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Chapter -21...

IN AGRA -

RUQAIYYA came out from her chember n ordered one maid who passing her chember to call her favorite chef from kitchen but that maid denied to obey her order by telling her that she is begum-e-khass's maid n after listening her answer ruqaiyya's temper reach at its peek n she asked other maid to bring her hunter n she start shouting n beating that maid from hunter very badly no one came forward to save that poor maid from ruqaiyya till salima begum n hamida begum came there after listen ruqaiyya's shouting n that maid's cry n what they saw it shock them n in anger hamida came near ruqaiyya n in angry tone she asked...

HAMIDA - yeh sab kya ho raha hai ruqaiyya tum itni buri tarah se iss baandi ko kyun maar rahi ho isski galti kya hai ruqaiyya looked her in anger n said...

RUQAIYYA - galati ammijaan galati nahi gunaah kiya hai iss gushtak ne issne humara begum ruqaiyya sultan ka hukum bajane se mana kiya hum issko jaan se maar daalenge n she again raised her hand to hit that maid but hamida hold her hand n said...

HAMIDA - bus ruqaiyya bahut ho gaya n she looked that maid n asked her why she denied ruqaiyya's order n that maid fold her hand n in pleading tone she said...

MAID - hume bacha lijiye marriyum makkani humne koi galati nahi ki hai humne toh wohi kiya jo ruqaiyya begum ne humse kaha tha all looked her in confusion n ruqaiyya asked her while twisting her wrist...

RUQAIYYA - humne kaha tha tumse humare hukum ki nafarmani karne ke liye but hamida stop her n asked maid to tell everyone clearly what she's trying to say n that maid node n lowered her head n said...

MAID - marriyum makkani hum jabse iss haram me aaye hai tabse hum begum-e-khass ki khidmat me hai aur jab ruqaiyya begum begum-e-khass thi tab ek din jodha begum ne hume anguri bagh se phool laane ko kaha tha aur humne unnke hukum ko pura kiya tha par jab ruqaiyya begum ko yeh pata chala toh unnhone hume aise hi mara tha aur kaha tha yeh iss haram ka kaayeda hai ki begum-e-khass ki baandiya sirf begum-e-khass ka hukum bajati hai aur aaj bhi hume woh baat acche se yaad hai aur hum aaj bhi begum-e-khass salima begum ki baandi hai aur isiliye jab ruqaiyya begum ne hume hukum diya toh humne b
us unnse yahi kaha tha ki hum begum-e-khass ki baandi hai isiliye hum unnka hukum nahi maan sakte aur begum shahiba ne humari puri baat sune bina hi hume maarna shuru kar diya n she fall on hamida's feet n said...

MAID - ab aap hi batayiye marriyum makkani humari kya galati hai hum toh bus haram ka woh kayega jo ruqaiyya begum ne khud hume bataya tha nibha rahe the hamida hold her shoulders n asked her to standup n than she ordered to other maids to take her to hakima for treatment n then she looked at ruqaiyya with anger n in irritating tone she said...

HAMIDA - yeh sab kya hai ruqaiyya itni choti si baat par tum uss baandi ko itni buri tarah maar rahi thi mano usski jaan hi le logi ruqaiyya looked her in disbelief n said...

RUQAIYYA - choti si baat ammijaan aap isse choti si baat bol rahi hai uss do kodi ki baandi ne humara hukum maanne se inkaar kiya usski itni jurrat ke ussne begum-e-khass ki tauheen ki aur aap bol rahi he choti si baat hamida looked her with sharp eyes n said...

HAMIDA - kya kaha tumne begum-e-khass saayad tum bhul rahi ho tum ab ek mamuli begum ho begum-e-khass nahi par saayad uss auhade ka guroor tumhare dimaag pe itna chad gaya he ki tum ab bhi usske nashe me ho n she looked salima n in angry tone said...

HAMIDA - salima begum aap begum-e-khass hai aur haram ki mukhtaar bhi aur jab humne hukum diya tha ki ab se ruqaiyya begum ek mamuli begum ki tarah iss haram me rahengi toh kyun aapne unnka hojara nahi badla kyun yeh aaj bhi begum-e-khass ke hojare me he aur innko woh sari sahulatein di jaa rahi hai hum kuch puch rahe hai salima hume jawaab chahiye humare hukum ki taamil kyun nahi huyi ab tak n she looked ruqaiyya with cold eyes n said,..

HAMIDA - kyunki ruqaiyya jaise logo ko unnki asli jagah dikhana jaruri hota he tabhi inn jaise logo ke sir par jo taaqat ka nasha chada hota he woh utarta hai salima looked hamida n in calm tone she said...

SALIMA - ammijaan woh darasal humne aur jodha begum ne yeh faishla kiya tha ki ruqaiyya begum ko unnke hi hojare me rehne diya jaayega kyunki waise bhi shenshah ke elaan ke baad lagbhag sabhi begumo ne hi haram se apne apne ghar ya nikaah karke chale jaane ka faishla kar liya he toh aise me haram me jo janha reh raha tha wahi rehne diya jaaye aur humra aur jodha begum ka purana hojara ek saath tha toh unn dono hojaro ko ek karke humare liye aani begum-e-khass ke liye naya aur bada hojara bana diya jaaye bus isiliye humne ruqaiyya begum ka hojara nahi badla hamida looked her with soft smile n said...
HAMIDA - toh yeh baat hai ab kya kare humari jodha hai hi itni nekdil jo apne saath bura karne walo ka bhi bhala hi sochti he aur yeh agar aapka aur jodha ka faishla hai toh hum kuch nahi kahenge par haan phir bhi aaj se ruqaiyya ke saath ek mamuli begum sa salook hoga aur mamuli begum ki hi sahulatein milengi toh aaj se hi innki saare khass sahulatein band kar di jaaye aur humare iss hukum ki taamil abhi issi waqt ki jaaye n salima ordered maids to removed all special facilities n begume-khass's luxuries from ruqaiyya's chember n reduced maids numbers in her service, now ruqaiyya had 4 maids n hoshiyaar in her service ruqaiyya looked salima n hamida with anger but without saying one word she entered in her chember n dismissed all maids n asked them send hoshiyaar inn after sunset n till then no one disturb her...

IN AMER -

Jalal n jodha was sitting in balcony of their chember near jharoka jodha was lying on jalal's lap n playing with rings of jalal's left hand which she hold near her heart n watching beautiful moon through jharoka n jalal caressing her hair with his right hand n he looking his love with so much admiration n love. They silently sitting in that position for sometime till jalal call her in sweet warm voice...

JALAL - jaan...

JODHA - hmmm...

JALAL - jaan leela ke nikaah me jo kuch huya jo humne kiya aapko uss baare me humse kuch puchna ya kuch kehna hai?

JODHA - nahi shenshah hume na kuch puchna hai na kuch kehna aapne jo kuch bhi kiya uss se hume jo khushi mili ussko hum shabdho me nahi bata sakte bus itna kahenge hume garv hai ya yun kahiye hume abhimaan hai ki hum aapki patni hai n she closed her eyes n hold his hand more tightly n kissed his fingers gently n jalal smiled proudly in happiness after listening her words but in next moment he looked her n in serious tone he said...

JALAL - par hume aapse kuch puchna bhi hai aur kuch kehna bhi hai jodha feel seriousness n sadness in his voice n she immediately stand from his lap n looked him n find pain n fear in his eyes n in worried tone she asked..

JODHA - shenshah kya huya aap achanak se itne gambhir kyun ho gaye kahiye aap humse kya kehna chahte kya puchna chahte hai jalal looked her with emotional eyes n opened his arms n asked her to come in his arms n jodha immediately hug him from waist n put her head on his chest near his heart n closed her eyes n Jalal circle his hand around her shoulder n took deep breath n said...

JALAL - jaan aap humesha aisa kyun karti hai? jodha questioned him back in her cute voice...

JODHA - hum humesha kya karte hai shenshah? Jalal smiled on her cuteness n said...

JALAL - yahi aap kyun humesha apni jaan khatre me daal deti hai kabhi humari jaan ke liye ya phir kabhi humari shaan ke liye jab aapko aapke mamaji ki hume be - izzat karne ki saazish pata chal gayi thi toh aapne hume kyun nahi bataya kya hota agar woh log aapki baat maanne ki jagah aapko hi koi nuksaan pahucha dete aapne ek baar bhi humare baare me nahi socha agar aapko kuch ho jata toh humara kya hota aapke bina hum kaise jeete batayiye aapne aisa kyun kiya...

JODHA - shenshah pehli baat hum khud unnke har sadyantra ko vifal karne me saksham the aur dusari baat hume acche se gyaat hai chahe aap humare pass ho chahe na ho par aapko humare pal pal ki jaankari hoti hai toh hume pata tha yadi kuch galat hoga toh aap humari raksha karenge n jodha trying to release herself from their hug but Jalal hold her more tightly n said...

JALAL - jaan bus aise hi humari baaho me rehkar baat kijiye aaj ek pal bhi aapko khud se dur karne ka dil nahi kar raha aaj hum aapko aise hi apne kareeb bahut kareeb mehsush karna chahte hai jodha too hug him tightly n said...

JODHA - hmmm toh aapko yeh puchna tha aur kehna kya tha aapko humse? Jalal again smiled softly n said...

JALAL - kehna nahi hai aapse kuch maangna hai...

JODHA - kya shenshah?

JALAL - jaan humse wada kijiye ki aaj ke baad kabhi aap aise kuch nahi karengi jiss se aapki jaan ko koi khatra ho aur kuch bhi ho jaaye humare liye apni jaan ko khatre me nahi daalengi jodha tried to protest but Jalal stopped her n said..

JALAL - nahi jaan aaj aap kuch nahi bolengi bus humari baat sunegi samjhi aap...

JODHA - thik hai aap ko jo kehna hai kahiye jalal kiss on her head n said...

JALAL - jaan aap humari zindagi hai hum aapke bina ek pal bhi zinda nahi reh sakte aap woh hawa hai jissme hum saans lete hai aap humare iss dil ki dhadkan hai aap kehti hai na aap humari jaan aan aur shaan ke liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai mar bhi sakti hai par agar aap hi nahi hogi toh hum iss shaan ka iss zindagi ka kya karenge ek baat humesha yaad rakhiyega aap hai toh hum hai hum hai toh sab hai nahi toh kuch nahi kuch bhi nahi toh agli baar aisa kuch karne se pehle soch lijiyega apni zindagi khatre me daalkar aap humari zindagi khatre me daal rahi hai toh apne liye nahi humare liye kabhi aisa mat karna wada kijiye humse n jodha promised n jalal smile n said...

JALAL - aur aaj hum ek dusare se ek aur wada karte hai ki hum jeeyenge toh ek saath marenge toh bhi ek saath kyunki na hum ek duje ke bina jee sakte hai aur na mar sakte hai n he kissed on her partition n said wada kijiye n jodha give him a long kiss on his heart to seal their promise n moon became witness of their immense love n promise but both didn't knw that one of them gonna break this promise soon coz the time of baba salim chisti's prediction come n they gonna face most difficult battle n exam of their love where one of them gonna put his or her life in danger to save others...


Same time in AGRA -

In her chember ruqaiyya thinks about different ways to take revenge of her insult n bring back her old position in jalal's life n haram n finally she reminds something n wait till sunset n after sunset Ruqaiyya called hoshiyaar in her chember n asked her to bring paper n that special ink which she always used to write secret letters, after sometime hoshiyaar gave her paper n ink n ruqaiyya start writing n hoshiyaar asked her...

Hoshiyaar - gushtaki muaf begum sahiba par aap iss siyaahi se kiss ko khat likh rahi he n ruqaiyya looked him with cold eyes n said...

Ruqaiyya - hoshiyaar ab pani sar se uppar ja chuka he humne bahut apni be-izzati seh li ab waqt aa gaya he ke sabko yeh batana ka ki ruqaiyya sultan kya kar sakti he hume iss haram me apna auhda aur jalal ki zindagi me apni wohi aihmiyat vaapis chahiye aur isske liye hume usska saath chahiye jisska saath hum kabhi nahi lena chahte the par ek wohi he jo humari madad kar sakta he uss jodha ko usski asli aukaat dhikhane aur agra se bahar phikwaane me, uss ne humari madad karne ka vaada kiya tha aur waqt aa gaya he woh apna vaada nibhaye yeh lo yeh khat aur tumhe pata he na tumhe kya karna he bus ek baat ka khayaal rakhna yeh khat kisi ke haath na lage waise toh humne yeh khat na dhikhne wali siyaahi se likha he phir bhi hoshiyaar rehna ab jao yeh khat kal tak usski pass pahuch jana chahiye hoshiyaar node n leave her chember n after he leaving ruqaiyya smirked evil n opened a box n take out a crown same as jodha's mallika-e-hind crown n put it on her head n looked her reflection in mirror n in most cruelest tone she said...

Ruqaiyya - jodha begum bus thoda sa intezaar aur bahut jald hum na sirf tumse tumhara taj balki jald hum na sirf tumse tumhara taj balki jalal ko bhi cheen lenge aur usske baad tum umar bhar jalal ki ek jhalak paane ko bhi taras jaogi aur tumhe humesha ke liye agra se nikalne ke baad hum tumhare unn azizo hamida begum aur salima begum ko bhi woh saza denge ke woh zindagi bhar yeh afsosh karenge ke tumhara saath dekar aur hume niccha dikhakar kitni badi galati kar di unnhone n she start laughing like a devil without knowing that she just put jalal n jodha's life in danger coz of her evil selfish motives...

Precap :- revelation of ruqaiyya's plan n jodha n Jalal's ancounter with death will they both survive or one of them loose his or her life n save others life?...

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love u jiyu for updating n welcome back
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Awesome chapter
Ohhh jalal and jodha's life in danger cause of ruquiya
I hate her 😡
Waiting for next chappy
Update soon
And welcome back 😃
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Happy to see to back. Thanks for updating one of my favourite stories
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Happy to see you back dear...
Awesome chapter dear... But ... Ye twist kya Hi dear...
Precape very scary ...
Want to know... Update soon dear...
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jiyu love you dear🤗 happy to see u here again keep rocking my dear will comment on story too actually i forget story kya hai will read again and comment 🤗❤️

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