles
Firstly the wise principal mam makes Jodha wear the tag of Miss fresher and make her wear the beautiful crown too along with hand overiing the hamper
Of course next turn is of Jalal to got crowned which was not of course that beautiful as jodhas but he has to wear it along with the Mr fresher's tag
After getting wishes and congrs from their profs and wise principal both turn around to move only to find surya there with this disgusting smile
Surya:Congrs Jodha;said while forwarding his hand for hand shaking
Seeing this jalal remember jodhas word regarding suryas touch so he before Jodha could join the hand Jalal joins hand with surya
Jalal:Won't u congrs ur buddy
Surya:Ya of course Jalal
Congrs man;said with a fake smile
Jalal:Thanks man
Surya:U r looking more attractive wearing this crown
Jodha:Hmm thanks
Before surya could say something further
Jalal:Hi Jodha let's go down Abdul and moti r waiting for us;said while giving her signal
Understanding his signal
Jodha:Ya let's go
With this both descends from stage only to get crowded by all for applauses
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Finally after freeing from the applaudes
Jalal:Phew finally got free
Jodha:Yup finally
Jalal:u know which pic was best which this one;said while showing Jodha the pic in which jalals has put his arm on jodhas shoulder like side hugging wearing their tags plus carrying the hamper
Jalal:perfect pic
Right?
On this Jodha just node shyly
Jalal:Will u go for a drive with me
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Done guys sorry for being late
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Love u all
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Posted: 9 years ago
First to comment!
Yay!!
A very nice update!
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome Update

Lovely lines up there👏👏👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
Nice update, the development of bond between Jo n Ja. Well written about the dance dear. So there are sparks flying between the two. Keep up your imagination dear.
Thanks for pm

Update soon dear, I like this story😳
Edited by RamSiyaRam - 9 years ago

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