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Posted: 9 years ago

#81

nice chapter buddy. update soon and thanks for the pm

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Raksha Gupta

@1357raksha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#82

Avika akka...
loved this update a lot...
wow haha maham becom phuphi... in this story nice... only relation change but like they say v can't make dogs tail straight like that only maham is but like other part of her which she came up on her own
wow so jalal is feeling something something for jodha nw... u knw akka I remember that song after reading that part...
as all was jalal was awesome with his mind blowing answer to his phuphi make jodha knw new side of jalal I salute you akka for that part... love it a lot...
last part was lovely jodha stubborn nt to cry as she had told jalal
update next part soon akka...
sorry for late reply akka had exam today...
thanks for pm akka...
love u for this update. ...

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Geetbaala

@Geetbaala

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Posted: 9 years ago

#83

Mouli darloo 😊

Awesome blossom update dearie

I enjoyed thoroughly reading whole chappy.😃

U are an awesome writer Mouli..😊

Awe our handsome Jalal was spellbound by beauty of his better half ☺️ making her uncomfortable by his gazes..and he himself was confused why he couldn't take his eyes off from Jo... Jalal completely bowled by her charm 😳

They got blessings from every one and Walima ceremony took place nicely with Maham's presence with her darting glare to his family...she could not ignore her bhatija..

After ceremony she took left and right of Jalal's parents for marrying Jalal to a girl from diff religion...at some point she might have accepted her but carrying other khoon...she didn't bear...making Hamida and Humayun quiet...with her questions.

How can she say to terminate the prenancy and abort the child..

But the way Jalal handled the situation is outstanding.

He accepted Jo's child as his, shocking Maham.

He maturely said that child is his now..she is his Sherikehayat.

He cleared her that it wasn't the mistake of Jo..

What was the fault of the innocent child in that...?

Jo was amazed by this side of Jalal which she had never noticed in him..

She felt secured by this gesture of his..and asked him to sleep on the same bed

Outstanding piece of writing.. Slowly their love train left the station and waiting to gear the speed..

Continue soon

Thanks for the pm dear.

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Neetu

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Posted: 9 years ago

#84

Avi di🤗
Lovely chapter👏
My jaan kitna sweet likte ho aap!!
Jalal has started developing feelings for jo..
And I hope jo doesn't take much time to recognize her'...
The way Jalal made maham understand is commendable
Love it didu
Love you❤️

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shreya

@shreyalovesja20

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Posted: 9 years ago

#85

Lovely update dii

Really enjoyed reading it

Continue soon

Thanks fr pm

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melovesja

@melovesja

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Posted: 9 years ago

#86

congo for new thread dear.🤗 loved the update. valima ceremony in full swing and ja too can't stop looking at jo and praise her twice new fillings take place but most praises thing is what the shock he gave to maham that his child was superb he respect and love buwa but he very well ans. for jo's purity and dignity and forever he shuts the badmouthing from any one. for future of the child . hats off to him and applause for save that unborn child who is not at fault and that stress which jo go through. excellent. writing.thxs for pm.

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Mushat

@mushat

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Posted: 9 years ago

#87

Reswaaa😉
unres 😊
dii superb update as asual..
I told you before too
I really felt bad for Maham 🤣
and her struggle...
really liked that jalal humayun hamida everyone loves Jo sooo much..
Jo is so lucky and blesses that she got this family...
Maham to mahman h 😆
hayee in this chapter we got to see so many things.
Jalal's support .his stand for Jo and Their unborn ..and also maintained his respect.. hayee surely m gonna fall for him 🤣
and the last scene was so beautiful.. playful jalal 😳
continue soon dii ..
and Congo too 75 likes 👏
love you dii 🤗

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Mushat

@mushat

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Posted: 9 years ago

#88

yes I
found u beautiful today. Happy
now .waise bhi I didn't do
anything wrong , MAIN APNI
SHARIKEHAYAAT KO DEKH
RAHA THA KISI DUSRE KI BIWI
KO NAHI he smirked
😳😳
she is my wife now phuphi and
the life inside her is my child ,he
uttered stressing on the word
ufff that MY👏👏
muaaahhh .
Again a playful smirk spread on
his face ,he asked ,r u sure
jodha ?? Hope u don't regret it
later ,he winked😉
dii what to say...
I loved every shade of this Jalal 😳

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Ashvneet

@Ashvneet2399

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Posted: 9 years ago

#89

agla chapter kb milega diii!!!!!!

pta h ...pta h...kuch din pehle hi aapne update kiya tha...

pr i want nxt 1 ab...

jldi kro naaa diii😃...

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Avika444

@avika444

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Posted: 9 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: Ashvneet2399
agla chapter kb milega diii!!!!!!
pta h ...pta h...kuch din pehle hi aapne update kiya tha...
pr i want nxt 1 ab...
jldi kro naaa diii😃...

Congo ashu 😳👏 tum senior member ban gayi 😃

Ab shuru karo apna ff or ss

Im waiting

Next chap baad mein 😳