akdha SS~Melting the cold heart~Chapter04pg67(04/02/2016) - Page 33

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: savindi.db

🥺idiot..see wht hv u done to heart..



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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: savindi.db

hey don't give me this look devil..😈



WHO DEVIL??? YOU?? 😆
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Originally posted by: AkankshaJA



WHO DEVIL??? YOU??😆

no I'm an innocent girl..u r the DEVIL..😉
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Posted: 9 years ago
Very interesting teaser update the chapter soon pm me thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Interesting teaser.
Will ja accept jo?
continue soon nd thanx for pm.
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Chapter-02
"sometimes it's not the butterflies that tell you you're in LOVE,but the pain..."it's true.if she could realized her feelings for HIM before that day,the things would have change than like this.these painfull three years without any glimpse of HIS would never come to her life.she would be the happiest girl in the world.sometime they would live together when this moment,under a same roof as HUSBAND and WIFE.but everything have spoiled.the fate have destroyed everything.is it a fault of the fate? No..its only her fault.the fate made THEM meet together.gave her time to recognize HIS who is her soulmate.but SHE,didn't even pay the attention to her heart which is belong only HIM.she never can blame on the fate.she is the one who rejected him everytime.she's the one who insulted him infront of everyone without caring even about his self respect.and now,what can she hope from him? Forgiveness? Love? Yeah,the shattered heart dying to see those eyes again with the same love she saw few years ago.
The images of HIS which her mind captured when SHE caught HIM stealing galanse at HER could make her lips curved in to a smile.with this she closed her eyes with lots of hopes in her heart.

'Excuse me sir..'
He heared the voice of one his bodyguard.
"Yes mohan.."he asked while closing the news paper.
'Sir..a girl has come to meet you..and she didn't tell her name but inform that she is a classmate of you..'
After hearing the information from mohan without thinking he gave the permission him to bring the visitor to inside.
"Let her come in..and tell atgha baba to meet me now.."
'Ok sir..'obeying to the order of his master he went from there for do his duty.he could meet atgha on the way and gave the massage of his master.

Her heart is jumping with joy getting the permission to meet him.if there wasn't a strong security like this she would have run to inside already.according to the information of her cousin brother maan,now her jalal is a successfull businessman in the world.she is soo happy about his succsess.no need to say that she don't care if he is a rich or poor boy,she just want his love for her.his care for her.while made her way to the inside of the house under the guidness of a bodyguard she thanked to her god and maan in her mind.

on the way to the living room she met a middle age man who kindly smiled with her and she was about to smile with him but her full attention caught by the man whom she madly searched for since three years.there he is standing but busy with a work of his phone.so he didn't see her.even he didn't hear mohan excused from their.
Her eyes aren't just gleaming but shining with happy tears.seeing her jalal infront of her after three years,she felt like she got her everything back.she felt the actual meaning of living.she wanted to scream in happiness.still there is no change in his look.he is the handsome boy of the universe.and of cause he is the universe of her.unkownly hot tears steaming down her face refelecting the emotions of her heart
"Jalal.."she shakingly murmured hinting him the presence of the visitor.
When he rose his head to see his visitor,there was the most unexpected person,the one whom he never expected to meet again.their eyes met for a moment.he could see the tears are constantly steaming down from her face.her teary eyes speaking many things but his?
There is no expressions of his face nor eyes are speaking with her giving her the feeling like stabbing her heart.without wasting any single minute she ran to him and hugged him as much as she can crying her heart out,realising the pain which is inside her heart since three years.she felt a solace when she feel the warmth of his and the fragance of his but the solace is not a completed one.because,he didn't hug her back.he is expressionlessly standing there while she sobbing tightening the hug more and more.she waited till him hug her back while caressing her hair.but its never happened."I LOVE YOU JALAL"She uttered drenching his t-shirt with her hot tears while clutching it from her hands which are tightly wrapped around his body.but he didn't even move a little.
"Where..were..you.."he could hear her shaky voice between her sobbs.
"I..i..searched you..madly..everywhere.."
She cried and cried till her eyes paining,choking..but he didn't consoled her,didn't stop her nor wip her tears.not even uttered anyword.his behaviour is killing her alive.indeedly he is not HER JALAL.slowly breaking the hug she looked in to his eyes to find the love which is the reason her to live further.but she didn't find anything in his eyes.not even the anger.she didn't expect this from him.
"Jalal.."she called him hoping that atleast he'll shout at her.she wanted him to slap her for her sin.but his silance is almost kill her.
"Still angry.."she whisperingly asked between her chokes.but she didn't get any reply from his mouth nor his eyes.
Her vision blured with fresh tears seeing him expressionless like this.
"Forgive me..please.."she asked taking his hand and hugging it near her heart.she knew,she have to make everything like before.
"I know..i did something wrong..because of my foolishness..but..but i suffered alot,living in the punishment you gave me by leaving me.."saying she again broke in to sobs.there weren't more tears in her eyes.on the other hand,her words,her insults echoded in his mind making his heart more cold.she is the love of his life.the only girl whom he loved madly but she meant another thing by her words in that day.she waited again till him say something looking at his face.
"Why don't you say anything jalal..i know..i did a sin..but atleast scold me..WHERE IS MY JALAL haan..?"the last line made him look in to her eyes.
"Whom are you finding?"he muttered in a stern voice tearing her heart to pices.with a sad smile she lovingly cupped his face and was about to say something but stopped by him.
"He is dead..the boy you knew few years ago,he is no more"his words felt like someone hit her head hard.she knew she have hurt him alot and she deserve for this pain.she again hugged him very tightly while crying.
"No..don't say...like that jalal..please..don't.."she whispered between her sobs.
"Its you..who killed him.."she tightly closed her eyes biting her lawer lip hearing his hurtful words.
"No..no..no..don't say..like that jalal..don't say..like that..please.."her words escaped from her throat between her sobs.then she slowly put her hands on his chest saying,
"Its here..where I'm living in you my love..in your heart.."saying she kissed his heart while crying.
"No more..there isn't a heart in me..you killed it by your own.."he replyed calmy as he hasnt any affect on him anymore.there aren't any emotion in his voice.it made her drive crazy in anger and the pain.
"No..its belong only to me..its beat only for me..your heart is mine..you are mine...only mine..only mine..got it.."shouted grabbing him by his collar.again fresh tears are steaming down her face.her eyes are puffy and cheeks are red.
"But now,i don't have a heart miss.jodha.."the stern of his voice is refelected the coldness of his heart.she faintly smiled with him throgh her tears and was about to say something but they inturrupt by a middle age woman.
'Excuse me sir..she don't eat her foods..'saying she handed him an one year old baby girl.she couldn't understand anything nor she didn't want.this scene made jodha's world shattered to pices.she watched her jalal head to the upstair with the baby with widden,teary eyes.her breath stopped for a moment.the thoughts of her jalal with someone else burned her heart alive.
"Noo..he is my jalal..only my jalal.."saying this on her mind continuously she sat on the coach as she couldn't stay standing by her foot anymore.hiding her face in her palms she cried her heart out cursing to her fate.



soo as i said here is the 2nd chapter of this ss.hope you like it.pms later..and will reply soon😃

Edited by savindi.db - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
👏 unres soon darling

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Posted: 9 years ago
Finally jj met ja reaction is expected but last part baby thing is unexpected. ..continue soon nd do pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
ooo..god what was this..??? ...awesome...now what will happen jodha ..??jallu k a baby ye kab hua ...?? im crying ...koi to rook loo..
updaate sooon diii...

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