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Hey buddy don't stop story but plz make some changes in it.
First plz change your cs. It is hell confusing
Second plz make your story little predictable because we have no idea about it.
Your story good buddy if you will make some changes then it will be became awesome.
If you hurt then sorry because i told it as your friend 😊
Love you buddy

Originally posted by: swriter

Hey buddy don't stop story but plz make some changes in it.
First plz change your cs. It is hell confusing
Second plz make your story little predictable because we have no idea about it.
Your story good buddy if you will make some changes then it will be became awesome.
If you hurt then sorry because i told it as your friend 😊
Love you buddy

Nice n Plzz Don't Stop

Originally posted by: Swasan

Nice n Plzz Don't Stop

Originally posted by: natashathakur

Lovely n thnxx for pm

I just finished to read all the chapters. The character sketch was very much interesting and the casting is superb😉

Originally posted by: Shinning_Stuti

I just finished to read all the chapters. The character sketch was very much interesting and the casting is superb😉

The story had started with a sad environment but your writing style is so entertaining that I can't stop laughing while proceeding reading.😆

The flashback part is so funny.🤣 Jodha's mother is terrific!!🤣🤣

Update soon.😳

Originally posted by: --HANSA--

yaar dont do this

Originally posted by: swetiii

awsum soru
hahahaha
bechara ja ki ijjat loot li uss tharki bhuddi ne

wow
ja kissed jo

update asap