JJ OS~||Reunion Of Soulmates||~

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~||Reunion Of Soulmates||~



He checked the clock hanging on the wall for the umpteenth time while pacing to and fro in his room oops!! corrections their room . It was 10 p.m. now . He was waiting for her , for his wife from about 2 hours but there was no sign of her return . Now he was hell annoyed...Where was she??...Why is she soo late?? All the horrible thoughts were coming up in his mind ...the thoughts which were drenching his heart in the pool of fear ...fear of loosing her ...his love ...his life...his wife . He casted a glance outside the window ...only to see the dark night with heavy rain ...somewhere his heart resembled his life with the darkness of the night .
All his thoughts were disturbed by the sound of the bell . He literally ran to open the door hoping to see her . He opened the door and saw her ...fully drenched in rain...her doe shaped beautiful eyes were red and puffy . His heart broke into zillion pieces seeing her in that condition . And she...she was just watching him without blinking her eyes . He also saw directly into her eyes...eyes ...which were pleading him...which were narrating the whole story to him...eyes which were having a little hope...hope that he still loves her . By seeing in her eyes which were filled with deep emotions he knew ...he knew that now she knows the whole truth...the truth which he tried to tell her but she never gave him a chance to . He was broken...completely shattered ...How could she??...How could she even think such low and cheap about him ??...He accepted that their marriage was an arranged marriage and initially they hated each other...but things were different now...Though he never confessed his love for her from his mouth...but his care , his possessiveness for her , his fear of losing her always does . He wasn't upset instead he was broken now . Seeing her in that condition...tears falling from her eyes continuously ...pleading him through her eyes ...his heart almost stopped beating but he was adamant not to forgive her ...How could he??...she distrusted him ...accused him for the things he never even thought to do...
"Go and change your clothes otherwise you'll get cold"
She felt a stab in her heart listening his cold voice . She knew she was wrong ...and she doesn't deserve his forgiveness . But seeing him with that look ...look which showed that he is emotionless...that he doesn't love her...that he hate her . She watched his retreating figure while standing there motionless .

Naina lageeyan baarishan
Te sukke sukke sapne vi pijj gaye
Naina lageeyan baarishan
Rove palkein de kone vich neendh meri
Naina laggeyan baarishan
Hanju digde ne chot lage dil te
Naina laggeyan baarishan
Rut birha de badlan di chaa gayi

He started moving faster and then he literally ran inside their room and closed the door . He completely broke down...he couldn't hold his tears more now...he cried...cried his heart out and kneeled down completely shattered...he wanted to act normal...but he couldn't ...he wanted to forget her...so that he doesn't get hurt again ...but he couldn't ...he couldn't forget her...never...he couldn't stop himself from loving her...never...

Kaali kaali khaali raaton se
Hone lagi hai dosti
Khoya khoya inn raahon mein
Ab mera kuch bhi nahi
Har pal har lamha
Main kaise sehta hoon
Har pal har lamha
Main khudh se yeh kehta rehta hoon
Tujhe bhula diya oh
Tujhe bhula diya oh
Tujhe bhula diya oh
Phir kyun teri yaadon ne
Mujhe rula diya oh
Mujhe rula diya

He wanted her...he wanted her to be with him...to trust him...to take care of him...to love him...He stood up from there and went near the bed...sat there ...down on the floor with his head between his knees ...

Teri yaadon mein likhe jo lafz dete hai sunayi
Beetay lamhe poochte hai kyun hue aise judaa
Khuda, khuda mila jo yeh faasla hai
Khuda tera hi yeh faisla hai
Khuda hona tha woh ho gaya
Jo tune tha likha

Kaali kaali khaali raaton se
Hone lagi hai dosti
Khoya khoya inn raahon mein
Ab mera kuch bhi nahi
Har pal har lamha
Main kaise sehta hoon
Har pal har lamha
Main khudh se yeh kehta rehta hoon
Tujhe bhula diya oh
Tujhe bhula diya oh
Tujhe bhula diya oh
Phir kyun teri yaadon ne
Mujhe rula diya oh
Mujhe rula diya

She was still standing there drenched in the pool of emotions...cursing her fate...cursing herself for hurting him

Naina lageeyan baarishan
Te sukke sukke sapne vi pijj gaye
Naina lageeyan baarishan
Rut birha de badlan di cha gayi


She composed herself...wiped off her tears...No she can't...she can't just stand there ...she have to win her love back ...she also want him...want him to love her...Now she was determined whatever happens...she'll not let him go...she will win him back with her love . And with this determination she started moving towards their room .
He was still sitting there in same position crying his heart out...
She opened the door...walked a few steps ahead...Sensing her presence...presence of his love...he composed himself and stood there staring her without blinking his eyes ...eyes which were telling her...his pain...his emotions...

Do pal tujhse juda tha
Aise phir rasta muda tha
Tujhse mein khone laga
Juda jaise hone laga
Mujhse kuch mera

Tu hi meri liye ab kar dua
Tu hi iss dard se kar de juda
Tera hoke tera jo main na raha
Main yeh khud se kehta hoon

Tujhe bhula diya oh
Tujhe bhula diya oh
Tujhe bhula diya oh
Phir kyun teri yaadon ne
Mujhe rula diya oh
Mujhe rula diya


It was enough now...she had had enough...she couldn't take it any more now...she ran and hugged him tightly as if taking all his pain to herself ...giving him the warmth he needed . This hug ...melted his heart and joined the broken pieces of his heart...filled life in him again .
Still holding him tightly ...in between her sobs she said
" Ja...Ja...Jalal...am...am...v ..v...sorry...
Please...Please...forgive me Jalal...
Am ..v ...sorry...Please..."
He knew she will ask for forgiveness but what's the use now when the damage is all done ...but he still loved her..no matter what...
"I...I...Love You Jalal...
...Please...Please don't leave me...Please..
I'll die without you...
...Please Jalal..."
And that was it...he doesn't wanted to listen anything further . Breaking the hug he said
"Those people are fools Jodha...
who let those persons come near them again...who had broken their heart once..."
Now she was completely shattered ...she wanted to die...life without her Jalal...without her love is nothing...
"And I am one of those fools Jodha"
Saying this he again embraced her in his arms tightly...
"I Love You Too Jodha"
And with this the soulmates were reunited...for the life time...till eternity...





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So this was 1st OS ...
m v excited n hell nervous...
i know its nothing but a piece of crap...n its v hard to like it ...
bt still if u all liked it thn plss hit the like button n leave ur precious cmmnts...

Happy now sweettyy dii...look i finally wrote an OS😆

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Geetbaala thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Me first😉😆
Res for now..
Will read and comment later Ashu.
Edited by Geetbaala - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow. Emotional and amazing os! Loved it 😳
Thanks for the pm!! 😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Mindblowing os ashu👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Nice os ashu ... 👏 Loved it ...
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh no it is cheating buddy i was first and now i m second its not fair game buddy😡
Btw awesome os ashu plz continue 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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ashuu..
congratulation baby fr ur frst os..
it was awesome dear..its beautyful n little emotional also...but i loved it.
jo's pain n regrestion n pleadding n ja's pain n happiness n fight with himslf to stop loving jo..were all writtn beautyful by u dear..
pless do write more...waiting fr ur nxt os.
thanks fr pm dear..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Such a cute os ashu... 😃... Just loved it... Jojas condition... Poor they.. But it was amazing...😃... Love u my meenakumari...😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: swriter

Oh no it is cheating buddy i was first and now i m second its not fair game buddy😡
Btw awesome os ashu plz continue 😊


Janaki😆
Its not game dear... Its depends on fraction of seconds in posting😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome os dear...

thnks for pm

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