Today's update 😆
Part 4
Credit to: SHAGUN
JALAL was feeling very restless as it has been 4 days and JODHA didn't get conscious . While on the other it is becoming very difficult to handle Saleem, and Mehak. Now a days Saleem become to sour whereas mekas was not less than saleem .
Only JALAL knew how he manage his office n little kids than JODHA . Now he understands why JODHA use to say that both kids are like JALAL only . JODHA can only manage these kids but not JALAL as he himself is like them, easily gets irritated short tempered and many more .
Sometimes JALAL ask HAMIDA to come to his mansion to look after kids when ever he want to spend more time with JODHA . Time was flying with its speed but there was no sign of JODHA which can give positive indications . But still JALAL is not loosing his hope . He believe on his love .
4 weeks passed away, now saleem also getting adjusted without his mother and Mehak too. JALAL doesn't like this, he want his kids to be with their mom but he can't do anything accept to wait for JODHA getting conscious .
Life care hospital
Private ward no 5.
Doctor checking JODHA, when JALAL notice JODHA is moving eyelids as if she wants to open her eyes . Even doctor also noticed, then they heard very little and weak sound . JODHA was murmering something, doctor ask JALAL to listen as he is her husband he can understand what she want to see in her unconscious state . JalL came near her and bend little bit towards her , he was shocked and got tears in his eyes after listening jodha's voice . She was saying "I didn't killed her, believe me JALAL "
JALAL caressed her hairs and then pecks on her temple . He said I know JODHA, I was fool who thought this . Am a black spot on humanity, unnecessarily I tortured you.. But please now get up, its enough you rested enough . Get up Jo
Doctors who were listening JALAL they pity on his condition, doctor consoles him and asked to check them further .
JALAL get aside, doctors started checking JODHA, after checking her they turned towards JALAL with smiley face and said congratulation your wife has get conscious, she will open her eyes anytime . Now she is getting better.
Jalal's happiness has no bounds, he immediately hug doctor and thanked him. After doctors leave JALAL sat beside JODHA his eyes are filled with tears of happiness, he himself don't know how many times he thanked to Almighty and kissed on jodha's face .
1 hours passed
JALAL was holding jodha's hand by sitting beside her, he feels some movement in his hand . He looked at his hand, JODHA was moving her fingers and she is trying to open her eyes . JALAL exceed his hand and put it on her forehead partially on forehead and partially on her eyes to prevent her from the sudden flash of light when she will open her eyes fully .
JODHA opened her eyes slowly, slowly. She felt little heaviness on her eyes, but after that when she closed her eyes and opened it second time she feels that something very dark flashes in front of her eyes by which affect she again shut them.
JALAL caressed her hairs to calm her down. Finally he saw that JODHA has opened her eyes . He finds her looking at her surrounding as if she try to identify it . She was continuously moving her gaze all around the room but all she get was unfamiliar to her.
Then she look at her left side, she find JALAL sitting there, his eyes are red due to crying but poor soul thought he is angry . She frightens seeing him near her, and try to get up due to which her wounds pained and body too . She let out a little cry but somehow suppress it because of JALAL.
When JALAL saw her struggling, he immediately ask her not to get up . JODHA looked at him with surprise and shocking expression while JALAL bent his eyes in shame . JALAL with great difficulty ask her
JALAL: how are you feeling? Still having tears in his eyes
JODHA: don't understand what is going on, she said I m OK
JALAL hug her and hide his face on the crook of her neck . When JALAL hug her JODHA feel immence peace and happy in her heart . But again she got afraid thinking about his tortures . She parted him from her with very difficulty .
Then there was awkward silence . No one getting a word to speak .
After sometime JODHA ask about saleem and Mehak
JALAL: saleem is getting irritated and Mehak to sour .
When JALAL said this JODHA weakly smiles remembering her and JALAL past, how JALAL get irritated n sour when he and JODHA didn't met for long days . Soon her smile vanishes .
JALAL noticed this, he ask her to take rest while he will call doctor .
JODHA lye down and closed her eyes after 15 minutes doctor arrived . JODHA was shocked to see her colleouge there she smiled at him.and he too pass the friendly smile . JALAL gets jeolous by this, out of his jeolousy he ask doctor to check JODHA fast . JODHA noticed jeolousy in his eyes, she smiled at his jeolousy which was not unnoticed by JALAL then he intensely and with desireful eyes gazed at her . JODHA gets shy . Her crimsom red cheeks again didn't got unnoticed by JALAL he smirked at her . JALAL like this avtaar of JODHA otherwise he only know bold and only bold JODHA . That's why without any hesitation they make love on their college days .
Doctor declared after checking her that she is fine but her wounds are still green and she is weak so she need to take rest at least till 3 weeks
Then he prescribed medicine to her and handed slip to nurse ask nurse to bring the meds. He congratulate JALAL and ask JODHA to take rest and get well soon . In a friendly way he add that there are many patients in this hospital and he need his friend cum best surgeon of world to be back, to which JODHA nodded her head and smiled at him, again JALAL get jeolous . He ask doctor that may be he need to attend other patients? Doctor understand his feeling and smiled at jalal while JODHA chuckled at him and doctor leave .
JALAL came near her instead of sitting on chair beside bed he sat on bed beside JODHA and took her hand in his palm, kissed it very sensually while JODHA closed her eyes . She is feeling his touch, his longing for her .
She opened her eyes and saw JALAL staring at her lustly . She want to hide herself but where she is not getting a place . Her heart skips few beat when she saw JALAL bending towards her face . He kissed on her cheeks eyes was about to kiss on his lips when his phone rang
He saw caller id and smiled at the name . He attend the call
Caller: hello! He heard innocent n baby voice from other side
JALAL: hey baby!
Dialer: dad! Whele is mumma? How ij she now? When she is coming
Little soul bombard his question on his father not giving him time to speak.
JALAL: smiled at saleem question, he ask questions like JODHA without giving chance to other to speak. He said saleem, your mumma is fine . Soon she will come to home .
Then JALAL put phone on speaker, he said would you like to talk to Mon
Saleem: yeshh!
OK then talk.:
Hello! Mumma ... mumma whele ale you?
JODHA got tears after hearing her son voice . She somehow control her and replied in very weak voice.
Beta ... your mumma is fine! I will come soon my baby . How r you jaan?
Saleem: I mishh you mumma, m fine ... dad lobes me a lot .
JODHA look at JALAL, JALAL smiled at her . She said mumma will come soon to her baby . I love you my son . Take care ... OK
OK mumma bye...
Bye...
JODHA cried softly, JALAL consoled her . He said ssleem is very stubborn like his father, JODHA get shocked after listening this she thought that JALAL might thinking that saleem is not his child . She want to say but JALAL interrupted and said he is naughty and short tempered also like his father, but chirpy like his mother . He is combo of jay and Jo . Now JODHA was more shocked she got tears in her eyes . Started crying, JALAL hug her and said crying will increase her pain .
JODHA closed her eyes and gets into slumber peacefully, due to weakness and tiredness .
JALAL was taking care of hers very much . JODHA slowly slowly getting cure . Firstly she was confused by jalal's behaviour but then when he show his pure love and care to her, she stops doubting . It were last days of JODHA in hospital . Doctors already declared her to get discharged but on jalal's insistence she remained in hospital and get fully cured while in these 3 weeks many time while taking care of JODHA, JALAL and JODHA hot intimate to some extent but not fully because still JALAL want JODHA to believe on him trust him fully.
JODHA has been discharged . She came to her home . Saleem saw her, he immediately hug her and kissed all over her face . JODHA also enjoy her son's kisses and love . Though she was still weak but mother inside her was not weak :-) she z very strong . Then she looked at Mehak who was flying her little hands in air as if asking Jo to pick her up . But JODHA didn't take her and JALAL also doesn't want her to take Mehak now as she is still weak . So JALAL ask her to come in room he took her in room .
Made her lye on bed . JODHA felt homely, she closed her eyes :-) when sleep took over she don't know . She was weak so JALAL also didn't make her awake.
Its 9 pm
After eating dinner jalal make saleem sleep in his room and Mehak in cradle.then he came to their room and directly went to bed . He took JODHA in his arms and drifted in sleep
Hospital
Doctor, doctor check her what has happened to her . She is not talking
Mumma get up na mumma see dadbling this toy fal me
Get up JODHA
Doctor came there he checked JODHA, there was no sign of heart beat she was not breathing also .
After checking doctor said
M sorry your wife is no more .
She has died .
No, no shouted JALAL no JODHA you can't leave me In the mid of life get up JODHA
Get up he cried, cried his heart out
Dad mumma ko ka hua?
Pleash muma wake up
He hug his mothers lifeless body.
No...
JALAL wake up with a jerk, he was all wet with sweat .
While wiping his sweat from his forehead he looked at the left side of his bed there she is sleeping peacefully .
He took a sigh of relief and said that was nightmare, but I promise I will not let you go away anywhere.
I love you JODHA I know I tortured you so much and you still doubts me but I will make you believe on me by my love .
I love you jaan ... with determination he said this and kissed on jodha's head then slept after taking her in his arms .
JODHA who woke up by his scream, she heard everything whatever he said . And thinking about her new starting she also sleep in her Love's arms .
Precap: new starting...😉
Edited by Mavaddat - 9 years ago
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