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Posted: 9 years ago
really this story is very interesting and vey different in all so please post soon yaar jalthise next chap me jalal ko sub patha jale aur hamebi. eager to wait post soon dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: rameshwari11

yaar i want one answer jodha studied with jalal mba and when she become doctor. it confused.

dear this is secret that when n how she became doctor
just wait for the update
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Posted: 9 years ago
Chapter 3 part 1
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Good morning diary.
M back again to share my day events that took place today.
Today first time in my life I was afraid to facing my mom . She saw me n JALAL at cafe, I think that she doubted me n followed me till cafe . God God! What to say diary? How I was feeling at that time . My hands n feet went cold due to nervousness . I was feeling as if m the prisoner n mom the jailer of Britishers rule . The way she was staring at me n JALAL, inquiring to us .
But you know diary, I love my JALAL . He understand my situation n he make mom also to understand our relationship . Ho calmly n politely he was talking to my mom . I love his this phase also . Ya one thing to tell you diary that my mom z not having any problem with mine n JALAL relationship she agreed for to continue us in relationship. How sweet na!
Off course she z sweet, after all she z mother of great n would be 😳 MTS jalal's mom 😳
I love you mumma muahha.
OK diary! One thing z there that z troubling me . Will dad be ever agree to this relation? What will his reaction if he came to know bout JALAL? Though I ask mom to promise me not to tell about this relationship to anyone neither dad nor neha .
N she agree also . But what if like mom doubted me n find about JALAL n mine relationship, dad will also know than m surely dead . Coz dad don't like secrets n especially of his daughters .
I have to be careful with dad n neha
Yes neha too coz she z big devil n dad's chamchi
Diary! There z one thing that I hide it from JALAL also . I don't know whether he will understand me or not .
M not getting the chance to tell him about my exact profession, that m a doctor . I studied in London Oxford university n did bba n MBA but I was studying medical studies also with bba n MBA . OK now I have to clear that how I managed to study .
Actually I did MBBS through correspondence college of india, I was having science in 11nth n 12th but dad want me to join his business n he ask me to change my subject but I was adamant to not to change my subject anyhow. I will qualify with science n that I will repeat again by having commerce site . Dad also agrees on my idea, but he don't know that I will do medical studies too . Here I was preparing for 12 boards of commerce n apart from that secretly I was doing preparation of CPMT N after my boards I sat in CPMT . I qualify boards with good marks as well as cpmt exam also :-)
Dad send me London for further studies, n I took admission in one college of MBBS in india only through correspondence . My MBBS course finished in 5 years but bba n MBA took 6 years . 1 year extra .one day from where I did MBBS that college principal called at my home coz they were not having my London phone number, to hand me my degree n my secret revealed to my family . That day dad called me n ask me about the degree of MBBS, I was hell shocked . I tried to ask him but he started his lecture n the thing which I can do only silently listen his lecture . He ask me to come back but I insisted that only 1 year z left n I want to finish this also . To my good luck dad agreed on both the things, to continuing my studies of MBA final year n after that to continue my practice . I was on nineth sky when I heard this from my dad. I was now at relief
But still I didn't tell this JALAL, I don't how he will react on this god please help me please .
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He looked at her lifeless body n said: u know JODHA, u r moron! Y didn't u told me about your profession at that time . What must be my reaction, I must get angry on you at that for not telling the truth, for not telling me ur dream.
But u were so stubborn na, now also u r stubborn see how many times I begged you to get up but u r not even responding

He kissed her knuckles n again started reading the diary.
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Hey diary!
M back again, m very tired today . Because its my first day of practice . I sat with doctor named dr . Bahel. He z very good n gentle . He treated me as his daughter, ya he z of my dad's age .
He did MBBS n having degree of MS too . Yes, he z a surgeon . N he suggest me to do MS n when I ask him who will teach me? You know what he replied! He said, that he will give me classes as m like his daughter . M so much overwhelmed by him . I m really excited for my MS classes .
But you know diary today i didnt get time for my love, even i didnt answer his call due to busy schedule . I have to make time table so that i can manage every thong easily.
Ok diary enough for tody m tired too much good night bye n sweet dreams
Miss u jalal n luv you ... muahhha...
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He read every part of their life but he was shocked when he read about jodha's profession n her busy schedule . How she take time for him n how she manages her MS classes every day :-)
He felt proud on her .
He read when she get her MS degree in neuro , her family members comes to know about that n how they get proud on her . How she was excited when some call her neuro surgeon . How proud she feel on her . How much she want to tell this to him.
When she got job as a neurosurgeon in best hospital, how she excited .
He read all that part which was unknown to him but what ever he read he felt proud on her.
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He look at her with love in hope that she will open her eyes but to his failure she didnt open her eyes.
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Now he read the most vulnerable part of their life .
When tgey both get apart
Fate plays cruel role with them.
He started reading
Hey diary,
Today was the most worst day of my life . After coming home n doing my scheduled work i spend sometime with my family . N dad gave me the most shocking news if my life . Which made my world upside down .
He told me that he fixed his younger daughters all:ance, when i heard this, i jumped out of sofa n hug my little angel. But when i ask her would be name . My foot felt like jelly i was feeling to cry, to cry my heart out.
Dad said his name z jalal mohammad
O god what the hell! I look at mom n she bend her head n sheddibg tears, i ubderstand that its neha's choice n whatever ever she think she want it anyhow.
My mom was unable to control her tears so as i . I excused mysrlf that m tired
N jalal called me i recirved his call n his voice was very hoarsed . I know he was crying n me too we cried by talking our heart out .
He said that he will decline this alliance n he ask me to meet at cafe
I sl3pt dont know wgen
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Hey diary,
I was totally broken . I asked jalal to move on with neha . I make him agree to.marry her i gave him swear that if he will not marry her i will kill myself . Within 1 week they will get marry:-)
I m happy for neha . After when they will get marry i will leave this country . N will not tell anyone about my whereabouts accept mumma .
Good night diary
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Hey diary sorry for not visitibg you in this week as i was busy with mariage . No.. no not mine its neha's marriage . Ya neha n jalal get married today n i lost him forever but i will loce him forever.
I m leaving india today .
U know today jalal officialy left me but he give me one happuness, his child . Yes diary! M pregnant, n i came to know today itsrlf .
O god! Its jalals child .
U know diary once jalal told me that after we get marry na! We will have children n if boy get birth he will named him saleem n if giel he will named her Mysha. So nice names na
N i will give the birth to this child but not here, away from jalal, from neha, away from mom n dad but my mom know about my pregnancy n she z with me .
M leaving today i already packed my stuff n will travel.
Ok bye diary meet u dont know where
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He was shocked to know that jo wad pregnant with his child n she didnt tell him . But he was happy also that saleem z his boy, whom he never ever loved in these 3 months . He rarely talk saleem. He cried on his fate what he did with his life his love jodha n saleem. he promised himself that he will shower his love to both of them
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Hey diary,
I reached london
Two says passed away, m migrating . I have to find shelter n job .
Ok ok n i got the shelter n job too .
I got the job in life care hospital of london . But no rest in this job
Fine diary from tomorrow i will not get time to visit you, sorry
Good nite
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O god finally today i got time after so many months
Hey diary,
I missed you
It has been eight months that i didnt visit you. You know na m very excited. M getting fat only one month left
I made friends here Alis, n One indian friend Pooja they both r doctors we all three shared apartment
Diary m feeling pain i think before mobth my labour pain has started
Bye diary
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Hey diary
I gave birth to baby boy! He z just like him .
His eyes his nose but his lips r like mine . He z a angel in my life . He made me mom . O god! M a mother . I informed this to mumma . Dhe was more than happy n i ask er about him . She saud that he always tried to ask her about me . But she never told him . O god how much m missibg u jaan! I love you . Please dont let my sacrifice waste like this . Move on inyour life please
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He read every part of her life how she take care of saleem .
How she mossed him.
Now he came to the part when 2 years went off .
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Diary,
My child z just like his dad . He know about him . He saw his photo also
U know diary today neha called me she z pregnant 8 months . She ask me to come back to india n do her dilivery
What z wrong with her? She know that i cant deny her . N i make my self n saleem ready for india .
I depart from london .ok m leaving it mid will contonue in plane
Hey, m back
We have sat on plane
Ok now bye
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Hey
I reached india i called her up n you know diary where she was she was in market, then i heard her scream
O god!she z safe or not
Then again i got a call but from another number n i came to know that beha got hit by bullet . In which area she was roaming that was curfewed . N people were creating mess, fighting burning shops.
That person who called me he told me that she has admitted in city hospital
I rwached at hospital . I ask saleem to be at reception only n i ask receptipnist to take care of him i showed her my id that m a doctor n came here to attend patient.
I reached at ot n doctors were treating neha . She was lying lifelessly
I shivered seeing her like this
I ask doctor how z baby? Docyor said that its diffuclt to say anytjing bout anyone
He told me that she got hit hy bullet n on her right kidney .
We need to transplant new kidney he said but we r not having donnor.
Without thinking i saud that i will donaye my kidney .
Doctor ask me n her relation i said m her sister n ask foctor not to revesl the name to snyone
Doctor agrees
Everu procedure was done . My one kidney was taken from me but it get to late . Neha gave birth to girl who z like her only.
She ask me to stay as she want to say something.
She saud that she know about mine n jalal relation, she know about saleem . I was shocjed i ask him what rubbish she z talking
She said its not rubbisg, its true . She came to know this a week ago, but she didnt tell me how n from where
She ask me to give something to het, i promised her . She said tgat i have to marry jalal n take care of jalal n their daughter.
I was shocked i cried cried i begged not to leave us nut she left us .
She has died
At that moment jalal enter in ICU he saw me there n saw nehas lifeless body. N my one handon her mouth n one on her head.
He blamed me that i killed my sister
He hated me
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Sorry diary for not visiting you, as i get married
Yes many thing has chged in my life .
Neha died . After her funeral jalal himself sa:d that he will marry me . N he married me . It has been two days n he tortured me alot
Now i get it that y he married me . To. Revenge for that what i hadnt done
God what r u doing with me? Y r u playing such a cruek role with my life
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He turnedcpages but sll were empty only tgere were marks of tears jodhas tears . It looks intead of writing anything she cried her heart out
But he turned the page n saw something written on ir
He rwad it
Jalal i m not at mistake . I had not killed neha, how can i kill her jakal? She was my little sister.i love you jalal pleaae come back to me i love yoy n again there were tears marks
Jalal cried after knowing the truth . How much he hated her unneccessarily
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Precap: jo life at stake
Edited by Mavaddat - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Update fast mavii .. Banner leti rhegi bas ... Update de ... 😆😆😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update mavi...
update soon
Edited by Prachi0409 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Mavi teri update ne .. Mujhe rula dia hooo mujhe rula dia😭😭
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice chapter old romantic life return in akdha life but precap is shocked update nest chapter soon make it fast pm me thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh god even iam the 😭😭
Update soon
Thanks for pm
Edited by zuytre - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Emotional update
Pls continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Lovely update yr...
Finally jalal got to know the truth...
Thnkx for pm n continue soon

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