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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shikha26rockss

yeh na update nhii de ne wali mujhe pta h bass hme wait krvayigi ...aur apna thread barvayegi..😆

Hahahaa 🤣 i think u r rite shikhu...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: kajalparijat

Hahahaa 🤣 i think u r rite shikhu...

oye you both r partial correct n partially wrong
I want my thread to filled and will update Also 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mavaddat

oye you both r partial correct n partially wrong
I want my thread to filled and will update Also 😃

update ka pta nhi...thread ka pata h ...🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: shikha26rockss

update ka pta nhi...thread ka pata h ...🤣

achaww.. chal there ko update an hi dungi.
especially for shikha 😉
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: mohammadnoureen

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3" color="#cc0099">please update</font>

sure dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
hi bro, how r you?
will try to update asap
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mavaddat

achaww.. chal there ko update an hi dungi.
especially for shikha 😉

🤣 lets see...
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Posted: 9 years ago

Sorry for late update .

Chapter 4 part 1
New Hope, with new starting
Credit: SHAGUN
Mohammad mansion
At 6:20 am
Beautiful lady opened her eyes but she feels very difficult to opened them due to weakness. But at last she opened them . The view which she spotted make her blush hard her husband staring at her lovingly, she closed her eyes as weakness was still overtaking on her . But she feels a wet kiss on her cheek and tiny hands on her face cupping her cheeks .
She again opened her eyes, to see the person apple of her eyes .
Saleem: mumma, good molning!
Good morning beta said JODHA in weak voice . Did you sleep well last night .
Hmm... replied saleem, then he climbed bed and went to his dad's lap .
Dad ... I lobe you ...
Hmm... dad loves his son too...😊saying this he kissed saleem's chubby cheeks while saleem giggles .
Jodga was enjoying this scene, then suddenly she feels pain in her lateral part of abdomen where right kidney located due to pain she let out a cry . JALAL saw her closing her eyes in pain . He asked saleem to get up and sit other side, saleem did what his dad asked then JALAL asked JODHA with utmost love what happened JODHA? Are you feeling pain in your abdomen
JODHA: didnt speak a word, still closing her eyes . JALAL understands that she is feeling pain very severely he looked at saleem and saleem's condition was about to cry seeing his mom in pain . JALAL called one maid and asked her to take saleem and make him ready . Maid took saleem from there, then JALAL looked at his wife he called her name JODHA... JODHA...
But no response from her he get . Then he lifted her head up and put it on his lap with love he asked her to open the eyes in a pleading and shaky voice . Listen his plead Jo opened her eyes, her eyes were red due to controlling her tears and pain .
JALAL was shocked to see her like this, he cupped her face and asked her to get up he will give medicine to her . JALAL... called JODHA, JALAL looked at her she want to say something but JALAL stopped her and brought medicine from drawer for her he gave her glass of water and medicine . JODHA ate them, JALAL was looking at her with tears in his eyes . After drinking the water she also looked at JALAL and asked him what happened
JALAL: why you did this? Didn't you thought once about our child if something may happen to you, how will he survive? No one know about him that ... that... he is our son .. not even me! And due to guilt he looked away
JODHA: JALAL I did this because I thought maybe this can help her but she died, I didn't killed her! When I came to know that bulled has pierced in her right kidney and doctors need to transplant the kidney, we can't get donor on the spot so I thought to donate my kidney and I donated but before doctors can transplant kidney in her body, she stopped them by saying that she wanna talk me and ...
JALAL: shh... I don't want to listen anything! What you did, you did because of your stubbornness to which you named it as your so called sacrifice . Do you ever know that how much I suffered when I heard that you left india and no one know about your whereabouts . I was totally broken firstly by the marriage with neha then after your departure . You played with me, you hurt me to core . You make me insane for you after leaving india.
JODHA: I.. did...this...
JALAL: shhh...today you will listen to me! You know after I married to neha, I didn't saw her face for almost 1 and a half year, whenever I used to saw her it kills me from inside that neha is my wife . I love you only and loved you will love you .
You know neha blackmailed me to create physical relation, she trapped me emotionally . And I befooled by her . How much it hurts me, kills me when I touched her, my body was not supporting me my mind heart and soul warning me that I m betraying you . And I thought to stop but neha warned me if I will not create physical relation with her she will kill herself . How can I let this happen, I can't live with the burden of someone's death because of me . I suffered a lot
After few weeks I came to know that neha got pregnant, at that time I wished you at place of neha . But ni... how can it be possible, but I compromise there also I started caring about her, actually not her but my baby . When she gave birth to Mehak I saw you with her, I felt like my life returned to me my soul came back to my body I was beyond .happy . But doctor declared neha dead and I didn't understand what to do at that time, again I was broken . I was frustrated by the fate it always played cruel role with me always make joke of me and I asked u to married me and bled you for neha death not because I loved her but because my little soul Mehak lost her mother . That's y I tortured you but believe me after whatever I did to you I also make me suffered same .
Then he opened his shirt, JODHA was confused what he is doing but what she saw make her more shocked, she saw bruises on his chest and back as he himself has beaten him by whips . She got tears in her eyes, she asked what is this JALAL?
JALAL: I tortured you, so I make myself suffered like this by torturing me . It hurts me whenever I saw you in tears . M sorry JODHA what ever I did to you . JODHA stared at him he continued I know its not easy to forget those bitter memories but I will make you forget those memories . Please JODHA please forgive me he pleaded while crying which make JODHA feels tug in her heart . Give me another chance I want to repent . He cried by hiding his face in his palms . JODHA thought not to react but her heart betrayed and with love she make him face her and wiped her tears . She said: you r right that it is difficult to forget everything, and I can't forget everything so easily that once from whom I get loved by so much he was only the solely reason to tortured me 😃😭 I need some time JALAL after that only I will think to give another chance
By saying this she got up from bed, her pain got reduced due to medicines and she went away to bathroom for freshenup herself

Edited by Mavaddat - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
when r u going to update
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: Mavaddat

hmmm chal start ur antakshari on my thread 😉

apna aakhe bohut maar rahe ho control karo
.ok...
uff mare dil mein todi khali si jagah thi...

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