Akdha ff **//Ek Vivaah Aisa Bhi//** TH 5 (uptd chap 22 part 1,2)pg113

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RSlovesJA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#521

wow fantastic update dear... at first i was sad bcoz jo kissed ja but he thought its his dream but at the end he pay back that shocking jo...jealous jo was nice...hope this hide & seek wil end soon..continue soon & do pm

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sho123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#522

it's mind blowing Di
poor Jo is burning in jealousy
oh Jo's creative idea regarding theme wow
and story behind gabbars name also good
best part was when Jo ask ja did he like her idea and the way he replied 😳
thanks for pm
continue soon 😊

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lakshmi1403

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Posted: 9 years ago

#523

Avi baby... Superb update...

Finally Jodha realized...

Morning scene was nice...

Poor Jalal trying to ignore but he can't able tooo...

Ending was sooo good...

Expecting more romance from u baby...

Thanks for the pm...

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#524

Originally posted by: harshu27
wonderful update ...so finally jalal told his feelings to mirza bt not yet confessed to jo... 😆 awsum... 😉 hopefully jo too comes to knw her feelings fr jalal... 😛 and waiting fr der confessions... 😉 der dance was d best one... 😛 loved reading it...update soon... 😛

Thank u so much harshu for the lovely comment dear
will update soon

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#525

Originally posted by: natashathakur
Awesome chapter n thnxx for pm n happy new year

Thank u so much dear
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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#526

Originally posted by: 1357raksha
wow 1 more lovely update for u avika akka... Thank u so much rakshu
jalal morning view was so cute... yup it was 😉
nd good to knw he told everything to mirza so he can makes plans to make jodha understand her feelings for jalal... hmm he has to share this good news with someone na 😉
d way he consoled jodha was so sweet in just 4 simply steps... heheheh she cant stay angry for longer right
nd d way jodha reacted was that was so cute I loved it... jodhas cuteness overloaded
haha poor jodha struggling with saree ... ya it very difficult to put it on at starting... haaan rakshu , personal experience 😉
nd what a scene he say blow him off... nd his jealousy was on peak when rahim asked jodha for a dance. ... jalal and his jealousy
but d end they danced together nd d last part was so cute ... glad u liked this part dear
loved it totally akka... thanks again rakshu
update next part soon. ... sure bangaram
nd thanks for pm. ...