~Jodha's Diary~ Part 10 Pg. 103 - Page 74

Chapter 1 & 2

Interesting start👏... Jodha's Diary😛... A story began on her 17^th birthday...

I am fed up of Sukanya now. She is too arrogant with that high-held nose. You know what she did? She tore the special chunari that Maasa had specially ordered for me to wear on my Birthday.

I love U written Jodha's pov... I was too annoyed at Suku...

But...why is she after me all the time. I fail to understand.

Because she is Jealous...insecure and demanding. She wants the attention and respect what Jodha is getting ...so sad😕...

It is the Jallad...'Jalal-ud-din Mohammad'. I hate him with all my heart and soul , diary. And one thing I know for sure...that this man will be hated by me till I am alive. I mean, he did not even spare the holy temples. What kind of a person he is...I wonder.

Aww... Our Jallu's entry👏 Not so gracious though Villian... Kamina...Jallu😆

Poor Moti was so shattered by all this, that she decided to commit Jauhar.

Such a terrifying scene... well written

Then and there, I vowed to the soil of Amer, of which I am made, that I'll bring his head to Kali Maa's feet, and then will be my revenge complete.

My fav scene... I remember Jodha's anger and rage... that was the first time we got to see Jodha's real acting talent... She looked so potent and courageous. ...

Shagun Really enjoyed the way you have include the small details of the scene and the best part what Jodha felt about that particular time. Thanks for writing story on her pov.

Today, Baapusa had organized a meeting to announce the next heir of Amer. I had full hope that it will definitely be Sujamal Bhaisa. I mean, just think about it the diary, he is the most deserving one. In terms of wit, diplomacy as well as bravery, he has absolutely no match. Moreover, he is also the rightful owner of the throne of Amer.

I don't know what made Baapusa take an unjust decision. He gave the throne to Bhagwandas Bhaisa. Not once did he think about Sujamal Bhaisa. I can't believe that he actually did that. I mean, I know that Bhagwandas Bhaisa is also very capable, but there is something called justice too. The throne belongs to Sujamal Bhaisa and shall definitely go to him.

Well explained scene... While watching serial it was not shown much how Jodha felt... she did try but her pov is very clear in this scene... Shagun... Awesome dear... I strongly feel Bharmal played partiality towards his son... Not fair... He played politics...

I don't find anything wrong in Sujamal Bhaisa's actions, rather, I fully agree with him. I met him when he was being chased by the soldiers

It was an injustice... and total politics played, in reality, he supposed to be a king...but anyway...

But, he just told me that Sujamal was a traitor and we have no relations with him. Really? It was he who had cheated and not Bhaisa. How could I just forget Sujamal Bhaisa...a person I had grown up with?

I am glad U have covered this part... Jodha thinks that his father he cheated his brother.

It was really sad Sukanya loved Suryaban and he falls for Jodha...

In Jodha's pov she seemed so humble... and doesn't care for a look... She just wants someone who fights against Mughals... She is so loyal and devoted to Amer...

I don't know what to say about the turn my life has taken.
Everything is just so messed up. Being a princess is definitely not a boon for
me, always a bane only. Lets begin from the starting.

We all know probably she feels this ... but she never said in words

Sad... and emotional scene... I don't why but I liked Sukanya from beginning... may be because I have one elder sister and one younger... so I know how middle sister feels... hehehe

I tried my best to make him realize that she was my sister
and I could not do this to her. But his argument was, that I'm the princess of
Amer first, and I have to do whatever is best for its people.

Sometimes I feel King Bharmal is spineless... He didn't care for Jodha much...

Bhangarh was a strong kingdom and this alliance would benefit Amer a lot. I said to him there
was no difference if Sukanya marries him. Then, another surprise came. He said
that it was the prince who had brought this proposal, and he wanted to marry me
only.

But what about Jodha ... and Sukanya... and their relation.. He didn't even try to make Suryabhan understand. I am really enjoying all the scene you written so clearly.

After he while he looked up and spoke out his
thoughts. He said that he was in love with me, from the first day he saw me,
and would never deny this proposal. That was the shock of my life. He loved me!
Oh my God...

How can he fall in love just by looking... didn't even talk ... It's just attraction...

She sat on her bed, tears filled in her eyes. I told her all
that had happened throughout the day. I explained to her that it wasn't my mistake
and I had tried my best to stop all this. She said nothing. Suddenly she came
to me, wrapped her arms around me and hugged me tightly. Tears still flowing
from her eyes. She said to me that she was overwhelmed to see that I did so
much to cancel my own wedding just for her sake. She had heard me talking to
Suryabhan and knew that it was not at all my mistake. She said that she
understood me and my situation. She was the princess of Amer too and she knew
that how important this alliance was for Amer. She said that she had absolutely
no problem if I married Suryabhan Singh and was very happy for me. That day, my
little sis had climbed notches up in my eyes. I couldn't believe that this was
the same Sukanya who used to fight with me on petty things. I just hugged her
tightly and told her that I was blessed to have her.

Is that really happened??? did I miss that episode? Wow... You have written it so beautifully that I don't need watch.

We have to leave a diya into the river according to the
rituals. And, as Maasa says, while flowing that diya, we can get a look at our
future for a split second in the water. Maasa always tells us these customs, on
every gangaur, saying that these should be revised often. The other ladies
finished with their pooja. Now, it was our turn. Sukanya and Shivani flowed
their diyas. I don't know what they saw in the water, their disappointed
expressions told me that they saw nothing. Now, was my turn.

You have written this scene marvelous... each and every detail of this important scene... My memories reviving with each scene...

As soon as I bowed down to flow the diya, suddenly lightning
started and soon heavy rain followed. People began to run here and there. It was
no less than a storm. I flowed the diya, but the sight in the water caught my
attention. There was the reflection of a handsome, young man, wearing the Rajwanshi
dress. I wanted to get up and run too, but there was something which did not
let me move. Some binding force. And, some attraction too. I just couldn't move
my eyes off him. That face, eyes staring at me, just like mine at him, lips
curved in a smirk...ufff...I don't know how long I kept staring that charming
face. Somebody called out to me and brought me back to reality. I had no time
to look back at him, I just ran away.

Wow⭐️... Shagun U given outstanding justice to this unforgettable moment. LOVED IT...

Back at the palace, I just couldn't stop thinking about him.
Unknown feelings crowded me. Connections to that face, haunted me. One thing I
had realized, that it was not Suryabhan Singh, certainly not. I had seen him
clearly when he had entered the palace. It was not him. But, whoever it was, was
my future, as Maasa says. This thought excited me more and at the same time
troubled me more. My future was right there, standing right behind me. Ufff...Oh
God!...But if he was my future, then what about Suryabhan Singh?...Was that
charming young man really my future?...Sooo many questions, yet no answer.

Sukanya asked me to close my eyes and tell her who comes to my mind. And you won't believe! It was that mysterious young man.

AWWW...

I will soon comment on rest of the chapter😃