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9948727516

@9948727516

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: swriter
Nice concept buddy plz update nex part so soon and plz start story with atifa'entry because cv ne iss topic ka kachara kar diya😡
Plz update soon

thanq

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Mavaddat

@Mavi_16_2

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: 9948727516
BY THE WAY MY NAME IS SUSHI

oh... lovely name
I love to play sushi in mobile and I hope its a kind of food too 😉

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sorathsheikh

@sorathsheikh

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Mavaddat
😕

kya hua mavi😆

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sorathsheikh

@sorathsheikh

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#14

Hey sushi 😊

Welcome to the forum 😃

Congratulation for your first story 😳

and do pm me 😳 when ever you update 😊

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priyanka

@Priyankaakdha

Sparkler

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#15

Congo for ur story .. I would love to read it .. I also wnted this concept to be showed in show .. But alas cvs r useless ...plzz continue soon

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Shatakshi

@Gupta.Shatakshi

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#16

Congrats for ur first story

Nice concept

Pls continue soon

And pm me when u update

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Shinning_Stuti

@Shinning_Stuti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#17

Will love to read a new story on Atifa track from your perspective. Hope we will get to see a more sensible Jalal and Jodha as a trustful passionate wife in your story.😊

Pm me too if possible.😳

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9948727516

@9948727516

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#18

HI EVERY ONE THANQ EVERY ONE FOR UR LOVE SO HERE IS CHAPTER 1

JALAL : HUME MAUF KAR DIJIYE JODHA HUM SIRF AAPKO YEH SACH ISLIYE NAHI BATAYA KYUNKI HUM NAHI CHAHTE KI APKI ZINDAGI KO KOYI KHATRA HO

JODHA : AAP SHEHANSHAH HAI AAP KUCH BHI KARE WOH SAHI HAI AUR AAP HI NE THOH KAHA THA KI AAP KISE KE SAATH KUCH BHI KAR SAKTHE HAI .

JALAL : AAP AISA MAT KAHIYE AAP JANTE HAI HUM AAPSE KITNA MOHA BBAT KARTE HAI .

JODHA : REHNE DIJIYE HUM APPSE KOI SHIKHAYAT NAHI KAR RAHE HAI . APP HAMARE SAATH KUCH BHI KARE KAHE HUM SAHE AUR SUNE PARANTU AB HUM SE AUR NAHI HOGA HUM BOHUT TOOT CHUKHE HAI HUM AAPSE EK VINATI KARTE HAI KI AAP YAHA SE CHALE JAYIYE AGAR AAP HUMSE TANIK BHI PREM KARTE HAI YA HAMARII KHUSHI CHAHTE HAI THOH KHABHI HUMSE BAAT KARNE KI KHOSHISH MAT KIJIYEGA . ABSE AAPKE LIYE JODHA MAR CHUKI HAI 😭. AAPKE LIYE AAPKI MANORANJAN KARNE KE LIYE BAHUT SARE BEGUME HAI . HUM AAJ TAK YEH SOCHTE AAYE KI AAP HUM SE BAHUT PREM KARTE HAI . LEKIN AAJ HUME PEHLI BAAR LAG RAHA HAI KI HUM AAPSE PREM KARKE BAHUT GALAT KIYA HAI. HUM AAPKI DHRISHTI MEIN SIRF EK BACHA PAIDA KARNE WALI AUR APNE MONORANJAN KE LIYE UPAYOG KARNE WALI STRII HAI BUS AUR KUCH NAHI. BHAGWAN KE LIYE AB AUR SAFAYI DENE KI PRAYAS MAT KIJIYE . CHALE JAYIYE DWARR US TARAF HAI AND SHE SHOWED HIM THE WAY PAINFULLY

HEARING THIS JALAL WENT OUT IMMEDIATELY AND CRIED HIS HEART LOUDLY AND BROKE EVERY THING WITCH CAUGHT HIS SIGHT.

PRECAP: BEGUM SAHIBA AAP HI HAMA RE KUCH MADAD KAR SAKTE HAI

MANA YE SHORT HAI PAR MUJHE FAST TYPING NAHI AATI SORRY SORRY FOR MISTAKES YOURS SUSHI THANQ 😉😉

Edited by 9948727516 - 9 years ago