||..Jalal's Diary..|| Part 6 Pg. 68 - Page 15

Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha

mujhe to hmesha se hi shak tha tu chudail h aj tune accept bhi kr lia ..🤣 Tbhi m kahu meri harkatein aisi kyu ho gyi h .. Teri sangat ka asar h😆😆

Originally posted by: kajalparijat

Heyy my sweety pie..it was such an awesome superb amazing wonderful update yr...luvd the way u described jo's beauty and how jalal was getting desperate to see a glimpse of her and meet her...everything was jst perfect in this chapter...especially jalal's pov about that cheapuddin aka Sharifuddin ...it was quite funny actually...thnku for such a fantastic update sweetu...
Thnku for pm continue soon

Originally posted by: kajalparijat

Arreee shikhu mere peeche aatma ban k bhatakne se tujhe sukoon nahi mila kya jo ab bachhi ko dara rahi hai :-D

Originally posted by: Monucute

Shagun baby beautiful description..!!
Seriously m loving it😉
Mee too fed up with that Sharif!!😆
Now the most important thing
UPDATE SOON🤣

Originally posted by: Priyankaakdha

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Originally posted by: RSlovesJA

wow ja ready to meet jo...continue soon nd do pm

Originally posted by: avika444

Superb shagun

Enjoyed reading jalal's pov

thanks for pm

Originally posted by: paridhiloveu

Shagu really nice start

Ohh so it's from the start where his shoes where stolen

Cool I love it .

And he is writing all this by all himself hehehe .

Means padha likha shenshaah.

So he is near rajputa and wants to capture whole rajputs means in next chapter Jodha can come na ?

Okay going to read chapter 2

So here I read chapter 2 also yaayy

So jallu started showing his interest hmmm so vo din dur nahi jab jj ka aamla samla hoga can't wait for it

Everyone describing her and praising her beautiful so much that jalal started having a feeling towards Jo hehehe ye tho hona hi tha

Both chapters r beautiful shagu loved it 😳