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Posted: 10 years ago
#81
Awesome chap dii..
loved it.
finally jo realise her true feeling fr ja..
jo n salima convo was nice..she nt only cleard her mu but also realise hr feeling...really a true friend.
precap...oh god y ja slap jo..
eagrly waiting fr nxt updt
updt soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
#82
Hai friends... I am back with another update...
Sorry for late reply... but I will give next update asap...
I think this is little boring may be...hope u ppl won't mind...
As usual I am saying being a newbie I can't pm more than 25...so I will ask my frds to pm u on behalf of Me...
I can't post more than 10 posts... so I am just liking ur comments...so that u ppl can understand I am reading ur comment...ok now coming to chapter...

CHAPTER5:

Jodha hugs jalal..& says I am very sorry.. really I don't know that u didn't slept last night.y u didn't tell me before only..I hate u when u hide something from me... Plz never do that... I am so sorry...Plz don't get mad on me.. Plz.. jalal..
Jalal breaks the hug... wipes her tears...& says... hey angel plz stop crying... y u r taking this much serious..
Whatever may be the situation I will never get mad on u angel... I didn't tell u becoz dad told me to do that report in 2 days.. we are going to trip So I don't want to trouble dad.. so I did in the night itself.. I wanted to tell u but u know na angel u don't like I stay up to late night... u usually sleep by 9:30pm... thats y I didn't told u.&. I came down to tell u this but u didn't listned me... its ok angel.. leave it.. r u fine now??? Did u ate or not???
Jodha... I am so sorry... I don't want...
Jalal keeps his palm on jodha lips & says angel never say sorry to me.. Plz..
Jodha... ok jalal... I had snacks... Plz sit with me jalal.. I don't want sit with Surya Plz jalal... I want to sleep for sometime...
Jalal...ok angel I will sit with u only...& u can sleep.. smiles...
All the students are getting in the bus.. bus started moving again..
Jodha comes back & sits with jalal.. & says... jalal tell to Surya that I am sleeping... I don't like to sit with him I wanted to say to him but u always stops me... but now I don't want to listen u ok
na..
Jalal smiles ok.. u sleep angel.. I will warn him this time ok na...
Both smiles.. jo watches Surya... he is coming Near to them... so she pretends like sleeping on jalal shoulder..jalal laughs seeing his angel antics...
Surya came & asks jalal to getup but jalal says. Surya look angel is sleeping.. I hate if someone disturb her sleep.. so better u go sit somewhere...
Surya know about jalal.. he tolarate anything about himself but when the matter is about jodha nobody can handle him.. so surya says ok.&. goes front.. don't have another option sits with ruks... they both didn't like each other at all...but sits...

Jodha sleeps on jalal shoulder & thinks...

Jodha pov:
What is this? Y I am feeling very happy when I hug jalal. Is it becoz of my love towards him. I can stay in his arms forever. Oh god when jalal stopped me by his hand I was on Cloud nine.. first time he touched me like that & blushes... oh jodha control urself...don't exite this much... u have to fight for ur love.. still I
don't know jalal loves me or not.. I need to know that... & oh god mom ... how she reacts if I Said I love jalal.. & chuckles...
Hmmm... jodha hold on... first Njoy ur time with jalal now... she holds his hand & jalal whatever may happens but I will never leave ur hand.. I will stay with u only jalal... & drifts to sleep...
End of pov...

Jalal pov:
Angel y u cried that much.. I hate tears in ur eyes.. I always wanted ur smile angel... really u r angel to my life.. I will never leave ur hand...I will be with u only till my last breath.. oh god y I kept my hand on her lips...if angel takes wrong... ??? But she is my angel..She won't take me bad.. I know that.. she is my angel... what I said my angel... oh god I need to control myself.. day by day I am getting more towards her.. but my heart is not listening..I don't know what this feeling... but I am addicted to her... she is my life.. I can't see tears in her eyes...
Oh god plz keep my angel always happy... I don't know what I feel for her... but I don't want to hurt my angel... May be I like her more... so I will keep all things aside... now I will Njoy my life with my angel...
End of pov.
Jalal also sleeps while holding her hand...

Soon bus came to lonawala by noon 3:00 pm.
All goes to respected rooms... to fresh up...in the evening all gathered to have a gala time... everyone playing antyakshari...
Shariff also in the same college.. he had bad intention on jodha.. but he behaves very nicely with jodha.. jalal didn't like this at all... he keeps on saying don't talk much with him.. keep distance..
Jodha says ok but she can't refuse because shariff always acts good in front of Her. So he is just friend to her... not close Frd..
He come near to jodha & sits with her.. start chatting... jalal also beside her on her other side... every body is enjoying..

Shariff... Hai jodha...
Jodha..Hai shariff...
Shariff... hey jodha do u know... my native is here only... here sweaters are very special.. do u want to buy jodha...
Jodha thinks for a while... & says... really... oh wow... then I want to buy for my jalal... but I don't know where I get them..
Shariff...oh jodha I am there to help u..We will go now jodha... u can buy for him.. we will go by auto from here... while return I will ask my dad to send the car.. we can come back by 8:00 pm ... jodha... no problem... I am ur Frd... u can trust me... surely jalal will like it... u can surprise him also...
Jodha thinks for a while... & asks r u sure Shariff... we will come back by 8:00 pm... other wise jalal will kill me... he doesn't like to go out without him...he cares for me alot...so...
Shariff ... yes jodha... I promise u.we will back soon... ok let's go then...
Jodha ...ok wait... I will inform jalal then..
Shariff... oh jodha if u tell him... it won't be surprise any more...
Jodha.. yeah... ok... I will tell jalal that I am getting headache..&.I wanted to sleep...
Shariff...ok...
Jodha... jalal I am getting little headache... I will sleep for sometime in my room... I think I am tired with this journey...
Jalal... oh god angel... did I call the doctor angel... or should I bring the tablet?? Should I massage ur hair... u can sleep on my lap angel...
Jodha...no jalal...I am fine.. don't call for doctor..u know I hate medicine...plz jalal I will take some rest in my room... plz... try to understand me... don't worry... I will be fine in 2 hours..I just want to take some nap... we will have our dinner together..

Jalal...ok as u wish angel... but should I come to ur room & stay for sometime..

Jodha...no jalal... I will go with salima...ok na bye...

Jodha goes with salima... & tells her that she is going for jalal to buy sweater... with Shariff...
Salima says ok...but be careful... I know about jalal... he can't stay up to that much time without seeing u... so come Soon jodha...

Jodha says ok...
Jodha & Shariff goes to shop& buy a beautiful offwhite colour sweater for jalal... returns to their hotel by Shariff car...
The place is little isolated... Shariff stops the car..
Jodha... hey Shariff what happened y u stopped the car...
Shariff...nothing jodha ... I think car got some trouble... & gets down to see...
Jodha sits in the car only...She is little bit scared...

Meanwhile jalal goes to jodha room but didn't find her... asks salima about this.. salima can't lie to him... so she says she went with Shariff...
Jalal was he'll shocked with this... what r u saying salima? U know na about Shariff... how u allowed her to go with him:? That to without telling me... where they went... ?
Salima... I don't know jalal..I think near to this place only. She wants to buy something... & may be...
Jalal didn't listened her... he runs from there...
He borrowed some body bike from the hotel... & went to search for jodha...
Meanwhile Shariff came near jodha... & says to her that car is not working jodha... I called to my dad to send some mechanic... we have to wait here to till he comes...
Jodha was really scared... she didn't like the way Shariff looking at her.. she covered herself with her dupatta... I think we can go to hotel by walk Shariff... & gets down to walk...
Shariff don't want too lose this time... so he holds her hand.. drags her...Jodha fell on his chest & shocked with this sudden act of his.. & how dare u to hold me. ??: leave my hand Shariff.. she was going to give a slap to him..but Shariff holds her hand & says oh jodha how poor u are... I am not a fool too lose this golden opportunity... i had my eyes on u from the first day of our college... I was acting u nicely to get u only...u r the fool to believe me... starts sucking her neck...
Jodha jerks him... runs away from him...
But Shariff catches her...

Precap.: jalal gave a tight slap to her...

Jalal kisses jodha very hardly... oh jalal don't torcher me like this.. make me urs ... plz jalal...
Angel angel...


Sorry for mistakes... I hope it's worthy reading... plz like it...
Thanks all.. love u all...

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Posted: 9 years ago
#83
Res.
I liked this version of jalal too 😉
He is so nice and caring dear
I loved their POV's
They both love each other but fear to tell each other
Aww jalal doesn't like tears on her eyes 😊
Sahrifff 😡😡
Hope jalal reaches on time
Interesting precap
Update soon
Thanks for scrap 😉
Edited by avika444 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#84
So MU got cleared between joja .. Lovely bonding 😛... Jodha slept on jalu shoulder ignoring surya😆 ... Sharifu ..😡 .. Precap awesome .. Update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#85
wow really beautiful yaar you are giving love , scare and emotions wounderful thank you for pm dear.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#86

WOW!!DIII
ur jalal is really very cute n caring...
jodha slept on jalal's shoulder😆😉...
tht shariif m gonna kill him😡...
hope jalal reaches there on time...
pllzzz agla update jldiii de dena...
itna interesting precap pd k rha ni ja ra😆...
awesome diii...😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wonderful chapter di plz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#88

kheeen to unresss krdooo🤣...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#89
Superb update n nxt sn thnxx for pm dr
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Posted: 9 years ago
#90
Nice... Too good... Jalal so caring... And jodha didnt get shariff... Loved it...

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