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Rahi

@Rahiramesh

Voyager

Posted: 9 years ago

#551

O God!
What is all this? How could Jalal do something like that
Poor Jo, I am so sad now
I hate people with animalistic approach towards women
Now what will happen😔

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P.Jyothi

@pandrangijyothi

Navigator

Posted: 9 years ago

#552

Jala raped jodha...! I don't believe. Hope this is somebody's dream. Continue soon.

Edited by pandrangijyothi - 9 years ago

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ajuswa19pm

@ajuswa19pm

Explorer

Posted: 9 years ago

#553

awww soru baby u r back!!!!!!!!!!🤗

missed u alot!😳 this was a shock/!😲

where were u yaar for such a long tym?

but happy to c u back!🤗

n about the part it was so gud! u used d true

story i really feel this is so unjust! for a 14 years old

child to be abused like that! really hope this is not true!

coz if jalal did so na this is so gonna be inhuman act if his!

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hala

@lolo91

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#554

hi soru baby sorry for reading your update that late i dont have an excuse for it but i know u will understand and now am sure i cant wait for next

this was my reaction reading your chapter😲

jalal raped jodha like an animal and that multi times😭 means he killed her 😭 that is the worst sin can a boy do 😭

i am so worried about jodha now ..i wish i can take her in my arms and cry 😭 you opened a painful subject and i am so proud of you ..i really do 👏

i just can imagine our jalal an animal 😡 but we will see how the story goes 😊

please soru update next part soon and dont discontinue it 😡

i am really sad about that its true story and unfortunatly rape is every where and in every country and even children suffer from it

its stories of milion of girls who dies every day a breath enter there lungs😭

hating there bodies that still feels the claws of that animal

and blaming them selves on there own pain😭

then the community looking at them as if they are the criminals

like blaming a pray and leaving the hunter

thanks for pm soru

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sorathsheikh

@sorathsheikh

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#555

Originally posted by: eshalli
Very nyccc ff

Thanks sis 😃

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sorathsheikh

@sorathsheikh

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#556

Originally posted by: CindyTruong
👏😃

😆😃

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sorathsheikh

@sorathsheikh

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#557

Originally posted by: chaudhary_kajal
Res
unress
babyyy tonns of hugs 🤗 🤗 kisses :* :* for such a marvellous chapter..
I thoroughly enjoyed it sweety...
Jodha was tnsd coz she thought that she isn't looking beautiful..she was not coming in front of jalal but after so mch compelling by her cousins, she somehow came downstairs and jalal was clean bowled by her beauty
ring exchange part was very cute...
Jodha's dance for jalal!!!!
Poor jalal couldn't believe that jo is actually dancing 😉
joja's couple dance was sooo romantic and passionate ❤️
Okay now coming to comedy part 🤣
haayeee bechari vasu to barbaad ho gyi 🤣
ahem ahem Jawani zindabad 🤣 🤣 gosh!!!
ye titliyan kbhi nhi sudhrengi...sabke samne jalal ko ajeeb ajeeb names se bula diya 😆
aur ye kisko le aayi thi dance krwane k liye 🤣 🤣
pics are as usual damn hilarious 🤣
thanku soo mch for surprise..i loved it 😃
thnku for pm
continue soon