Akdha ff **//Ek Vivaah Aisa Bhi//** TH 5 (uptd chap 22 part 1,2)pg113

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Mavaddat

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Posted: 9 years ago

#361

hi avi di
sorry for late comment for the rest 2 chapters
I was hell busy, and some problem were their . But now here m commenting .
both chapters are awesome, JALAL was tensed and finally he was able to figured out his feeling for his gabbar that is love 😳
JALAL changed behaviour and his gaze making JODHA uncomfortable, but they both understand each other so much . She understood y JALAL was angry on her because she cared for her and JALAL apologized too .
both the chapters were awesome, u penned down each word so beautifully and clearly. Loved each and every word . and update soon waiting for next chapter and yes thanks for the pm me 😊

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Mushat

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Posted: 9 years ago

#362

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399
Nishu diii 🤗...
Kaise ho app??
Mu j b chahiye update hehehe...
Dii update plllsss

Ashu 🤗
m good. .
tum batao ??
haan di update

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Ashvneet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#363

Originally posted by: mushat

Ashu 🤗
m good. .
tum batao ??
haan di update

Mai b good 😳

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Avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#364

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Posted: 9 years ago

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RSlovesJA

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Posted: 9 years ago

#366

Wow super duper. ..loved it. ...continue soon nd do pm

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Ashvneet

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Posted: 9 years ago

#367

Sorry dii...m soo late h na .

But fir b m 2nd 🤣.

Yipeee!😆

Ok ok coming to the chapter .

U truly deserve a biiiggg hug dii 🤗.

It was Fantabulous ! Just looved it !

Initially , while reading it , I was a little confused about all the happenings , tht tree n all , but read krne k baad i got to know tht it was all a dream .

I must u tht dream part was just Amazing 👏 ! Seriously dii , such a thoughtful one it was !

Her loosing Surya , feeling lonely n thn getting the only support , the love , actually the onlt True Love , Her Husband , Her Jalal ! This was beyond imagination ! Superbb dii !

Kya Jodha , he isn't only ur friend duffer , he is ur husband . uff! Dono ek hi track pe chl re h .

Kahi confess kr diya to frndship toot jayegi ! Dimaag khraab h dono ka huh ! Idiots !

Beta Jalal ek baar kr k dekho , fir dekho tum kta kya hota h 😉😆 !

Uff ! Ye Jalal naa ! Confess to krta h ni , apne hormones pe control rakha ni jaata iss se 🤣

Jahaa dekho vahi chalu 🤣.

But this scene was soo 😳 !

N jb Jodha waapis aayi n ... 😳 ! Uff !

Ye Jalal naa sach mein pitega ab muj se !

Sb kuch sb ko btata h bs ek jisse btaana chahiye usse hi ni btata huh !

N ye dekho Mirza ki gaadi to chal padi ! Jalal teri kb chalegi ? 😡

Kuch sekh ! 😡

N dii Hosh 🤣...

Bichaara 🤣 !

But ye iska naya bakra i mean naya crush kon aa gya ? 😕

Dii vo last waala edit ⭐️ sooo beautiful 😳 !

Just loved loved loved loved this one !

Ab please update soon !

Thnks fr the pm !

N yss Love you !

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sho123

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Posted: 9 years ago

#368

res
unres
chappi is cut
Jo's dream about her past surya and present and saviour jalal is wow
but she is thinking that she don't deserve jalal here our Jalal can't able to control his feelings
eager to see jos acceptance for her feelings for jalal
continue soon
thanks for pm
love u di

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rameshwari11

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Posted: 9 years ago

#369

chap is very nice and good yaar always you put avoid jalal and make her not she deserve he is friend yaar some times its get interesting to read but alwyas you put them confuse soon meand after 5 or 6 chap yaar understand ow long app keechutheho . cretain point you bring them it give more interest please next chap confess them yaar

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divya joshi

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Posted: 9 years ago

#370

Oh this is damm amazing chppy..
i mean first jodha ka dream its awesome yar...
jalal..hahah seriously bahut tuff hota hoga khud p control krna hehe..poor souls love each other but cant confess..
Hoshu ka ek aur sapna tut gya..Patthar k sanam..oh god damm funny yar..
jalal to like full latyo in jo pyar..haha..
but abbi y new entry kiski h..??
seriuosly i really enjoyed it..
maza aa gya..
update soon nxt part..want to know who is SHE..??